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A song writer in your mist...

Postby DogLife. » Thu Sep 24, 2015 3:06 am

Hello. I am DogLife., the author of The School For Angels And Devils, but i am also a passionate singer/songwriter. I preform with my choir, but we are not like a church school choir, we let our hair loose and have a laugh. I guess as some of my mates would say, i kinda have a gift for writing songs, and i want your support. Nearly every one on this site has given me some support for something or another. And i am going to post songs i write on here. Everyone. But i need your support. I have decided to ask for help.


I am in need of constructive criticism, make it as harsh as you like! I need you all to help out! And one more thing, should i find a way to audio record myself and put links up here? This is why I need you guys! Thanks... :D


The Songs

Ocean Blue
Night Wolf
Betrayal
Forgive and Never Forget
Viper


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Ocean Blue

Postby DogLife. » Sun Sep 27, 2015 9:43 am

Sometimes I hate me,
I hope you don't.
Sometimes I hate my looks,
But now I won't.
Cause you can light up a new me, Show me the light.
And I can finally,
Give up my fight.

Cause you
Light up my world for me
From the pit so dark
Swept out to sea.
Your eyes so blue
Ocean blue
You taught me to trust
Like I taught you...
Like I taught you...


In another time,
Another place,
You did not see the light
Gave up the race
I came out to help you right then
To win the game
Now you are not sullen
I'm not a shame.

Cause you
Light up my world for me
From the pit so dark
Swept out to sea.
Your eyes so blue
Ocean blue
You taught me to trust again
Like I taught you...
Like I taught you...


I trust you so much
I hope you trust me
Ocean blue eyes
That calming smile
Banished all bad times
Brought out a new me
I really need you...
Now...

Cause you
Light up my world for me
From the pit so dark
Swept out to sea.
Your eyes so blue
Ocean blue
You taught me to trust
Like I taught you...
Like I taught you...

Thank you...

































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Night Wolf

Postby DogLife. » Thu Oct 08, 2015 3:57 am


I am wild as lightning,
You will never know when I will strike,
You can never contain me,
I will scream and I will fight.
I am savage as the wind that tears my eyes,
As brutal as the Wolf where mystery lies,
Try to catch me if you dare,
Once I was here now I am there...

Awwwoooooooooooooo
Awwwoooooooooooooo
Awwwoooooooooooooo
Awwwoooooooooooooo

I haunt your sleep at night,
Every dream in your mind,
I am the wolf
I am the deamon
I kill for joy
Chace the steady sleepers
You will never know when i will strike
For no cage in the world can contain me
No heart in the world can tame me
No love in the world can change me
I am the Night Wolf...

Awwwoooooooooooooo
I chase the good times away
Fierce as a lightning bolt.
Awwwoooooooooooooo
I come back again
The gift that keeps on giving
Awwwoooooooooooooo
For no cage in the world can contain me
No heart in the world can tame me
No love in the world can change me
I am the Night Wolf...


Your lost in the night,
A prey that i will fight,
Dont plead it wont change my mind
I will come back again some time
I kill for joy
Chase the steady sleepers
You will never know when i will strike
For no cage in the world can contain me
No heart in the world can tame me
No love in the world can change me
I am the Night Wolf...

Awwwoooooooooooooo
I chase the good times away
Fierce as a lightning bolt.
Awwwoooooooooooooo
I come back again
The gift that keeps on giving
Awwwoooooooooooooo
For no cage in the world can contain me
No heart in the world can tame me
No love in the world can change me
I am the Night Wolf...


Never trust the wolf inside,
You must run and you must hide,
Run faster then the light,
Never give up and always fight!
Awwwoooooooooooooo

Awwwoooooooooooooo
I chase the good times away
Fierce as a lightning bolt.
Awwwoooooooooooooo
I come back again
The gift that keeps on giving
Awwwoooooooooooooo
For no cage in the world can contain me
No heart in the world can tame me
No love in the world can change me
I am the Night Wolf...

































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Re: A song writer in your mist...

Postby DogLife. » Tue Mar 01, 2016 6:16 am

Wishes

A dove,
The symbol of peace,
You travel,
To catch tomorrow's rays,
And to that,
I cannot compete.
Don't you love
The warmth the sun gives,
Golden in the sky.
Don't you love
The harmony
When you feel you could fly...

But when I walk
To tomorrow's rays
There's a shadow
Holding me in my mind,
Telling me stop
What about the lies?
I've got to know
Just got to know

How many wishes can one girl make?
How many hearts does she have to break?
How many lies are there to take?
How hard is a truth to create?
I am a void
A void of sadness
I am a void
A void of madness
I always try
To be brave
But there is only so many
Wishes to be made

You know the rumor
Of pennies in the well
You know the rumor
Of a magic spell
And of wishes
Coming true.
Don't you cry
At the ghost of you
The path was clear and true
Don't you cry
At how you were
At how nieve...

But when I walk
To tomorrow's rays
There's a shadow
Holding me in my mind,
Telling me stop
What about the lies?
I've got to know
Just got to know

How many wishes can one girl make?
How many hearts does she have to break?
How many lies are there to take?
How hard is a truth to create?
I am a void
A void of sadness
I am a void
A void of madness
I always try
To be brave
But there is only so many
Wishes to be made

I don't need your pity
I don't need your love
I don't need your tears
Falling from above
Can you stay strong
When your falling apart
I don't need your tears...
Do I need your love?

A dove
The symbol of peace
But now
It's different to me
And that
Is called being me
You need the darkness
The shadows
The balance it brings
You need the light
The smiling sun
Feel the peace

But when I walk
To tomorrow's rays
There's a shadow
Holding me in my mind,
Telling me stop
What about the lies?
I've got to know
Just got to know

How many wishes can one girl make?
How many hearts does she have to break?
How many lies are there to take?
How hard is a truth to create?
I am a void
A void of sadness
I am a void
A void of madness
I always try
To be brave
But there is only so many
Wishes to be made

How many wishes can one girl make?
How many hearts does she have to break?
How many lies are there to take?
How hard is a truth to create?
I am a void
A void of sadness
I am a void
A void of madness
I always try
To be brave
But there is only so many
Wishes to be made

































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