[Tricksters]

it looks so much better when i'm working on it, okeaki doesn't clump stuff together when I post it ahhhcj DX
oH WELL
It'll do!
Entry art for a plumerian ; D ;

[modern]

This is awesome ;o;

If you are entering good luck!

[Tricksters]

ahh thank you! ; w;

[pim]

This is amazing
I can't stop looking at it
good luck sweetie! <3

[Tricksters]

ee thank you so much! ; D ;

[M00N]

This looks so cool ouo

good luck in the contest!!!

[father]

i hope its ok to give a little critique since in the fanclub you asked for opinions?? anyway, its very hard to see where the plume starts and the background begins because theyre both so darkly colored. maybe lighten one of them??
other than that i rly love this, your style is faveeeee and the fact that this is pixels makes it even better <3

[Tricksters]

@M00n// thank you so much! ; D ;
@Aaronzee// Thank you so much for the critique!
I made it to where he's a bit brighter, does it look any
better? ;w;

[father]

ahh its still very dark?? perhaps you could add a pale glow behind him to make it stand out more (given the composition you chose for this piece, if i were in your shoes id want the shape of their spine and their head to be the focus of the piece, or at the very least easily visible)?? i feel like a lot of really nice details are being lost, which is a shame because your art is so good :O

[Tricksters]

I added a little glow behind him, it's not the brightest,
but does it make the picture look any better?