Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Vaoki » Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:08 am

It's very simple, I mean there isn't a lot of it but it is very cute. I like how it just gives out more things about you. Sorry that's all I got :P
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .normal.human. » Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:17 am

May center the pictures and have them all even at the top. If you want you can make it more colorful overall.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Lillybear » Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:19 am

Some of the images are cut off on my screen, but this might just be my kind computer, I'm not sure.

Also, the text is really small and kind of hard to read, maybe you could make them a little bigger?

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:33 am

It's great, but maybe move the "hakuna matata" somewhere else? I can't see all of Simba and Mufasa.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:39 am

I think the text is a bit plain. Maybe more symbols or some quotes could spice up your sig.

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby reset. » Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:42 am

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your sig is very etheral
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perfectly (imo again)
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But there's one thing that bothers me - the borders. I think that one kind is enough.

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ryuunosuke » Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:49 am

    well, the gif is smooth, i can say that, but the overlay looks grainy. the feathers and bird on the side still have a white outline, too. other than that, it's nice!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby leda. » Tue Jan 19, 2016 6:00 am

not much to say,but lets get started!first of all for the cropped image,on the right side/bigger gif,i feel like the ear and small little scene of hair kinda unsettles me.i reccomend cropping it after the ear and hair just so it'll look more...idk pleasing and realistic?in the bio,i dont like how you used different borders.i thought you should stick with the same borders in my own opinion.the bio is plain and out of color as well in all of my opinion
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby eyeless » Tue Jan 19, 2016 6:02 am

the writing is very hard to read; the black and white is very weird. it looks good but i find the quote is hard to read, which order is the words?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby cosmos.; » Tue Jan 19, 2016 6:13 am

The image is very simple and maybe a bit too glittery. I don't really tend to like blingee, since some of the photos flash too much and I have photosensitive epilepsy (aka I freak out when I see an image that flashes too much). Maybe add a little text?
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