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Artist Entry 1

Postby Smokyskies » Tue Jul 16, 2024 7:44 am

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Artist: Smokyskies
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Name: Dream Dracone
Pronouns: Any/All
Rarity: Rare(Crystal Growths), Common(Spine)
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Preference on artist position (guest or permanent)?: Either is fine!
Do you have experience as an artist for a closed species?: No but I would like to try!
What is your interest in Aqueous Draconas in particular?: I love dragons and all animals and I think these guys are so cool!
Have any suggestions for the species and how it could improve?: Maybe seasonal events?
Is this entry open for others to claim?:
Yes!


Went simple for this girl, let me know what you think!
Last edited by Smokyskies on Tue Jul 16, 2024 9:08 am, edited 1 time in total.









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Re: Artist Entry 1

Postby FateStoryteller » Tue Jul 16, 2024 8:53 am

Thanks so much for entering! I have a few suggestions for improvement:
First, with the design itself, I'd recommend coloring the base lines as well so that they fit better with your overall design, probably a darker shade of the blue you have for the base color. Then I think it would be great for someone to potentially claim, if you're comfortable with that.
Secondly, you don't need the fake sign, that's what the dream sign is there for. ^^
Thirdly, since this is a dream dracone currently, it can't have a name and pronouns, so you can either leave those blank or leave what I'd written in there before. If someone was to claim this one, then they could give them a name and pronouns. ^^
And those are the only changes. ^^
But to add some notes: I really love how you colored the crystal growth lines white. That looks really pretty. ^^
Also, thanks for the suggestion about seasonal events. its a very good one. I am hoping that by the fall I'll feel comfortable enough to try for a halloween or at least autumn themed event. ^^
And great job using the format! You did a great job with that. ^^
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Re: Artist Entry 1

Postby Smokyskies » Tue Jul 16, 2024 9:09 am

Ok! Thanks for the suggestions! I did the edits you suggested and this Dracone is now open to claim!

I will start on my next Dracone either today or tomorrow!









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Re: Artist Entry 1

Postby FateStoryteller » Tue Jul 16, 2024 11:49 am

Nice! They look much nicer. ^^ I forgot to mention before that I really like your choice of colors too, they all go together really well. ^^
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Re: Artist Entry 1

Postby Smokyskies » Tue Jul 16, 2024 12:09 pm

Thanks! I entered my second guy too just FYI!









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