[boxcarr]

This one is up for adoption. Lots of spots. <3
This girl is blind in her right eye. Tell me about it? :3

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[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b] Female
[b]Short Story About That Eye:[/b]
[b]Extra:[/b]

Note: You are only allowed ONE extra! It can be ONE piece of art, or ONE personality thing, or a theme song or something. Up to you, and the extra is optional.

The story about the eye should be under 500 words please. ;3

Prettying up the form is alright, and ordering art is also okay.

End date is after this reaches page three [the first post on page three will count].


[Just saying that the glow on this Lumi is a very light yellow, not white. x3]


Won by mimi26188.

[mimi26188]

Username: mimi26188
Name: Glowstar
Gender: Female
Short Story About That Eye: As she was walking into the forest she was collecting herbs for a very special medicine since his grandma was sick. She could see perfectly. She found rosemary, nuts for ointment and more. She picked up some green leaves but she didn't notice that there was stinging nettle right behind the green leaves and he picked it up along with the green leaves. She walked home happily but she took a rest for a while. She held the herbs close to her. The stinging nettle the closest to her face, She twisted and turned in her sleep accidentally hitting the stinging nettle right in her eye. Once she woke up the world to her was blurry and she noticed that the stinging nettle was right there beside her...
Extra: A poem for the blind: All but blind
In his chambered hole,
Gropes for worms
The four-clawed mole.

All but blind
In the burning day,
The barn owl
Blunders on her way.

And blind as are
These three to me,
So blind to someone
I must be.
fixed the errors i noticed the gender changing A LOT in my story sorry and fixed the spelling errors as well anything else?

[boxcarr]

Bump.

[mimi26188]

are we waiting for more forms?

[boxcarr]

Yeah, I'm really hoping for more people to enter. :/
I don't feel that I can just give this one to you, especially with so many mistakes on your form. '^^

[mimi26188]

er what mistakes i'l fix em. i just realy want this lumi

[boxcarr]

The spelling, grammatical errors, and technical errors such as lack of spaces between words, and the random switching of the Lumi's gender throughout the form. :/

[mimi26188]

err well i noticed that my jeyboard is runningout of batery and i renewed them yesterday il edit it

[boxcarr]

Hm. I'd like a few more entries before I end this, but if this doesn't get more people by tomorrow, then it'll be an auto-win.

[mimi26188]

did i win her?? ( sorry if i annoyed you)