*critique me* (you post, I critique)

My gallery · by **Cadin Araceli** » Sat Feb 20, 2016 7:00 am

Tanetane wrote:Thank you for the critique!

I agree with the part about them not flowing properly.
Hmm, I'll try and practice with flow. Thank you!

Of course! Let me know if you have any questions or anything!!!

My gallery · by **-voidcat** » Sun Feb 21, 2016 5:53 pm

Could you critique what parts of this ongoing piece I have up on CS?

My gallery · by **Cadin Araceli** » Tue Feb 23, 2016 8:00 am

I will work on that....it might take me a while tho haha you have a lot! All other works finished!!!!

My gallery · by **Amethyst The Gem** » Tue Feb 23, 2016 3:39 pm

Confide in me

hey there. This is a Star Wars Fanfic, based a little on the Clone Wars series.

I'd love any critique, positive or negative. just nothing too harsh please.

also can the critique please be PM'd?

My gallery · by **Cadin Araceli** » Wed Feb 24, 2016 8:08 pm

*bump*

Flight Rising · by **L.V.L** » Fri Feb 26, 2016 2:50 am

Marking. <3

My gallery · by **Cadin Araceli** » Fri Feb 26, 2016 7:01 am

MxicanGrizzlyBear is one of our new critiques!
Thank you for offering to help me, and everyone else!
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My gallery · by **Cadin Araceli** » Fri Feb 26, 2016 6:47 pm

watermelon. is one of our new critiques!
Thank you for offering to help me, and everyone else!
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My gallery · by **Shadow,** » Sun Feb 28, 2016 4:05 am

Can you please critique the prologue of this story I am writing? It doesn't have a title yet though.

http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2975098#p96030350

My gallery · by **Cadin Araceli** » Sun Feb 28, 2016 4:05 am

Lady Raven is one of our new critiques!
Thank you for offering to help me, and everyone else!
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