The Four Elements

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Who is your favorite charicter so far?

Poll ended at Wed Aug 01, 2012 12:28 pm

Allie the earth element
2
15%
Deah the water element
2
15%
Shealla the air element
1
8%
Skyler the fire element
4
31%
Sandy, Shealla's mentor
1
8%
Crysta, Deah's BFF
0
No votes
Vader, Skyler's "helper"
1
8%
Lucy, the heartbroken fan
2
15%
 
Total votes : 13

The Four Elements

Postby daz » Thu Jul 05, 2012 6:22 am

What if the four elements had to join together to save the last? Snow. What if one of them is evil, and tries to stop them? If you want to know, listen to my story.

Prophecy:
The four must join, the fifth must be found, the fire will be a traitor. the world will be at end if they don't choose the way their hearts fly. they must save Snow before snow falls in winter, or all will be lost in the wave of fire and dragon.



Allie was sleeping on the forest floor, dreaming. she dreampt that a fire raged through her forest and destroyed all she loved. she woke with a start to feel the wind. they must be discouraged... she thought. they must know i am afraid.

Meanwhile under the sea, Deah, De-uh, was also sleeping. she dreampt that a large dragon put a drout to her home. and all her friends and family died of thirst. she felt someone prodding her side. she woke to be face to face with her BFF, Crysta. "Sorry if i disturbed you Crysta, i only had a nightmare. that's all."

Deep in the clouds where wind is controlled, another Element lived. her dreams made her shake with fear, she dreampt that flames pulluted the air and ruined her home. killing all.

Another Element sits in her volcano home, laughing evily. she had a dream that she would finally conquer the world and become their ruler! she would destroy all! her captive Element struggled agianst her ropes. Skyler, the evil element, smircks. this is gonna be fun! she thinks.


Fire element:Skyler
Water element:Deah
Air element:Shealla
Earth element:Allie
fifth element:Blizard


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Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Thu Jul 05, 2012 6:41 am

Wow, Flash! please, write more! It's AMAZING!!!





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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Thu Jul 05, 2012 7:56 am

everyone, just so you know, Blizard is wearing a blindfold because she was captured!!!!! anyways, back to the story...
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby frozenmoons » Thu Jul 05, 2012 1:51 pm

ahh.....why do I have to be a fire baby? that means I'm evil....I've never met a different fire baby besides me, and everyone's talking 'bout how fire babies are evil! eh, whatever. anyways, the story sounds awesome. write more!
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Thu Jul 05, 2012 1:56 pm

i'm getting to it! note to Darky, you're not evil! you roooooock as a friend!
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby frozenmoons » Thu Jul 05, 2012 2:16 pm

Lol, thanks
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Fri Jul 06, 2012 2:12 am

Allie sank down into her hand-carved wooden chair. she stared around her bedroom, that is inside a tree. she sniffed the air curiously as the wind gusted in. it whispered somthing curious... almost unreadable.

"The four must join, the fifth must be found, the fire will be a traitor. the world will be at end if they don't choose the way their hearts fly. they must save snow before snow falls in winter, or all will be lost in the wave of fire and dragon." it whispered.

Allie's eyes fixed themselves on her notebook that held all the secrets to the forest. maybe the wind shall explain this better through the pages... she thought.

"Look at the pages, and justice will be found. secrets revealed... and all spoken and done." she murmered.

The book swung open with a jerk to reveal blank pages. ones that seemed like old parchment covered in weeds.

"I open to the nature only, who are you?" says the book.

"I am Allie of nature. the queen of the trees, animals, and plants that live underneath it. bring forth your words so i may read them."

The book turned to a torn page. it looked as though it were burnt by flames. Allie thought back to her dream and shook her head to confirm to herself it was only a DREAM. the book started to shuffle as words began to appear.

"Read it, forest queen. for what you seek to know lies in this page." whispered the wind.

So Allie leaned forward and began to read, it read. "You wish to know what your dream has spoken. what the wind has whispered. Your dream wasn't just a dream Allie, it was the future if nothing is done. The words that the wind has said, stand for a prophecy. the prophecy brings forth an important warning. If you and the other elements don't join to sve snow, you'll all die doing nothing to help!

Then the words vanished. Allie gaped at the blank half sheet. "But the elements have never joined! what are we going to do!?"

The winds chuckled, "I told you in the prophecy Allie, follow where your heart flies." then the winds died down and left Allie to wonder what would happen to her forest. if she didn't do what was right.
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i'm sort of a cs vet, working on my own novels now.
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby frozenmoons » Fri Jul 06, 2012 2:20 am

awesome! just one question; so I have a story called Nechia & Garnith, right? well, when I write more, do I put them on the same book thingy, or do I make a new subject for the next page? that probably didn't make any since, but If some one knows, please tell me! :)
the book is awesome. the reason why I said I was dark before, is because I'm a leo, and leo's are fire babies.
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Fri Jul 06, 2012 3:57 am

oh. i understand dark. it doesn't matter what you do. but it's better to continue on the same one the entire story. it's easier to keep up with it that way.
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby frozenmoons » Fri Jul 06, 2012 4:25 am

okay, well then, I'm making it harder. oh wellsss
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