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Gift Line Wip by ShadyBro

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Gift Line Wip

Postby ShadyBro » Tue Dec 01, 2015 10:13 am

Trying my hand at some Viscet gift lines and Im having some issues with the anatomy. Those paws are especially horrific. Some redline help would be awesome <3

Just ask to be added if you think you could help any ^^
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Re: Gift Line Wip

Postby Intercept » Tue Dec 01, 2015 10:14 am

Question, What is redlining?
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Re: Gift Line Wip

Postby ShadyBro » Tue Dec 01, 2015 10:17 am

Basically to go over a sketch with a different color layer to point out and fix mistakes in the anatomy.
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Re: Gift Line Wip

Postby -Shaded- » Tue Dec 01, 2015 10:19 am

Tilt the muzzle up a bit and the ear is a bit off... Bring that up and the feet are VERY tiny
Over all that's cool!
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Re: Gift Line Wip

Postby Mint Chip » Tue Dec 01, 2015 10:43 am

I think it looks pretty good tbh,
the biggest issue I see is that the hindleg (further one away) is not quite long enough/jointed enough to match the other leg.
and the arms are hanging a little low, but otherwise a really good start.
I can redline for you if you'd like, or I can redline it using sai (I can save that image and when I'm done redlining just post the image here) c:
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Re: Gift Line Wip

Postby ShadyBro » Tue Dec 01, 2015 4:02 pm

If you could redline it here that would be awesome Minty ;u; Youve been added!
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