by Boghound » Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:26 pm
this looks really good, actually. <:
we'll offer up a few crits.
you might want to look into more profile study, from the nose down. while the nose does flow into the lips, the lips jut out juuust a bit. it's barely noticeable, but it makes a difference. touch your face and feel the space between your nose and the top of your lips. feel how it curves?
continue to move your hand down your lips and to your chin. there's another [usually] more drastic curve there.
to better illustrate it, here's a ref for you. <:
little things to work at: ear structure, and the mouth/lips. arguably the mouth area could just be your style, but it never hurts to practice.
also, good on you for remembering the adam's apple. people often forget it.
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