❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby winged-backpack » Sun Dec 17, 2017 10:48 am

Guys I'm dead
IRL Writer Friend wrote me something
He wrote me a fanfiction
A Reylo fanfiction
He wrote it because he knows I despise that ship
Sad thing is, it's actually pretty good ^^'

(Has anyone seen the new star wars yet? It's SO GOOD)
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby danheng » Sun Dec 17, 2017 10:50 am

omg that's the best
sounds like he's a wonderful friend XD
(saw it for the second time today, it's amazing.)

I'm also veeeerrrry behind on the advent challenge.. I have about 10 rought drafts and no finished stories
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sun Dec 17, 2017 1:13 pm

Welp I have given up on the advent thing.... things have been crazy around where I am. My room is nearly all painted though, so hopefully I can start moving things back into it tomorrow or the day after.
As for other writing... I have not done much, though I have lots of muse for Agents of SHIELD fanfictions. Fitzsimmons my children

(I saw tLJ. It was probably the worst Star Wars movie tbh...I want to like it but it wasn't very good...)
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Dec 17, 2017 3:26 pm

winged-backpack wrote:Guys I'm dead
IRL Writer Friend wrote me something
He wrote me a fanfiction
A Reylo fanfiction
He wrote it because he knows I despise that ship
Sad thing is, it's actually pretty good ^^'

(Has anyone seen the new star wars yet? It's SO GOOD)
whaaaaaaaat
They're more a brother/sister thing, imo XD

(YES I AGREE)


Woogwoo Wren wrote:(I saw tLJ. It was probably the worst Star Wars movie tbh...I want to like it but it wasn't very good...)
(ya, whatever, you liked it! Don't let people on the internet ruin your enjoyment, man :p)
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby danheng » Mon Dec 18, 2017 5:22 pm

(tlj was great fight me (but I won't deny it had it's reaaaally bad parts. I just appreciated it as a part of the franchise) )

so I spent half an hour writing this mess to make up for my lack of advent progress, and can I just say, that was a half hour well spent.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby NyxxofStars » Mon Dec 18, 2017 6:36 pm

hawkkeye wrote:(tlj was great fight me (but I won't deny it had it's reaaaally bad parts. I just appreciated it as a part of the franchise) )

so I spent half an hour writing this mess to make up for my lack of advent progress, and can I just say, that was a half hour well spent.


Oh my god. That was the biggest plot twist of 2017 tbh. Well done, and thank you for this beautiful work
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Yubel Fated » Thu Dec 21, 2017 7:21 am

hawkkeye the only thing I have to say about the paragraph itself... Is you might want to separate them into actual paragraphs. Whenever someone new starts talking. whenever a new thought is being introduced. So it doesn't look like a wall of text and becomes easier to read due to this.

Though reading over your recent entry... I will admit it had me at the edge of my seat. The wording definitely made me feel as if I were in the situation with the unknown person, of whom I've assumed to be male. Why? I dunno why to be honest that was the first gender to pop into my head.


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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby danheng » Thu Dec 21, 2017 7:25 am

thanks for the feedback- and glad it was kinda spooky c: I'll edit it today at some point

When writing a book do you skip around or do you know exactly whats going to happen in the book?
yikes I kinda do both?? if it's a book I'm really passionate about it's all planned out on a whiteboard somewhere but if it's just for fun I skip around a lot.

Have you ever, while outlining chapters, skipped one because you didn't know how to progress the plot to the next chapter?
absolutely, yes. it's tough to figure out just how you want to connect one plot point to another!
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Dec 21, 2017 8:13 pm

When writing a book do you skip around or do you know exactly what's going to happen in the book?
Neither XD I try to write in a straight line, so to speak, but I don't always have a clear idea on what I'm doing XD


Have you ever, while outlining chapters, skipped one because you didn't know how to progress the plot to the next chapter?
Nah; I'm new to outlining tbh~
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby winged-backpack » Fri Dec 22, 2017 2:20 am

When writing a book do you skip around or do you know exactly what's going to happen in the book?
I'm very pro-planning when it comes to books, so I'm on team know-exactly-what's-going-to-happen.

Have you ever, while outlining chapters, skipped one because you didn't know how to progress the plot to the next chapter?
Now, to completely contradict my last answer by saying I don't actually outline my chapters. With 10,000 Doors, I have a list of every door with a small (1-5 word) description of what's behind it. How Femie reacts and what happens in between the doors just sort of falls into place while I'm writing ^^'

Okay, I think it's getting to the point where I'm just going to have to abandon my advent challenge. I just have lost all my passion and inspiration for writing right now (don't you just love depression). I might go back to the prompts sometimes but I just cannot find the fire I need to actually get on with them.
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