Okay. Kinda late, but my entry for the Mary Sue contest:
Name: Starrystar (Warrior name was Starrynight)
Rank: Leader and Medicine Cat
Gender: She-cat (NOT MOLLY)
Age: Immortal
Appearance: Starrystar is a wonderful she-cat with long, flowing fur. She has pitch black fur, save for some white speckles on her coat that give her the appearance that there are stars on her fur. Her right eye is blue, and her left eye is red. When she gets angry, her right eye turns red, and she switches into her alternate persona VenomousDart.
VenomousDart is a large she-cat who can kill anyone in a single slash because her claws are five times longer than Tigerstar’s, reinforced with dog’s teeth, and are coated in a poison that can kill in milliseconds. She is the leader of the Dark Forest.
If someone looks into either cat’s eyes, they’ll fall in love with Starrystar/VenomousDart in seconds and there is nothing they can do to resist. To counteract this, Starrystar wears a blindfold, but she can still see just fine because she has echolocation (like a bat!).
Powers:
Echolocation - The she-cat can see just fine while wearing the blindfold because she can sense what’s ahead of her with sound waves! She can also let out a screech that instantly deafens whoever hears it.
Elemental Powers - Since Starrystar is the Avatar, she can control all four elements flawlessly. She could do this ever since she was a kit.
Physic Powers - Starrystar control control things/people with her mind, let out powerful physic blasts, and teleport.
Death - Starrystar has 99 lives, instead of just nine, because StarClan decided she was such a great leader they blessed her with both eternal life and 99 lives (more on how that happened in the backstory). She can also kill anyone instantly by writing down their name, but she NEVER actually does this because she hates killing and it would haunt her forever.
Personality: Perfect. Also, meet her.
Weaknesses: Too kind, too beautiful
Strengths: Fighting, hunting, swimming, climbing, herblore (since she’s also the Medicine Cat of the forest), balancing, talking (she’s very persuasive and can even talk to other animals, including twolegs), mothering, has a close connection to StarClan.
Backstory: (Everyone hold on, this might get bumpy.)
Starrystar wasn’t named Starrykit. No, because her mother died giving birth to her, her father thought she was cursed and named her Bloodkit. The rest of the clan did nothing to fight this because they agreed she was cursed and hated poor little Bloodkit. But one day, she sneaked out of camp and made her way to the Moonstone. StarClan said, You are not cursed. You are an agent sent from StarClan, reborn of the best warriors to ever walk our planet. You are special. You carry the blood of Firestar, Brambleclaw, Squirrelflight, Lionblaze, Jayfeather, Hollyleaf and whoever it was that had the super senses. So when Bloodkit returned to camp and told her leader this, he welcomed her warmly and she was hailed as the clan’s future savior. She was renamed to Starrykit, because of the star-like markings on her fur.
But trouble didn’t end there for Starrykit! One day she saw some kits sneak out of camp. She didn’t tell on them, ‘cause that would be mean, but she decided to follow them from a distance to keep them safe. Then they ran into a fox! But before it could hurt anyone, Starrykit leaped into action, slaying the beast in one blow. “Wow Starrykit you’re great!” The kittens cheered. But when Starrykit turned back around, her eyes were RED! DUN DUN DUN!
Everyone gasped as the kitten let out a cold laugh, growing to the size of a dragon. “I AM VENOMOUSKIT!” It declared. “I am the reborn form of Scourge, Bone, Hawkfrost, Tigerstar, Mudclaw, Thistleclaw, Sol and Mapleshade! Fear me!”
But before Venomouskit could hurt anyone, Starrykit saved the day! She took control of her body back and everything was cool.
... Okay, I could continue this, but I don’t think I could finish writing her backstory with my sanity intact.