[Noodle boi Kudanori]

uh-oh he looks kinda mad.. and hes not vary christmasy..

this one is going to be a little harder to win this marra tell me a story on who he punished for being lazy this year and why!
also try and guess what hes based off of, this isnt a requirement but a little boost
*hint; a small hint is in the first sentance and he is a christmas monster *
you may only have 1 guess at who this is! if you change your guess your form will not count

prettying up and extras are aloud!

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username;
marra name;
gender; Submissive male male
story; (no word cap)
based off of?;(optional)

marra rarity; legendary

edits
rare; no wings
vary rare; custom lines,
legendary; extra large body size (6ft at the shoulder), aura (on the eyes)

[Warrdog]

username; Warrdog
marra name; Erebus
gender; Submissive male male
story; (no word cap)
based off of?; JÓLAKÖTTURINN (AKA Yule cat)

[Corey Taylor]

username;RainbowMindedWolf
marra name;Lucifer
gender;Male
story;He punished his siblings of course! He punished them because he thought they weren't in good enough shape from eating all the sweets they could find. He constantly yells at his siblings to do their work around the house, even if it's already done. He pushes them around to be more active. They're scared of him, but it gets the job done.
based off of?;i dunno ;-;

[yeena]

reserve !!
my guess is krampus

[ArizonaT3a]

username;
Akemi-chan
marra name;
Omaru (oh-mar-oo)
gender; Submissive male male
story; Why the young who refused their trinkets to wear of course, it is improper to not wear them by Christmas Eve. Agitating really, Omaru finds it shameful and often times goes after them and those who do not wear them.
- w i p-
based off of?; I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR ANY SPECIES TO DO THIS OH MY GOSH
Jólakötturinn from the Icelandic folklore

[Noodle boi Kudanori]

this will be exstended since there are no completed forms! new forms can be made but they all have to be completed by 1/5/18!

[dragonstars]

username;Dragonstars
marra name;Nightmare
gender; Submissive male male
story;
I sat down in my cave,Reading a list of names of people who are lazy,Naughty,Horrible or scary during christmas.Even tho im a Chritmas monster I still have a heart,I continued to look down the list till a saw one of my worst enemies who try and ruin christmas...Night.Night has been my enemy for years,It gets annoying when he tries and ruin christmas.I sighed,before getting up and grabbing my gear,Then I head out into the snow to stop night.
*a hour later*
I finally got where night was and of course,The whole town was destroyed.Everything was destroyed,I hope the people are ok.I walked around in till I saw night,He was trying to attack a small group of kids in till I ran up and tackled her while I said to the group of kids"Get out of here before you get hu-"Before I could finished I was punched in the face by night.I fell back on the ground,slowly getting up and growling at night."Well well well,If it isn't nightmare,My worst enemy"He said,snarling at me."At least I dont try and ruin christmas like you!"I yelled at him,slowly tackling him.Me and night both fight,In till finally,Night gave up in defeat.I growled as I picked night up by the scruff,slowly dragging him to my cave,Locking him up.I went over to my spell book,slowly saying some words as I made a potion,I heard night groan,seeming he was getting ready to wake.I finished the potion,Slowly walking over to the cage,opening it.I walked over,chaining him up as he tried to bite me,I slammed my paw down on his muzzle,causing him to whimper."For destroying many many villages and trying to ruin christmas,you will be turned into a weak,useless monster who only strikes fear in peoples eyes,No one will love you ever again''I growled at him,slowly making him drink the potion as he turned into a skeleton three headed wolf,his tail was sharp like a dagger and his mouth was dripping a black ooze.He hissed at me,trying to tackle me,but I moved out of the way as he hit the wall,he fell down,his body shaking."Im sorry night,but this is your punishment,you are free to leave,but if I ever see you trying to destroy or kill anyone,You wont like whats coming next"I growled at him as he ran off into the snow.I sighed,walking towards my bed and slowly curling up,Falling asleep.

[dragonstars]

Hi!I would like to know if this will ever be judged?Its been awhile..-