Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:30 pm

Huh? Yours is great, btw, but maybe more stuff.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:31 pm

Your's is really aesthetically pleasing to look at. However, there is a bit too much text. It's a lot to read and kinda sidetracks me. When making a signature, text should be small and easy to read. This is so that way you focus on other things, like the colors and images. It makes your signature a lot more attractive. Adding text symbols, borders, and a bit more images should fix this problem. Also, maybe add a border or text box to make the text more in place.

(I'm sorry if I sounded mean, I still really love your sig)
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ever changing » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:32 pm

      Maybe consistently use

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      to bracket your text? The
      first spiel of text randomly
      being different from the
      others brings a bit too much
      focus to it, imo.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Rose Sinclair » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:35 pm

Just capitalization and punctuation for "they'll be no angels gracing the line" and "just these stark words i find."
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ryuunosuke » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:36 pm

    eh? you appeared to screencap a signature. the transition is creative, but it looks awkward.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:37 pm

ninja'd

Nice, but the images are blurry. Also, one of the images is too far down to see. Maybe fix that?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .normal.human. » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:51 pm

kinda wordy and there is white where it should be transparent
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:52 pm

Nice, but maybe move the tall transparent image up or get a taller one?
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Postby barbwirebrat » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:53 pm

ninja'd
tbh, your siggy is super cool!! i love pretty much all of it!
there's a lot of words, which is a little bit distracting, but
i love the overall concept of it!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .normal.human. » Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:56 pm

It is hard to see the roses, your I's aren't capitalized and neither are the names of the Undertale characters
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