Re: Adopt me

Postby Mozzie » Thu May 10, 2012 12:01 am

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Re: Adopt me

Postby Emma-Chan » Thu May 10, 2012 3:17 am

gah! its beautiful XD i wish i could try out but i have Ishanue good luck everyone
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Re: Adopt me

Postby Starlight109 » Thu May 10, 2012 8:23 am

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WoI Name:
Yukino
This name poped out of my mind, it means i belive from a story. I think when i saw this baby girl I thought she was a dreamy. And she is its as if she poped out of a fantasy story. I love her and will defiantly try hard for her.
Gender:
Female

Likes:
Men
Ladies (She's bi)
Fooling around
Running through the blue grass in the rain - to slide through the mud and puddles
Protecting
Friends
pups- Thier fun loving like her

Dislikes:
Chimera's/ Kronadors
unkind people
strict parents- though she misses her own
Strict people in general
blood
death
(That's about it she's a loving person)

Story:
I'm a tomboy, I love to get down and get dirty whenever the chance comes by. No care for how my fur looks, it can stay dirty for all I care. So anyway I think I could say that besides being a tomboy I’m let’s see I could possibly be brave though make me angry at all and you'll see just how brave I can be. Ah what else....loyal maybe to certain people. I don't trust others too easily. I don't like to get close to people. Getting too close could equal to heart break in the future. That's what happened to my parents, Zilla and Danious. I don't remember much about them. Whenever I even try to imagine their faces I can't because they've been dead since I was a pup. How you may ask? Well that's not really a question. Come on think for a bit, as far as we all know W.o.i don't attack and kill others of their kind. Well maybe attack because of jealousy and what not, but kill rarely. So what other possible choice? Killed by their own prey, hah no. So that just leaves the Chimeras or Kronadors. Yeah, those nasty horse/reptile monsters, one of those horrible creatures took the life of my parents.....right in front of my eyes.

(Years ago when Yukino was just a pup)

"Mom, Dad that's not fair!" A young Yukino wined to her parents. Yukino's black, grey, white and reddish fur coat was caked in mud. She had disobeyed her parent’s command and went out in the rain to play in the puddles that were left. One may ask big deal so what she's just a pup. Well her parents were strict. Disobeying them for even something so simple was a definite no no. They were preparing her for her future. They pretended to be the alpha wolves to her and everybody knows you don't disobey the alphas. Still their punishment seemed a bit harsh. She was to stay in the dens for an entire three days because of her actions. Yukino didn't think it was fair so stood up to her parents to speak her mind.

But it didn't seem that the two liked that idea. Yukino's father stood tall and proud, his name was Danious. He was a respected warrior along with his mate Zilla. They both wanted Yukino to become a warrior later on in life. Yukino disagreed with them. The idea sounded cool to her but didn't seem to be for her. She rather protect everyone out there from behind the lines so if anything went wrong she could possible charge in if needed. "You get what you deserve Yukino" Danious's deep voice rang through the room they were in.

Then Yukino heard yelling ringing through the tunnels. It sounded distress and panicked. Yukino pricked up her ears to hear better "The Kronadors! The Kronadors!" the voice cried out. Kronadors? Yukino hadn't learned much about them yet, she was too young to understand very much. Though in simple words Kronadors were bad, bad to the bone! Yukino watched as her parents scurried out of the room to help out with the problem. Which left poor little Yukino all alone. Should I stay or follow? Yukino thought as she just stared at the spot her parents disappeared into. Yukino had been told to stay, yet as a pup she had been known to be a troublemaker. This wasn't one of her non-trouble making days so ran after them to at least watch the fight. Yukino had explored the tunnels and rooms of her home since she'd been able to walk. So she had really no trouble finding her way out of the moutains.

Yukino looked up at the sky, its always dark with dazzeling stars to light up the world bellow. She shakes her head, she wasn't out here to star gaze or whatever. She looked back to the ground, their was a full blown battle going on between the W.o.i and the Chimera creatures. By the looks of it Yukino's kind was winning. A rusty and horrible smell came to Yukino's nose. She gagged slightly and looked around for the source. She took one look to her right and regreted it, a dead Kronador. Its piercing yellow eyes stared at her with no life in them. How did I miss that before? Yukino thought as she backed away from it.

Yukino wondered around the battlefield looking for her parents. She stayed hidden as not to be seen from others of her pack or the enemy. About five minutes into her search she found them side by side trying to take down a giant chimera. Its Its dark green body and silver hair were coated red with its own blood. Looking at Yukino's parents they seemed fine a couple of scratches here and there but their dazeling armor blocked most of the damage that could have been done. Yukino watched as Zilla and Danious battled the beast and minutes later brought it down. Yukino was amazed, that wasn't something a pup saw everyday. She was so amazed she forgot about hiding in the tall blue grass and rocketed over to her parents crying out "Momma, Poppa!"

Zilla and Danious turned around in surprise, their daughter was obviously not suppose to be here. But before they could reply back the suppose deafed Chimera they just brought down shot up and dug its fangs into Danious. Yukino's mom tried to help her mate but she too was caught by the Chimera its talons slashed down and dug into Zilla's stomach. Yukino froze in fear, her breathing grew faster as she watched the horror infront of her. Blood, blood everywhere. Danious hung limp in the jaws of the Chimera. His armor had been penatrated by its sharp teeth. Danious was a goner. Zilla didn't look much better, the talons had sunk into her stomach were hardly anything protected it. Both of Yukino's parents were gone...."NOOOOO!" Yukino cried out.......

(Back to the present)

Everything had been a blur after I watched them die, the next thing I knew i was crying my heart out into a fellow pack mate's fur. I don't want to remember that day. I wished I had forgoten about it over the years. I forgot what my parents looked like so why not that day? Maybe because it was a tragety that infected my life big time. I wasn't really infected emotionaly. Yeah I was sad for a long time but i'm still me. Though i don't cause trouble to much anymore. My parents would have wanted that at least. Months later I became an apprentice and later after training and making my own armor I became a scout/guard. I couldn't become a warrior. It brings too many memories of my parents. Memories of what they wanted me to be. Sorry mom, dad but I just couldn't do it. I'll serve my pack a different way. I'll protect them from the Kronador's but, just in a different way.

The End (For now anyway)

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3 things about Woi:

These warriors live in a land that is beautiful but never peaceful. Their enemies are chimera a horse/reptile like creature also known as the Kronadors. Both groups are at almost constant war trying to defeat the other and win over the land.

At one point in a W.O.I's life they must create their own armor. Travel to this cave deep in the old forest of Isket. The armor there was made by humans over about 8,000 years ago. Humans have went exctinct during that time, the armor is always special but must have a back plate and a chest plate.

The dens are in the redish moutains. It seems like a normal cave but inside its a network of tunnels and rooms of all sorts. The mountains are made of a special mineral that will not erode away. The W.o.i chose this place to live because they can see their enemies coming thanks to the high elevation.

What forms could an Woi have?:
Thier always hybrid big wolves though they can have long ears with a fluffy tail, normal ears with a long tail, normal ears with a normal but round end tail, then short ears with a curly tail like this here girl.
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Re: Adopt me

Postby teleport » Thu May 10, 2012 11:07 am

Oops, accidentally pressed quote instead of edit. Ignore me.
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Re: Adopt me

Postby chlloé » Thu May 10, 2012 11:08 am

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Senshireta

Postby shibuki » Fri May 11, 2012 8:12 am

Wow...

at fist this design didn't catch my eye but then when I looked at it closer...

well let's just say this

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戦士-壊れた
Senshireta
Ƨɛиƨнιяɛтα
{sen}-{shee}-{reeta}
The name Senshireta is a mix between the two Japanese words, Senshi {Warrior} and Kowareta {Broken}
Her full name translates to Broken Warrior {Senshireta}

Nicknames

Senshi
Sen

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♀Female♀

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Her personality has changed over the course of time, and was much more cheerful as a pup. However, she became more isolated and when the gossip started she became much more lonely. However, she is not "emo goth wolfy" and still has a few friends. She is not hated by all, and even though there is gossip and some teasing, she still lives on her life. She is slightly serious, and is always persisting to be better.

+ P o s i t i v e +

Loyal

Sen will stick with her friends and family all her life, and will never leave their side. However, she understands personal space and doesn't invade your... "bubble" so-to-speak

Smart

Senshi is very intelligent, and has knowledge on many subjects, but is not a genius in any terms. She has slightly above average intelligence, but just slightly. She does have a lot of common sense however.

Serious

Senshi does not tolerate much fooling around, and would prefer to do her work than play. However, she is open to some fun once in a while with her friends

Independant

Even though she is loyal, she also prefers to do things on her own. She would much rather work single than have a partner.

- N e g a t i v e -

Lonely

She has few friends, however she does not show this emotion often and usually forgets it's there. However when she remembers it, it does show

Sensitive

Many often mistake her for a male, in which she dislikes. She is very sensitive about that matter, and does as much as she can to look feminine

Stubborn

Unfortunatly, she always acts like she has to win, even when she loses. She is too stubborn to accept the fact that she can lose, and is constantly showing this with her rival Mink {Owned by sunny.corgi}

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♥Likes+Dislikes♥

Likes

• Roses
• Work
• Friends
• Training

Dislikes

• Being called a boy
• Being masculine
• Gossip
• Loud noises

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♥Relationships♥

I have permission from these users to use these WOI

Mink (sunny.corgi) Rival
Celandia (【 ➹ SWALLOW ➹ 】) Friend
Lyra (Wolves Run Free) Friend/Half Rival

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Senshi - 11 Months old

"I didn't MEAN it!" I snapped.
"If you didn't MEAN it, why did you do it?" My father retorted, flicking his tail in anger.
I gave a slight whimper and glanced behind me sheepishly. "But..."
"You KILLED her Senshi" My father growled again.
"I didn't MEAN IT!" I yelled again, stamping my paw.

. . .

The moon was so bright that fateful night. The moonlight shone through the cave entrance and softly stroked my pelt. Staring up at the sky, the wind flowing through my fur... It was almost like being in heaven. My father smiled at me and gave me the same lecture I recieved for several days. "I am VERY busy today, so please... PLEASE be nice and don't cause trouble."
I grinned and rolled my eyes at him.
"Yeah dad, I know, I know." I chuckled. He gave me a grin and licked my ear.
"Good girl" He said and turned away.
I rolled my eyes at my father and turned to go do what I needed.

I lay around with my friend Celandia, and we just talked. It was a lazy day and we were chatting about life. "My father is going to ask Evianna to be his mate today." I said, nonchalantly.
"Really?" Celandia gasped, "That's awesome for him!”
"Yeah, I suppose" I muttered, dragging my paw in the dirt.
"What do you mean?" Celandia asked, a worried look on her face.
"Well, it's just that it seems that Evianna is just using my father. I don't think she really loves him" I grumbled.
Celandia rolled her eyes. "Sen, you are being SO paranoid" She giggled.
I grinned and gave her a poke with my muzzle. "Oh hush" I laughed. "Yeah, it does seem stupid. Who can't love my father?"
"Well..." Celandia laughed.
"Hey!" I yelled and gave her another sharp poke.
"Just KIDDING!" She loudly giggled. We both laughed again, sending some other warriors to stare at u in a strange manner. After a bit, I heard a faint yelp. I got up and listened by ear to the sound. Letting out a yelp myself, I saw a kronador coming towards a small pup. I hesitated for a moment, knowing I was no match for a kronador. But my brain rushed and I leapt forwards onto the back of the Kronador. It gave a squawk and fell to the ground for a moment. I snatched the pup up in my jaws and dashed away. The kronador growled as he stood up, hissed and slashed into my haunches with his claws. I clamped my jaws down in pain, and then heard a sickening crunch then a yelp. My eyes widened and I gulped. Blood dripped down my muzzle and I gagged on the salty taste in my mouth. I placed the pup on the ground. The limp body didn't move. The light from its eyes were gone. A tear rolled down from my wide eyes and I gasped.
"Senshi?" My father asked, popping up behind me. I gulped and quickly turned to face him.
"Dad?" I whimpered.
"What... have you done?" He whispered.
"Dad, it was an accident"
"How could killing a pup be an accident?"
My ears flattened against the back of my head. "But... Dad!" I whimpered.
"SHUT UP" He yelled. "LOOK WHAT YOU DID."
"I didn't MEAN it!" I snapped.
"If you didn't mean it, why did you do it?" My father retorted, flicking his tail in anger.
I gave a slight whimper and glanced behind me sheepishly. "But..."
"You KILLED her Senshi" My father growled again.
"I didn't MEAN IT!" I yelled again, stamping my paw. I gave a loud sniff and dashed away from my father.
"COME BACK HER SENSHIRETA" He howled, and ran after me. I dashed past Celandia, who gave me a strange look.
"Sen, what's wrong?" She worriedly asked. I just shook my head and ran by.
My father came barreling up to me, getting closer and closer. Why did I think I could outrun him, that was stupid? He was much older and stronger than me. Ramming his shoulder into me, he knocked me to the ground. I let out a yelp and lowered immediately. Father snarled and bit my neck, not enough to draw blood, but it sure hurt. I whimpered and pushed myself farther into the dirt. He grabbed the scruff lf my neck and pulled me to my feet, but would not let go. I whined loudly and shook my head.
"I'm taking you to Rayos; we will talk about your punishment with him. He snarled through clenched teeth. I whined again, but walked with him, head hung low. Celandia ran up to me and attempted to start talking, but Father gave a wicked snarl at her. She flattened her ears back and backed away without another word. I wiped my muzzle in the dirt, attempting to get the blood off but most stayed on. It was shameful. It looked unnatural.

Rayos looked down on me as I stood before him. "What did this little boy do?" He asked. A twinge of hatred fled through my eyes, but I prevented myself from attacking him. I was already in enough trouble.
"I'm a girl sir..." I mumbled.
"Oh..." He muttered. "Still, what?"
"My father explained, and Rayos was silent. Then he asked out of the blue "Where did those scars come from?"
I touched my eye with my paw and explained quietly.

. . . . .

The wind whistled through the leaves, the sound ringing in my ears. I also heard something else. The sound that a Chimera usually makes as it slinks through the grass. I gasped and crouched down, my ears flattening back, terrified. The chimera slinked out of the brush and looked around.
He snickered and started towards me. I braced myself for the attack but he just went right past me. The chimera tagged a smaller female one hiding in the bushes and laughed. I figured that he had not seen me, they were just playing. I was so small compared to them; I hadn’t realized ‘till then that we were all the same age. The female giggled and made sounds that sounded slightly like counting. The male started to run away, but his leg came down on my head, a claw digging into my eye.

A scream escaped my mouth and the chimera looked down at me. I knew I was in BIG trouble. He grinned and leaned down, ripping into my ear, then ran away chuckling. I never knew that anyone could be so cruel. I lay on the grass, staining the ground red. I had no other choice but to keep going until I found help. Standing up weakly, I whimpered and trudged slowly forwards. My face burned with pain, I couldn’t see out of the eye that was stomped on, and blood dripped down my muzzle. I walked for a while, not getting any farther than a mile, and when I couldn’t take it anymore, I fell to the ground and blacked out.

. . . . .

"So that is how that happened" I finished. Rayos gave me a look and nodded his head. "This is your only warning Senshireta. You will be under watch and if you do ONE more bad thing, you will be exiled." I let out a squeal of glee and fell to the ground.
"ThankyouThankyouThankyou!" I yelped, nuzzling his feet. Rayos gave me an expressionless look and turned away. My father gave me a glare and turned away.
But I was still here. Left by my father, but still here.

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Senshi - 2 months old

I sat, waiting impatiently as my dad paced back and forth. He kept glancing at the cave entrance and whining. I just rolled my eyes and rolled over onto my back. I pawed at a butterfly that flittered by. I rolled back over and stalked it after it landed on the blue grass. I leapt onto it and closed my mouth around it. Bleh. I spit it out. It fluttered it's slobbery wings, shaking drops everywhere. I laughed and turned my head away to avoid getting it in my eyes. When it was... mostly dry, it darted away. I attempted to chase it, but Dad gave me 'the look' and I stopped. My uncle, who always was amazing at medical things, padded our of the caves and smiled. "She will live" He nodded. My fathers face lit up like the butterfly.
"Really?" He gasped, darting into the cave. I got up and followed. I looked around the cavernous tunnels until I heard the soft voice of my mother. I padded into the 'room' and walked over to my mother, who was lying on a bed of foliage with my father sitting next to her. She kindly looked at me. I smiled back and licked my face.
"Your going to live!" I yipped. She nodded her head. My dad smiled and nuzzled her. She licked him back. I pushed under my mom's paws. We played for a bit until my father nosed me out of the exit and told me to run home. I nodded and did just that. I had no siblings. Just my father and mother. Later that night, when all the warriors would be asleep, I waited for my father. He hadn't come home yet. It was getting way too late. I walked back to the cave where they were. All I heard was crying. I burst into the room, worried at what I might see. My mother wasn't moving and my father was laying next to her, tears streaming down his face. He looked up at me and shook his head.
"She's... Gone" He sniffed.
"What? No!" I yelped. I ran over to her and grabbed at her ear, pulling at it. "NO, NO, NO!" I cried. "Wake up! Wake... Up..." Tears flowed down my face, splashing onto the ground. "Momma. Momma, no." I whimpered, burying my face in her fur. The stupid disease had taken her from me. I lay there, with my parents, never wanting to leave her. But I knew I would have to sometime.

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Senshi - 1 year and 3 months old


Warriors muttered as I walked past. I had killed a pup. Gossip spreads fast, and warriors talk about me behind my back. A pup killer. Someone to call a scapegoat. I just shrugged it off usually. I wasn't all alone, I had my friends. Many tolerated me, but others turn their backs. I'm not hated, I'm not some lonely gothic emo wolf. But stil, my life is difficult. I'm pretty strong, so I am respected, but not powerful enough to be thought of an amazing warrior. I'm... average. But it's often not the fact I killed a pup that fends people off. It's my personality. I may be nice, but I prefer to train hard and work hard. Along with Lyra and Celandia, it's all I have left. But I still padded past them, ignoring them completely. I gazed across the field of carnage. My bright eyes glittered as I stepped over a white furred body lying on the ground. My paws were dappled with the dark red of the enemies’ blood. As my fur blew in the wind, I said "We may have lost this battle, but many more are to come. Come out you cowards. Face me, or are you as scared as your horrible leader" After the harsh words escaped my muzzle, two young, but still a little older than me, bloody chimeras stepped from the shadow of the altar. They were small, and one was had a bandage wrapped around his left leg. The other was missing part of her ear. The bandaged one growled to the other. The other curled her lip and growled back. I frowned and said "Tell your leader that even though you have won this, it’s not over. Rayos shall call for the best of the best and we shall overcome your army... And if they don't think of us as a threat. Tell them that we will never stop until every one of your kind is eradicated for good! Now leave!" And with that, I lashed my claws out at the battered comrades. They both leapt up and ran away. Success.
But even that didn't help at all.
My own father dislikes me. He turns his back on me and nearly never looks me in the eyes. When he does, his eyes are full of malice and hatred. He tells me that he still loves me, but I can tell that those words are not the truth.

My father used to always say to me "I will always love you my little Senny"

Little did he know that he was wrong. He hated me now. Oh Dad, where did your words go?

Senshi - 5 months

I caught her eyes and gave her a glare

The black pup gave me a skirk and laughed. "HA! I beat you, silly baby pup."
I growled, and said "It's not my fault you cheated!"
"I DIDN'T CHEAT"
"YES YOU DID"
"NO YOU CHEATED"
"YOU CHEATED"
"YOU CHEATED"
"YOU CHEATED"
"GIRLS" A warrior yelled "BE QUIET"
We quietly growled at each other and went back to wrestling. "Give up Mink" I growled
"Never" She hissed. "BACK FLIP" She yelled and used her head to flip my over her back. I landed on my back with a thud.
"Owww" I whined. I stood up, and shook the dirt out of my fur. Then I tackled her, and pinned her on her back. She kicked me with her back legs and we went tumbling down the grassy hill. We both landed apart from eachother, Mink doing a face plant into the dirt and me on my back with my hind legs in the air. We both gave a moan and stood up. I shook the dirt from my fur, and Mink used her paw to rub the earth from her face. I gave a side look to her, then leapt around and tackled her, pinning her to the ground. "I win this time" I giggled, stepping off her.
"But... uh... uhhhhh... YOU CHEATED!"

Her death story. SHE DOES NOT DIE FOR A LONG TIME, SHE IS NOT GOING TO DIE WHILE I OWN HER, IT IS JUST AN INTERESTING STORY. WARNING: VERY VERY BLOODY

95% completed, but I think it's mostly done.

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Senshi wrote:My life is one big joke.


Senshi wrote:I know what it's like to lose a loved one. I don't want anyone to miss me longer than they need to. Otherwise, wouldn't I have killed myself by now?


Senshi wrote:I am black and white in this world of
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Who I'd be
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On my Own
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Boy like that
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♥3 things about Woi♥

• Their main rivals are chimera's who are a mix of horse and reptile.
• The armor had been made from Humans 8,000 years ago, since then there have been no humans in Isket they became extinct due to the evolution the other animals had gone through.
• The Dens appear to be normal caves but once inside it's a huge network of rooms and tunnels.

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♥What forms could an Woi have?♥

"A warrior of isket could be a big wolf with Normal ears, Long ears or really Short ears and 3 other different tails as well."

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Re: Adopt me

Postby the.kitsune.prince » Fri May 11, 2012 8:49 am

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Re: Adopt me

Postby Reine Des Loups » Fri May 11, 2012 10:00 am

Username: iceeon
WoI Name: Xevia
Gender: Female
Personality:
Xevia is a noble wolf who would never let anybody down.
Xevia tries her best to help the pack, although sometimes she can make bad decisions. For example, once Xevia decided to go alone on a border patrol. Well; that wasn't a very good choice because she almost lost her life.
Xevia sometimes doesn't think through things, or listens to what she wants to hear and thats it. Lets say Rayo was talking to her. " You are a strong fighter, go on the border patrol with somebody" well, Xevia would hear only the " Your a strong fighter " part on somedays.
Since Xevia is older and knows she can be a little ignorant, she faces her small punishments with ease.
Xevia can be a sucker for innocence, however. Say a irritated Teenie offended somebody and Xevia was about to punish him. Well, if the teenie just struck innocence the right way it melts Xevia.
Xevia can be strict, and when i say strict I mean strict.
All except for innocence cant phase Xevia, which means she holds fast to her punishments.
This is somewhat the opposite of her deceased sister Gyeana; who was goofy, immature, and somewhat silly and whiny.

Story:
Chapter One:
Adrenaline fills the air along with the twang of excitment. Rancid smells of fear rot the air, plagueing anything related to confidence. I shuffle my paws, and discover they are hard as rocks. Jitters, probably. I tense as a wolf steps up to me, but then I relax as I realize its Gyeana, my sister. She sees my paws; stiff as stones and rolls her eyes. I snort and scowl at her. After a while whispers begin to break out. " Is Rayo ever going to say to move forward ?" Asks one impatient warrior who probably has zero respect. " Ugh, Soraya can do better " Im about to break out into a fit when Rayo speaks up. " All of you have known we are going to attack the Kronodars who have murdered far to many . We shall move forward immediatly. Please single-file." We side-step into a large line, and I end up with Gyeana two behind me, Darzek behind me, and Oddiseu in front. " Nervous?" Darzek asks with a cheeky smile; and I return it with a scowl. At Rayo's command we begin to walk behind him as we make our ways to the camp of these muderous beasts. By the time we reacht he area of the Kronodars camp stars arch across the sky, glittering mockingly in the cold air. I stop and snort as I notice Gyeana has a Glow Butterfly on her tail and nose. I flick my tail as the apparent camp of the Kronodar's comes in sight. Really? This place is as lifeless as clouds. Either Rayo got it wrong or the Kronodars had a good job on cleaning the place up. As I prod around some shrubs to find some evidence I find something that makes me gag. And evidence all right. A decomposing wolf.
Chapter Two:
Gyeana and I move silently through the forest, accompanied by Oddiseu and Darzek. We were sent to find the Kronodars; and if able; to kill them. I swear I can even see the kill adrenaline coursing through Gyeana's fur. Oddiseu stops, and I find myself stamping my feet impatiently as he waits a considerably long time. " They once have been here " The answer is so annoying it is the best I can do not to clamp my teeth on his tail. I turn to see Gyeana is giving Oddiseu a dirty look. I cant help but saying a nast comment. Sometimes Oddiseu can tick me off, although Im not sure why. " Can you give us a reasonable answer Oddiseu?" I snap. He turns, scowls at me, turns up his nose, and points westward with his snout. " I belive they are there " Oddiseu snarls. I keep pace next to Gyeana and Darzek as a cluster of creaky willows comes into sight. I notice a small flicking behind a preferably large clump of shrubs. I tense. " I think their over here " I whisper softly. Oddiseu bares his teeth in a silent snarl, indicating that the Kronodars are residing there. My lips are just forming the word ' attack ' when Gyeana charges forward and her blood splatters my face.
Chapter Three:
A dawn light fills my eyes, overflowing my heart with joy. I am marveling my surrodings when I realize I am floating on a large cloud. I am pondering this when Gyeana, softly glowing steps forward. Her lips contract into a smile and i have to stifle a yelp of joy. " Xevia I am always with you." She says softly." Its all my fault you died " I whimper, and hang my head low. Suddenly Gyeana seems to be enveloped in fire, and her voice is fierce. " No it was my fault. Stop it you sorry dog " I am stunned by Gyeana's feriocity. The fire dies and Gyeana gives an assent nod before bursting into Butterbirds that peck at me until I wake up. As the real world seeps into my vision an unwanted dissapointment fills my heart. But Gyeana's words ring in my ears. " Xevia I am Always with you " And these soft words are what keep me going.

Chapter Four:
My Armor feels heavy on my shoulders, and for A moment I think Mardelius's spirit chose A bad type of armor for me.
A sharp piece of armor digs into my side, and momentarily I paw at it. I lay at the entrance to my den in the dawnlight, keeping watch as the rest of camp sleeps. The ornate jewels on my helmet swing back and forth like a pendalum. I am just being brought into its trance when A splash interupts the dawning silence. I jerk my head upright, and look around quickly. I am just begining to yowl a alarm when two glowing neon green eyes pierce the light.A sad no doubt, this is the one that killed Gyeana.

Chapter Five:
I put every ounce of muscle into finding that dang espace hole in the back of my den. I scramble around in a frenzy, ignoring the hated feeling of claws skidding on rocks. I can feel the piercing of those neon eyes as they bore through my skin. I shudder as I discover the escape hole, then squeeze through it. The air feels crammed with the sharp stench of Kronodar and blood.
I cough and stumble my way to the nearest den, and yell the words as loud as I can muster in this filthy air. " Kronodar Attack!" I make out. The wolf wakes in shock then howls a howl that could shake a mountain. Almost immediatly a clump of warriors faces the Kronodar, only to discover that the Kronodar has brought some kill buddies. I watch, in shock, as the huge kronodar that ruthlessly killed Gyeana snaps at Rayo. There is a spurt of blood and a scream. I just pray that it was the death cry of a Kronodar.
Blood litters the grass, and now the dawn doesn't seem peaceful at all. Suddenly, I regain my senses and am about to step forward with a battle cry when the Kronodar that killed Gyeana lifts me by the tail.

Chapter Six: One would think nothing could lift a curl tailed by the tail, well they were wrong. I atruggle fiercly with my paws, searching for some purchase. After a quick, blinded scan over the ground, I find a small rock,lodged into the ground. I hook my claws around it, and with all the force I can muster, thrust my hind paws onto the ground. There is a rip, and I whip around to discover a huge portion of fur has been ripped out. The pain is horrid but I thrust it to the back of my mind. The Kronodar, clearly confused; holds a mouthful of fur. Without thinking I brace myself and leap at the Kronodar's back, and land squarely on it. The Kronodar roars in outrage, snapping just inches from my muzzle. I sink my claws deep into the tough skin, and bite down, hard. A small stream of blood erupts from the Kronodars neck. I turn around slowly, using my tail for balance on this wobbly Kronodar. I look for the right place and bite. There is a sickening crack. I have popped its spine.

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3 things about Woi: A big wolf hybrid-
Have five types-
They live in the land of Isket.-

What forms could an Woi have?:
Big Wolf with long ears and a long fluffy tail.
Big wolf with normal ears and a long tail.
Big wolf with noraml ears and a normal (round ended) tail
Big wolf with short ears and a curled tail. ( Xevia's Type )
They CANNOT be anything un-woi like.
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Re: Adopt me

Postby SubtleBurn03 » Fri May 11, 2012 10:02 am

Oh she's very pretty ^^ perhaps I'll try for her.

Username:
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WoI Name:
Safiyah
Gender:
Female
Personality
Safiyah is a very civil and loves to help. She tries to be thankful for the things she has instead of moping about the things that she can't have (except for when it comes to her parents). She's very sweet and kind and loves to play whenever she gets the chance. She usually doesn't act silly around people she don't know, instead she'd rather play with her good friends and act nice and dignified around stranger people. She doesn't like to show off, but she does like to be the center of attention once in a while. She is quite intelligent and likes to strategize before doing things. She fears losing her loved ones so she is extremely faithful and loyal. If you told her a secret there is no chance at all that she would tell it. She would fight to the death for you if that's what needed to be done. She does like to make friends but there might be only one or two people that she truely trust and and will vent to whenever she is having problems. That uptight, serious look you might find on her face? It's a shell, a shield. Inside she is playful as a puppy and just afraid to show it. Get to know her and she'll open up to you like a book.
Likes
-Friends
-Wrestling
-Kind people
-Being able to act like herself
-Having fun
-Sometimes fighting
-Hunting
-Food
-Living like her parents would want her to
-Telling stories
-Puppies!

Dislikes
-Kronadors
-Rudeness
-People repeating themselves
-Being yelled at
-Being surrounded by people she don't know
-Whenever people gloat
-Being overpowered
-Being ignored

Story:
"Since birth my mother and father wanted me to be a strong, proud warrior. When they were alive, and caught me slouching, my mother put her paw beneath my chin and gently propped me up, saying, 'Sit up and look proud, Safiyah'. Or when my daddy found me goofing off whenever I was supposed to be doing something he'd tap me and shake his head dissaprovingly. Whenever they did things like that I would always roll my eyes and huff. I regret doing so. Of course, they had always been great parents. They played with me, daddy would wrestle with me sometimes, they were kind, almost never yelling at me. They took great care of me. Never hurt me or made me cry. Or, never on purpose. I cried the day they died. It wasn't their fault. That day should never have happened and maybe it wouldn't have if it hadn't been for me. Would you mind if I tell you? I feel the need to vent. But please forgive me if I choke at times. It all started when I asked my mother if I could go outside.."
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I gave a big grin to my mother, careful to sit tall. If I slouched she would never let me go. Giving her a taste of approval might give me a chance, but I just couldn't keep my tail from wagging. "Please, Mommy?". Mother shook her head a few times. "Not now honey. I'll be busy soon and you know I don't want you out there all alone. You're much too small and young." I frowned and began to whine "But, mommy--". But of course she wouldn't stand for THAT. "No buts.". She gave me a stern look. "Maybe some other day Safiyah. Now be a good girl and run along.". She bent and gave me an affectionate nuzzle which I couldn't resist nuzzling her back, even if I was kinda upset . Then I did as I was told and ran off.
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"Now I never really disobeyed my parents. I did like to please them and see them happy with me. But I just could not understand why she wouldn't let me go. I was too naive to realize that she was right and I was way too little."
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But I didn't want to play around in the dens today. No, I wanted to run outside and prance through all that beautiful blue grass, I wanted to chase them bright fireflies and feel free for a day. So that's what I was gonna do.
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"At that time everyone knew me as a good girl-- Haa! What am I saying? Everybody still does. Me wandering around the dens was a very common sight. My parents thought that it was okay for me to run around and interact with everyone else because it was safe here. So no one was suspicious when they saw me walking around."
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I trotted through the caves and tunnels as if I weren't planning something. And no one gave me a second look. Ya know, just the occasional "Hello, Safiyah" from my fellow pack mates. Soon I was at the entrance/exit of the den. I gave my surroundings a quick peak before heading out of there.
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"Isket. That blue grass, those gorgeous red mountains, glistening white streams. Oh how proud I am to call this place my home. Whenever I was little it was great to run through that grass and laugh and play with my parents or other pups that were out there with us. I still like to have fun whenever I get the chance."
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Outside it was so beautiful. I could have stayed there forever. I joyfully bounded throught the tall grass, letting loose and just being my happy-go-lucky, fun loving self. I lost track of time, having lots of fun all by myself. This went on for quite a while. Little did I know.. I was being followed. I don't know how long that ugly thing had been after me. But I didn't notice at all until it almost too late. All it took was a small turn and I saw those bright green eyes, staring at me with devious intentions.
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"Before that day I'd only heard of Kronadors. I had seen one or two dead ones that the Warriors had shown us. Even then it was pretty scary looking to me. Well, you can't imagine how afraid I was when I saw a live one coming after me."
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Realizing it had been seen the Kronador sprang from it's stalking position and went after me. I immediatly gasped and turned, running as fast as my little legs could carry me. But I could feel the Kronador almost right on top of me. As I ran I noticed a tree. I quickly ducked into a hole inbetween a tangle of roots, moving as far back as I could. The Kronador wasn't giving up, it dug at the roots fiercly, reaching and clawing at me. All the while I cried and shrieked at the back of the hole. "Mommy! Daddy!" I screamed, kicking as I pushed at the roots, wishing that I would go farther back, away from those sharp teeth and claws.
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"Being trapped in that hole with that thing digging and getting closer and closer to me. It was a terrible thing to see. It may have been the scariest moment of my life... No. No, it wasn't. What happened next was the scariest moment of my life."
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Suddenly I heard a sharp snarl and a shrill shriek. I turned and saw that the Kronador was gone but the sound of a fight was clear outside. I poked my head out and both horror and relief struck me at once. There was my mother and father, attacking the chimera. But they weren't wearing their armour and already a few scratches could be seen over their pelts. But the Kronador was no better off, it's own blood coating it's mane and shining across it's scales. For a moment I was sure that they had a chance of winning. That was before another Kronador ran out of the grass. It took my father by the back of the neck and stepped on his back, pulling hard while he yelped and snarled and struggled against it's grip. With a jerk of the Kronador's head, there was a loud snap and then my father's limp body was dropped to the ground.
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"It all happened so fast and it put me in near shock. I was petrified for them both and watching my father die in such a cruel way was aweful and has scarred me for life."
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I stared, my eyes shining with tears. Now the two Kronadors were ganging up on my mother, toying with her. One would go in and take a bite at her and when she had her back turned the other would bite too. It went back and forth. It tortured me to watch but I couldn't take my eyes away. Finally one of the Kronadors snapped down on my mother's neck and dragged her to ground, holding her there while the other continued to claw at her body. Then I saw something coming through the grass.
No, not more of them, I thought, watching in horror. But no, here came a large ground of our warriors, all clad in magnificent armour. They ripped the monsters off of my mother, biting and tearing at them. Minutes later the Kronadors lay dead on the ground.
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"I was happy but so so sad at the same time. I was sad for obvious reasons. My father was dead, my mother was dying and I had just been through the scariest ordeal I'd ever witnessed. But I was happy because my mother had lived those next few minutes and I got to apologize and say goodbye."
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I scampered out of my shelter in the roots and ran to my barely breathing mother. I shook my head fearfully, looking down at her. "No.. No, no, no, no, please no." I licked at her face and squirmed close to her. "Mommy, please don't go. Daddy's gone, you have to get up." I whined softly. "I love you, please stay.." She looked at me with her beautiful golden eyes and with the softest expression you couldn't imagine. And when she spoke her voice was so weak. "I love you too, Safiyah. And, my dear, I can't stay. I'm sorry ." I whimpered, now both of our eyes were streaming tears. "Goodbye, sweetheart. Be a good girl for us." I stared down at her, shaking with fear. I couldn't believe she was actually going. "Y-y-yes, mommy. I-I-I'll be a good girl. G-goodbye.." And with her last bit of strength she gave me one of her most loving nuzzles. And she was gone. That's when I truely broke down. I cuddled into her neck and layed there and sobbed into her fur for what seemed like forever.
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"I could never forgive myself for what happened that day. For disobeying them. I look back now and I realize that I wouldhave changed everything if I could. I would have changed the way I acted, I would have tried to live up to their expectations, I would have never EVER left the den that day. But I can't change it."
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I felt something touch shoulder. At this point, I was nearly asleep and still sniffling. I turned to see a packmate looking down at me unhappily. "I'm so sorry." He rubbed my back with his paw softly before standing up. "Come on, let's go back.." And I obediently got up. I looked back at my lost mother and father. "I love you both so much.." and I followed my packmate back home.
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"Later I found out that they all had been doing something whenever a scout reported the Kronodors outside. My parents went to find me and whenever they realized what I had done they ran out without putting their armour on while some others decided to. I miss my mother and father dearly. This is the reasonwhy I act like I do now. I try my best to be respectful and do as they would have wanted. I sit tall with my head up high. I do what I do proudly, helping the pack try and defeat the Kronadors and take Isket back. I work hard to avenge my parents. I always blame myself, I can't help it. I know they wouldn't like that I'm bashing on myself for doing what I did. I try to think that they would be proud of me if they were alive though."

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More MIGHT come.
3 things about Woi:
-They battle Kronadors, creatures that are a mix of reptile and horse.
-Their dens are a huge network of rooms and tunnels inside of their big red mountains.
-Ur WoI's - Laurona and Mardelius

What forms could an Woi have?:
Big wolf with long ears and a long fluffy tail.
Big wolf with normal ears and a long tail.
Big wolf with noraml ears and a normal (round ended) tail
Big wolf with short ears and a curled tail.


Huge WIP I'll do my best to get it done by the end date
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Re: Adopt me

Postby ~Nonexistant » Fri May 11, 2012 12:26 pm

The Darkness wrote:Oh she's very pretty ^^ perhaps I'll try for her.

Gah, wow! People really did like this one!♥
Thank you, TWG, I cant explain how I feel about this! Im glad the design didnt go to waste! Whoever wins this, good job and take good care of it♥
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