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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby ~Teya~ » Thu Nov 16, 2017 8:21 am

Arya22 wrote:Alright now so I'd like some feedback on this? Thank you to anyone that answers!! It doesn't have any story around it, it's just a tiny piece of writing I tried doing differently.

    We were walking down the pine-covered path, surrounded by trees and ferns. My hand was in yours. We arrived in the clearing, and climbed onto the log, then sat down. "Do you remember how you imagined our first kiss to be?" The sun in front of us was a soft orange and pale pink. A gentle breeze blew around us. "You said it'd be at sunset." You slid closer. I leaned my head on your shoulder and your arm was around my waist, warm. Somehow, I looked up. you looked down. My body turned and we were face to face. My eyes closed, your lips were on mine. Soft, gentle. A slight prickle from the teenage fuzz you hadn't shaved off. I don't remember who pulled away. But we were just looking at each other. You smiled.

I think this is really nice, I honestly wouldn't change a thing, but I'm no expert. cx

What resources do you use to make sure your characters are well-developed? idk, I just write and write, and write some more XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby AriDeZu » Thu Nov 16, 2017 8:40 am

What resources do you use to make sure your characters re well developed?
My sister. We'll go onto google docs where we can type at the same time and have our characters interact. It's really fun.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Arya22 » Thu Nov 16, 2017 8:43 am

@Teya

Thank you!! Since it's so different from what I usually write, I wasn't sure how it had actually turned out. ^^ It's actually biographical
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby ~Teya~ » Thu Nov 16, 2017 12:35 pm

AriDeZu wrote:What resources do you use to make sure your characters re well developed?
My sister. We'll go onto google docs where we can type at the same time and have our characters interact. It's really fun.

I wish my sister did that with me, but she's not really into writing ;p; That sounds really fun ^^
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby anxious ghost » Thu Nov 16, 2017 2:18 pm

So, I have a trilogy planned out for my story, and my sister and I named the second and third books; The Unwanted King and The Tower of Souls. Book one is still tragically unnamed.
Also, I've done nothing for nano still. I've given up.

what helps you concentrate when you're writing?
Music, being alone, gloomy weather.

Character dialogue or details about the surroundings?
I prefer writing about surroundings, but I prefer reading dialogue.

What is the most important part of developing a world?
Don't forget the little things. Writing about mythology and politics is fun, but don't forget the little things like where sewage goes, who distributes food, etc.

Do you take any inspiration from any specific writers/media?
Maggie Stiefvater. I spend a lot of time on twitter and pinterest.

What's your favorite part about writing?
Character development and generalized brainstorming.

Do you carefully plan out your story or make it up as it goes along?
I don't do much planning before I start writing.

What is your favorite way to get ideas for writing?
Character development. I answer the questions I have written down, and that doesn't help me a whole lot, but then I fill the margins with ideas. Also, I tend to get inspiration from other books/movies/shows. And songs.

What resources do you use to make sure your characters are well-developed?
Idk. I have a set of questions I use.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Megaguirus » Thu Nov 16, 2017 2:38 pm

what helps you concentrate when you're writing?

Music, nighttime and being sure I will not be disturbed.

Character dialogue or details about the surroundings?

Dialogue! I don't describe my surroundings as much as I used to, I've noticed. Been trying to fix it, but character dialogue just seems more important.

What is the most important part of developing a world?

The culture(s) and creatures. Sure, you can have a world, but it would be very hard to write about it if you didn't have real inhabitants.

What's your favorite part about writing?

The characters. Just planning them, learning them, and then writing them. They've all become really close friends and parts of me.

Do you carefully plan out your story or make it up as it goes along?

A little bit of both, honestly. I always plan my story in my head (I've been writing plotpoints out more now), but then there are those times where things just come out of nowhere, as if the story's writing itself.

What is your favorite way to get ideas for writing?

Listening to music and gleaning ideas from media, like movies or books.

What resources do you use to make sure your characters are well-developed?

Not many, actually. I used to use roleplay forms, but those soon felt repetitive and asked questions that don't really fit (what kind of music do they like, what kind of car do they drive. Dude, they're dinosaurs, they are unknown to both of those things). The resources are mostly in my head, now. I interview them, I write short little stories of them in certain situations, I lay back and talk with them in my mind, learning them. You know, the usual stuff. I'm not crazy I swear.

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Yep! I didn't used to, but there are just some songs that really fit certain characters, I can't help but stick it to them. I've started a little list, now, to be honest. Some special characters have even found more than one song! I've found this, too, helps me learn them.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Yubel Fated » Thu Nov 16, 2017 6:46 pm

Do you have certain songs that fit certain characters? Theme songs, so to speak?

Actually yes I do. A lot of my Ocs have a theme song.

what helps you concentrate when you're writing?

Silence?

Character dialogue or details about the surroundings?

Ummmmmmmmm Details about the surroundings.


What's your favorite part about writing?

My favorite part about writing ? Um.... being able to draw in different people with different characters. Different strokes for different folks yanno? Worlds you can explore deeper into. Fff I'm gonna reference Homestuck again as I did later in the post. There are a ton of different characters and lore that are just so great. From the Ancestors to the Dancestors, from just how many multiverses there are in a single Sburb/Sgrub session. And trust me. there are a lot.

Its the glee that people get from reading what someone has written the world you may or may not have created. Getting to explore deeper into a world someone else has created or you have created yourself. Seeing how much you can get away with within a written work. Feeling as if you're apart of the action just as much as say John or Dave are as you're writing an action scene.

Until you get writers block and go flop somewhere.

That is my favorite part about writing.

Do you carefully plan out your story or make it up as it goes along?

What is planning xD To be honest, its more of the latter in my case though it often backfires.

What is your favorite way to get ideas for writing?

I normally like long road-trips, my family used to have to take trips up to St George and Las Vegas, which sadly was pretty often in some cases, so I'd have plenty of time to think about what to do next on the road. However that's proven horrible without something to write down the ideas with my short term memory and all.

I don't live around this area anymore so this isn't giving away my location at all I swear on Karkat Vantas' Mutant blood color :T

But if i'm making a fanfiction, Ae being Tempting Fate and Prisoner of Galra, I normally like to look at the base material. For Pokemon Black I like to watch Lets Plays to get an idea for what to do next as I don't have the game anymore I sometimes even look at other Nuzlockes to draw inspiration for something in the book. I haven't tried writing for Prisoner of Galra for this reason however now that I have a place to watch it it might start making reappearances.

What resources do you use to make sure your characters are well-developed?

........... I don't. That's probably a problem though xD Though I do have a file where I was asking my Oc Arianna various questions so I guess that counts???


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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Nov 16, 2017 7:08 pm

winged-backpack wrote:@ranger
I didn't die, I'm just not doing nano so I'm kinda feeling out of place atm
We can sit together in the non-NaNo corner and eat chips then XD


BucketORandomness wrote:Random character development thought: My creative writing teacher says you should be able to order for your charrie at a restaurant. You could also, however, fill out a college application for them. Those things ask for all kinds of information and specifics.
Ooh. Tbh I wouldn't know what to order myself at a restaurant, but I can try find me a college application form XD


Do you have certain songs that fit certain characters? Theme songs, so to speak?
Tragically, I'm better at finding songs for other people's books and characters XD
Although Wren did point out that Refugee by Kansas fits Em really well! As does Home by Phillip Phillips. So that's pretty cool C:


What resources do you use to make sure your characters are well-developed?
I use this set of interview questions, usually, and I think it's worked pretty well so-far?
For the first time ever, I've actually nearly finished filling one out!! :D


WinterSerperior wrote:@Ranger

I kinda died. But that was mostly because I was thinking about leaving the Lazy Writers that and things came up.
Aw dear. I hope things are sorted out now! c:


Do you use any kind of oc sheet?
Mind explaining what that is? XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Yubel Fated » Thu Nov 16, 2017 7:18 pm

@ Ranger

Basically what it is is an oc spreadsheet to help with making characters :T

I had a long drawn out written t hing but my internet decided that it was going to disconnect me and erase everything :T















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I'm not your protagonist I'm not even my own
I don't know anything I don't even know what I don't know

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And if you look outside you'll see disintegrating trees















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Name: Shadow
Profile: Judai/Jaden Yuki
Previous: Sora (Kingdom Hearts)
Call me anything though! So be creative!
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby cherubim » Thu Nov 16, 2017 9:16 pm

        usually I'd be answering questions but I have recently lost my writing mojo and am at a loss here. I have done my english creative writing (well, somewhat; I have started three different stories and only one was finished because I cannot make up my mind) and I've all but lost any motivating to write more. I feel horrible because I have roleplay partners on AS that are awaiting my replies and I just can't get to it - that, and I hate leaving stories unfinished. does anyone have any tips to getting over an intense writing block? or just simply getting motivation to write?

        also! I remember there was talk of someone possibly making a thread dedicated to writing fanfiction and I was totally up for that, so does anyone know if that exists? because if not I'd happily make the thread. hey, maybe that may help me!
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