“I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

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What should the next chapter Be about??

The grocery store
3
33%
Romance 😉😉
1
11%
Meeting Carson(also breaking up with Carson)
4
44%
Being weird (playing video games or something)
1
11%
Pm me other ideas!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Mon Dec 18, 2017 3:05 pm

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


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Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Mon Dec 18, 2017 3:41 pm

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


Image
Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Mon Dec 18, 2017 11:58 pm

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


Image
Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Tue Dec 19, 2017 2:46 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


Image
Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Thu Dec 21, 2017 10:45 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


Image
Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Thu Dec 21, 2017 12:08 pm

Working on a chapter! Hoping you guys like expect it like this Friday at the latest
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby mental-mayhem » Thu Dec 21, 2017 12:10 pm

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I'm gonna read it. it sounds good ~
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Fri Dec 22, 2017 8:43 am

Thank you!!!! I’m excited to see what you think!! Let me know c;
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Fri Dec 22, 2017 8:44 am

There a mix of everything in this next chapter! For those who think it’s abhit boring right now just wait! 😉😉😂😂♥️
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Fri Dec 22, 2017 10:19 am

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