A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic

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Re: A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic (I changed the title)

Postby notactiveanymore » Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:34 am

Thank you all! :D
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Re: A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic (I changed the title)

Postby Spiritstar3 » Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:34 am

Love the new title!)
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Re: A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic (I changed the title)

Postby star star. » Wed Mar 19, 2014 8:37 am

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Re: A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic (I changed the title)

Postby tacocat. » Fri Mar 21, 2014 2:07 pm

    I can't wait to read more :D
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Re: A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic (I changed the title)

Postby Ginger Fox » Sun Mar 23, 2014 12:42 pm

If there was a like button on this I would click it. Please write more!

I am wise
I am a fool
A servant with
a yen to rule
good intentions
and selfish schemes
A saint who soars
on broken wings



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Noble visions
and narrow eyes
contradictions
side by side
ogres and angels
share my heart
sometimes the battle
tears me apart



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I am shadow
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I am light
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Chapter 4: The Call

Postby notactiveanymore » Wed May 21, 2014 9:00 am

The moment you guys have been waiting for, The Doctor and Clara is in 221B. Keep up the reviews! I read ALL of them :) You guys keep me going! No reviews no story ;) also feel free to leave any suggestions :) anyways, here is chapter 4! :D
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The Doctor and Clara fallowed Sherlock up stairs. It’s smaller than I thought it would be. Clara thought to herself. Once they got upstairs, they could see that the main room was still small, it had a brownish-red chair in the corner, a few tables, and it had a walkway to the kitchen. The walls had fancy wallpaper, except in the corner. There was a yellow spray paint smiley face that appeared to have bullet holes around it.
“What happened there?” Clara asked Sherlock
“I was bored.” Sherlock responded in a matter-of-fact tone.
“See I’m not the only one that gets bored.” The Doctor whispered to Clara. She rolled her eyes remembering the time he came to her house in the TARDIS and a few moments later taking off a wig and reveling that he was bald.
“May I use your restroom?” Clara asked.
“Yes of course, it’s over there.” Sherlock said motioning towards a door around the corner.
“Thanks.”
Once Clara was gone, The Doctor walked around a bit. He took a set in the brownish-red chair. Sherlock was about to protest that only John can sit there, but John come around the corner and The Doctor shot right up and walked strait over to him.
“Hello! You must be Dr. John Watson! I’m The Doctor!” The Doctor said shaking his hang with a big smile.
“Uh, hi,” John answered confused of what this strange man is doing in his house, “Sherlock, can I talk to you for a moment?” John walked around the corner where he came from motioning for Sherlock to join him. Sherlock excused himself from his guest and joined John. “Who is that?”
“Our guest.”
“What do you mean ‘our guest’? I wasn’t expecting anybody”
“Nor was I, but he was accompanied by someone that we need.”
“Who do we-?” John was about to say but just then Clara came out of the restroom door, right where John and Sherlock was standing. “Hi.” John said a little confused.
“Hello Dr. Watson nice to see you.” Clara replied with a smile before walking into the living room to join The Doctor. John turned to Sherlock; he could see that Sherlock had a sly smile on his face, like he was up to something. John knew better than to argue with him.
He sighed and said, “Why is Miss Clara in our flat?”
“To keep a closer eye on her of course, she was right there when Mr. Smith got attacked. I do believe she was telling the truth, although I don’t believe she was telling the whole truth.”
“So are you just going to force her to stay here until the case is solved?”
“No of course not John, she want’s to stay here. She and her strange friend needed somewhere to stay for a few days, and as I said before, I need her for a case so don’t interfere.”
Oh Sherlock, what am I gong to do with you? John thought. He looked around the corner; The Doctor and Clara were talking and looking around. They both had awe on their faces. Then Clara noticed that John was staring, she waved. John nodded then quickly turned back to Sherlock. “Ok they can stay for a while, not too long though.”
“Oh, don’t be like that John, I let you stay didn’t I?” Sherlock replied, he dragged John, who had rolled his eyes, into the living room and started to act all hospitable again. “Sorry about that, I had to have a word with my college.”
“Oh that’s quite alright.” The Doctor said with a smile.
“So, Doctor, what exactly are you a doctor of?” John asked a little bit sarcastically.
“Oh lots of things! Medical, Physical, Electrical. You know all that sort of stuff. I got my medical license in 19th century France… or was it 18th century?” The Doctor answered a bit confused.
“Ya… ok,” John said not believing him. Just then his phone went off. “Hello?” He answered as he excused himself from the room.
“Hello Dr. Watson.” A voice answered, it was very rough and creepy like.
“Who is this?” John responded a little freaked out.
“A friend, Dr. Watson, I am a friend, and I need to warn you… something terrible is about to happen.”
“What is about to happen?” John asked, he was pretty freaked out now.
“Time is coming apart and we don’t have long.”
“Wait hold up, what do you mean ‘Time is coming apart’”?
“You are not suppose to be here Dr. Watson, not in this time at least.”
“What on earth are you talking about?”
“No time to explain, just stay away from the blue box.” The voice hung up. John was really freaked out right now, just the fact that some creep got his number and was talking nonsense. He brushed it off and was about to go back upstairs, but he saw someone out the window. A man was there; he had a black hoodie and a red shirt sticking out from under it. John couldn’t see his face since his hood was covering it. John was about to go outside to get a better look but a car zoomed past the man and he was gone.
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That was chapter 4!! I hope you guys liked it! I’m sorry it took so long to write this, I had writers block. But what about that creepy guy, am I right? Leave some reviews of what you think! :D – Scoobydoo1021
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Re: A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic

Postby sparrowspam » Wed May 21, 2014 12:58 pm

:DThat was sooo good! now i cant wait for chapter 5…….
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Re: A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic

Postby star star. » Sun Jun 01, 2014 1:59 am

That is so cool! I like the fact that you may be introducing the Master into this.
Very good






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Re: A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic

Postby tacocat. » Sun Jun 01, 2014 3:23 am

this story is rather amazing so far! i've enjoyed every chapter.
please write more?
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Re: A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic

Postby Anthem of Angels » Sun Jul 06, 2014 2:27 am

That was totally awesome!
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