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Axel Ryder by crazy cranky critter

Artist crazy cranky critter [gallery]
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Axel Ryder

Postby crazy cranky critter » Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:00 pm

    Far, I hate drawing humans. They always turn out absolutely dreadful. I just felt like doodling my character Axel Ryder because his mohawk is fun to do XD
    Words on his neck are Rage Love. Green Day referance c;

    Feel free to comment/crit all you like. In fact crits are much appreciated <3
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Re: Axel Ryder

Postby Boghound » Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:26 pm

this looks really good, actually. <:
we'll offer up a few crits.
you might want to look into more profile study, from the nose down. while the nose does flow into the lips, the lips jut out juuust a bit. it's barely noticeable, but it makes a difference. touch your face and feel the space between your nose and the top of your lips. feel how it curves?
continue to move your hand down your lips and to your chin. there's another [usually] more drastic curve there.
to better illustrate it, here's a ref for you. <:

little things to work at: ear structure, and the mouth/lips. arguably the mouth area could just be your style, but it never hurts to practice.
also, good on you for remembering the adam's apple. people often forget it.
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Re: Axel Ryder

Postby crazy cranky critter » Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:32 pm

    Thank you! I'll remember that and try it next time C: Plus I'll save that ref, it looks rather handy /needs practice at profiles.
    Also I never forget the adams apple because my primary school teacher used to have a massive one so it's something I always think about when drawing people (don't tell him I said that) XD
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