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Re: Beach Sunset

Postby katanatildawn » Mon Jan 02, 2012 6:11 pm

Hm... looks amazing! your sea and sky look wonderful.

one or two things id like to point out, you're missing some reflections and shadows (You mentioned it missing something, I do believe that's it). other than that, Id just watch your use of the smudge tool (It's incredibly useful, and just as dangerous). as well, make sure the water-level comes ABOVE the silhouetted landmass' base. you probably wouldn't be able to see the beach from this angle, due to lighting and the swell of water. (I cant tell if that's a continuation of your beach or the water not meeting like it should ;D)

but other than that, REALLY good! @u@
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Re: Beach Sunset

Postby dddddonuts » Mon Jan 02, 2012 6:20 pm

JtHMlover8 wrote:Hm... looks amazing! your sea and sky look wonderful.

one or two things id like to point out, you're missing some reflections and shadows (You mentioned it missing something, I do believe that's it). other than that, Id just watch your use of the smudge tool (It's incredibly useful, and just as dangerous). as well, make sure the water-level comes ABOVE the silhouetted landmass' base. you probably wouldn't be able to see the beach from this angle, due to lighting and the swell of water. (I cant tell if that's a continuation of your beach or the water not meeting like it should ;D)

but other than that, REALLY good! @u@

Thank you, I've updated it <3
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Re: Beach Sunset

Postby Telescope » Mon Jan 02, 2012 6:26 pm

The colors on this are beautiful. :) The only thing I can see wrong is the shape of the bird's foot on the beach, but that's totally understandable considering you did this with a mouse.

Great job. :3
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Re: Beach Sunset

Postby dddddonuts » Tue Jan 03, 2012 3:36 am

Telescope wrote:The colors on this are beautiful. :) The only thing I can see wrong is the shape of the bird's foot on the beach, but that's totally understandable considering you did this with a mouse.

Great job. :3

I've fixed it, thank you <3
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Re: Beach Sunset

Postby dddddonuts » Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:53 am

LF crit~
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Re: Beach Sunset

Postby cяʏƨтαℓяαιи » Mon Jan 16, 2012 3:49 pm

:o wow really good oekaki! :o dont think i could EVER do that good! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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Re: Beach Sunset

Postby dddddonuts » Mon Jan 23, 2012 4:36 pm

Poppystream wrote::o wow really good oekaki! :o dont think i could EVER do that good! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Aww, thank you <3
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Re: Beach Sunset

Postby Ellies » Mon Jan 23, 2012 8:10 pm

THis is amazing i love it its BOUND to get a featuer! Love it love it love it!!
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Re: Beach Sunset

Postby dddddonuts » Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:50 am

It won't...
The features usually come up and the end of each week, and usually are made right before Friday night.
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Re: Beach Sunset

Postby Ellies » Tue Jan 24, 2012 11:51 am

~Shimmer~ wrote:It won't...
The features usually come up and the end of each week, and usually are made right before Friday night.

Try not think negitave keep your hopes up!
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