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Which of my songs should I make an Album Cover for?

Pain
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Hospital
1
50%
These Railroad Tracks
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Kuda
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Burn it Down
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Insanity Murdered Us
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Perfection's Point of View
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Misery Loves Company
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Total votes : 2

Acoustic. Songs

Postby wicked; » Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:00 pm

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Hi! So since Song writing is one of my biggest
passions there is, I thought I could maybe make a thread
filled with all of my lyrics. I believe lyrics are extremely
important in song writing, and also quite fun. I like my
lyrics to be inspirational and something you can relate to.
I'm hoping that at least one of my songs will stand out to
you, and it might touch your heart. Since I write
emotional stuff, I will only write what I can. I'm a teenager,
and haven't lived that much of life, so I honestly don't
know too many true feelings, but I hope you can feel
what I write. - Starry Eyed <3

Pain << rate them from
Too Late/Hospital << 1 to 5 stars?
These Railroad Tracks
Kuda
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Pain

Postby wicked; » Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:01 pm

// Just a little song I wrote. Thought I'd share it with you, maybe tell the story behind it. It's not a love song. Well, it kind of is. In a way. Not really. I'll explain after you read it if you choose to. It has a lot of meaning to me. I've never written something so....Expressing like. And when I do tend to do that, it usually seems really confusing. If you're going to read it, I just ask you maybe listen to this while doing so: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=clo2HXA7pN8 . Of course you don't have to. I just listened to it while I was writing it, and thought maybe it would give you more of a feeling to it. Thank you. -- Iris <3


ρ α ι η

darkness, it fills you,
will all your regret,
and the memories will,
haunt you forever.
it consumes, you.
shadows, to watch you,
and tease you,
for all, you've done wrong.

you're living nightmare,
it never leaves you.
you can't awake,
from your fears.
it consumes, you.

heart, heart, watch where you go.
your adventures always seem to know,
how to make it hard.
for me to live through.
if you want to fall,
then don't fall hard, for me.
i'd like to see you try,
try to rely,
on the stars for help.
they're not your magic,
they just taunt you with their beauty.

i love, love, you not today though,
i don't want to leave but it's time to go,
and remember why i don't love.
i'm just the one on my knees,
crying all night through.

but when nobody but the dark hears you,
the memories come crashing back.
filling your head.
who you are,
why you are,
when you are,
ready to fall.
don't fall hard,
you'll only feel,
Pain.

dark, dark, dark, dark,
Oh, dark.
my tears are made by you.
make it stop,
i beg you for forgiveness,
what did i do to make you hate me,
so you laugh when you see,
my Pain.

heart, heart, watch where you go.
your adventures always seem to know,
how to make it hard.
for me to live through.
if you want to fall,
then don't fall hard, for me.
i'd like to see you try,
try to rely,
on the stars for help.
they're not your magic,
they just taunt you with their beauty.

i love, love, you not today though,
i don't want to leave but it's time to go,
and remember why i don't love.
i'm just the one on my knees,
crying all night through.

i love, love, you.

my heart is not made for you.

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Okay, so if you're down here, you just read that. Thank you, I really do appreciate it. So, I know it may seem like a 'love song' but it actually isn't really. It's about the darkness in life that remind you who you are, and all of your flaws. The things that remind us we aren't flawless, and why we fear to take risks, live our dreams, love, etc. It's the things you fear that you can't stand up to. Those things that remind us, we aren't always who we want to be. We aren't....The one's we look up to. It is called Pain for a reason. A definition for Pain would be, "mental or emotional suffering or torment." That's describes the way we feel in six words. Don't you ever feel pain? Like you're mentally or emotionally suffering? Tormented? It's all in the definition. Sometimes, we are so insecure, nervous, scared that it's pain. We don't want to feel these ways. That's what this song is about. Thank you for taking the time to read it. Maybe you could vote up in the poll for me just so I know if it makes sense or not. Thank you so much.
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Too Late/Hospital

Postby wicked; » Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:01 pm

i always seem to be waking up,
the cold nights long like winter.
a never ending story to unfold,
wiping away tears with my fingers.

and it's a cold day in September,
and it's a day we'll all remember,
it'll be big news in November,
and die down in December.

love me, before you can't.
hold me, before i'm gone.
tell me, that it'll all be okay.
why can't you read my emotions?
why do you hear the sirens,
ringing from a block away.
so keep me, before it's too late.
before it's too late.

words all laced up in my head,
my hand trailing down my wrist.
they both scream and burn,
because they're the scars you never kissed.

and it's a cold day in September,
and it's a day we'll all remember,
it'll be big news in November,
and the story lives in forever.

love me, before you can't.
hold me, before i'm gone.
tell me, that it'll all be okay.
why can't you read my emotions?
why do you hear the sirens,
ringing from a block away.
so keep me, before it's too late.

save me, save me,
someone needs to save me.
fix me, fix me,
doctor please fix me.
you don't get another chance,
because what's done is, done.

mother, mother,
kiss my lifeless lips.
hug my lifeless body.
don't cry, for me.
my ghost will lay a hand on your back,
as you lay a hand on mine.

love me, before you can't.
hold me, before i'm gone.
tell me, that it'll all be okay.
why can't you read my emotions?
why do you hear the sirens,
ringing from a block away.
so keep me, before it's too late.

- Too Late

Hi. this is one of the many sad songs I've
written. This one is called Too Late,
but I also like to know it as 'Hospital.'
I know, that's pretty strange, and
doesn't really make sense, but in a
way it kind of does. I do picture this
happening in a Hospital, a mother
crying over her child's body, sirens
bringing him/her here. I just like
it a lot. Call it what you want
though. It's really a sad song, and
has a very strong meaning, which
I will not say, as I'm afraid it
may get this thread locked. >.>
But whatever meaning you want
it to be, make it that. It's your
choice to read what you want.
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These Railroad Tracks

Postby wicked; » Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:07 pm

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Railroads go on and on forever,
tracks disappearing in the mist.
desperate enough to fall for whoever,
a pair of lips that haven't been kissed.
the only thing to keep them going is,
never say never.

lost in a brand new dimension,
i fell down.
when you've become a new invention,
i fell down.
holding on is the only prevention,
from falling down.
do you really want to be loved?
or do you want an eternity searching?
Keep on walking these railroad tracks,
and pray that none will crack.

buried beneath the dirt and rust,
the hearts will never get their rest.
the touch of your lips is the loving lust,
keeping each other from chest to chest.
the only thing to keep us going is,
never say never.

hand in hand,
palm in palm,
lips to lips,
chest to chest,
head to head,
eye to eye,
this feels like falling in love.
falling in love.

lost in a brand new dimension,
i fell down.
when you've become a new invention,
i fell down.
holding on is the only prevention,
from falling down.
do you really want to be loved?
or do you want an eternity searching?
Keep on walking these railroad tracks,
and pray that none will crack.
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Okay, this was a hard one to write, and I kind of wanted to cry. ;; Whatever meaning you want it to be, that's the meaning of the song. There really is no true meaning.
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Kuda

Postby wicked; » Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:08 pm

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my eyes are watery,
my heart is bleeding,
please stop shaking.
my voice is broken,
my hands are trembling,
please, just stop shaking.

please stay still,
please don't move,
please blind my eyes.

i know it's hard right now,
we will make it through,
this ugly stage,
by the end of the night.
when the sun shines out,
you are my friend,
you will be free.
because i loved you.

is the night yet over?
or has it only begun?
someone call a doctor,
for you, and me.
we've been through worse,
we can go through this.

please stay still,
please don't move,
please blind my eyes.

i know it's hard right now,
we will make it through,
this ugly stage,
by the end of the night.
when the sun shines out,
you are my friend,
you will be free.
because i loved you.
i loved you.
i love you.

Err, no laughing at me. I'm crying. ;; I know, picture on the left probably seems strange, but not really. Call me a baby, and a little kid, but I actually wrote this song about my dog and named it after her. Kuda. You see, she has Epilepsy, and it kind of...makes her have.....seizures. Yeah, not so little kiddish anymore. But still, I am afraid we'll have to put her down some time soon. I'm not ready for that. We've had her since 2005. It's hard to let go. ;; Also, sorry for the shortness.
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Re: S T A R R Y ' S S O N G S.

Postby wicked; » Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:08 pm

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i've been here all before.
why buy a mirror when i'd see,
my imperfections,
my reflection.
angels fly but what for?
they all end up falling,
my infection,
is my depression.

do you really shriek,
when you see blood?
or is it what you seek,
what you want to flood.

my, oh my, oh my,
we're gonna burn this down,
burn this place down.
until it's all ashes;
with their bodies left inside.
we'll burn it down,
burn it..
we'll watch you burn,
like you watched us.

you don't want our pulse,
we take away yours.
you don't want our breath,
you'll lay upon these floors.
our medication, (forgot to take it)
no salvation. (i'll admit)

do you really shriek,
when you see blood?
or is it what you seek,
what you want to flood.

my, oh my, oh my,
we're gonna burn this down,
burn this place down.
until it's all ashes;
with their bodies left inside.
we'll burn it down,
burn it..
we'll watch you burn,
like you watched us.

we have no regrets,
we have no remorse,
we are the threat,
things couldn't be worse.

--Long Pause--

fallen angel, fallen angel,
have you fallen to hard?
fallen angel, fallen angel,
please do not be scarred.

my, oh my, oh my,
we're gonna burn this down,
burn this place down.
until it's all ashes;
with their bodies left inside.
we'll burn it down,
burn it..
we'll watch you burn,
like you watched us.

my, oh my, oh my,
oh my, oh my..
we're gonna burn this down,
down to the ground,
until it's ashes.
we'll be drowning in blood,
you'll be burning in fire.

burn it, burn it,
we'll burn it down.

fallen angel, fallen angel,
have you fallen to hard?
fallen angel, fallen angel,
please do not be scarred.



Yes, this one is quite disturbing. I understand it seems everywhere, but while writing this, I channeled my inner mentally ill side, and wrote it. I guess it might be hard to understand...since I wrote it from my P.O.V...And only I can truly understand what my P.O.V is...Anyway, it's basically about someone who is so close to giving up, but instead, they burn their problems down...Their problem is their peers, school, and everything socially. Basically...they thought they burned the entire city down, but in reality, it was only the school.
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Re: S T A R R Y ' S S O N G S.

Postby wicked; » Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:08 pm

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i can't,
there isn't,
a reason.
to be, here,
without, you.
go away, i,
don't want you here,
anymore.
i can smell your soul,
feel your touch,
taste your presence.
you died on me.
your not even here.
but go away,
anyways.

i can't,
find a reason to be,
alive.
prayers won't bring you,
back.
god can't resurrect your,
body.
you taught me there is no,
magic.
so why should i still hold,
hope.

i'll resurrect you,
i'll resurrect you,
i'll bring you,
to life.
i'll resurrect you,
i'll resurrect you,
i'll bring you,
to life.

fade away,
picture frame,
everyday,
no words to say,
not okay.
i'm not okay.
it's not okay.

insanity murdered both of us.


Yes, quite short I know.
quite sad, isn't it? I was just
in a sad like mood. So, it
was easy to write this. But
i still had to dig quite deep.
Hope you like my depressing
thoughts!
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Re: S T A R R Y ' S S O N G S.

Postby wicked; » Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:09 pm

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Re: Acoustic. Songs

Postby wicked; » Sun Feb 24, 2013 4:18 am

Bump! I'll try to get some more up as soon as possible!
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Re: Acoustic. Songs

Postby wicked; » Tue Feb 26, 2013 11:06 am

I put a poll up, asking about Too Late/Hospital. Personally, I hate having two titles for a song; it annoys me. So...Which should it be called? Vote for me? Pwease? xx
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