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Comet by ash9

Artist ash9 [gallery]
Time spent 21 minutes
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Comet

Postby ash9 » Sun Apr 29, 2012 9:06 am

I accidently messed up the layers at first but this is what it came out with, critique?

Added: More stars, "Sparkle" around stars.
Last edited by ash9 on Sun Apr 29, 2012 10:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Comet

Postby dasa » Sun Apr 29, 2012 9:45 am

i dont want to sound mean but you did ask for a critique... you should use a smaller size brush for the stars n' stuff, & for a tip might want to put like a smaller opacity star around it so it looks like its glowing ^-^ i'm not sure if that made sense but you get a rough idea P: i think XD
well done though i thinks its awesome! :clap: :thumbup:
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Re: Comet

Postby ash9 » Sun Apr 29, 2012 10:19 am

dasa wrote:i dont want to sound mean but you did ask for a critique... you should use a smaller size brush for the stars n' stuff, & for a tip might want to put like a smaller opacity star around it so it looks like its glowing ^-^ i'm not sure if that made sense but you get a rough idea P: i think XD
well done though i thinks its awesome! :clap: :thumbup:


Thanks and i will definitely do what you think is right, i am not at all thinking you're mean, you're honest, the best policy.
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Re: Comet

Postby dasa » Thu May 03, 2012 3:12 am

WOO! >,<
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