by CupidCola » Sat Jun 24, 2017 9:33 am
Dialogue Sets!
Pg 1-4
Pinestorm- "Typical of Moondust.. She leaves me out of any patrols. I'm the strongest here, I should be in every patrol!"
*GoldStar passes by
Pinestorm-"Hello, Goldstar."
Goldstar-"greetings pinestorm,"
*Camera goes to Med. den
Snaketail-”Are we running low on anything, LeafPaw?"
Wavepelt -he moved around
Snaketail-"It's alright WavePelt, go ahead and hunt something for yourself."
Leafpaw-"I believe we are missing a bit of chickweed and feverfew."
Blackclaw- he walked in his tail bleeding (CLAY)
Leafpaw- "what happened?!”
In the background
Pinestorm-"That's a mighty fine piece of prey right there. I'd be more than glad to share a meal with you if Goldstar declines."
Mintleaf- "Blackclaw, are you alright? What happened?”
Blackclaw - “Branch fell on my tail, a big one..”
Leafpaw- "Oh, ok!" he grabbed some cobweb, then he turned toward mint leaf and continued "is this right?"
Mintleaf- "Wrap the cobwebs around his wound. It'll help stop the bleeding." She said, "But after the bleeding stops, you'll need to put more herbs on to prevent infection. Do you know what we'd use then?"
Leafpaw- "Chervil root?”
Mintleaf- "You learn quick, you're going to be a valuable medicine cat in the future. Now, go treat Blackclaw's wounds before his tail falls off."
Leafpaw - “Ok! There ya go!just don't move it too much, also, make sure to watch your tail for awhile."
Snaketail - "Hey, I'm gonna go fetch for some Chickweed and FeverFew. If my brother comes in looking for me, tell him I'm away getting more supplies. How stupid of me to not grab any bundles. Ack, whatever, I'll make due."
-Wavepelt gave Pinestorm a look in the background
Pinestorm- in the background "Finally, good prey. All I've had for moons are scrawny mice. Doesn't really help keep my strength."
Mintleaf - "I'll make sure to tell Wavepelt if he asks." She said, before sitting next to Leafpaw. "Have Blacktail stay in a nest here for a night or two. I'll tell Goldstar, and check if we need any other herbs aside from what Snaketail went to get."
Mintleaf- "Hello, Wavepelt. Are you looking for Snaketail?"
Pinestorm-"What's with that cat? He just gave up a good rabbit."
Snaketail - "The breeze was painful today, all the supplies blew away 2 times and it took me the first time to have to gather new herbs. Nevermind that, MintLeaf, where would you like these to go? And would you like WavePelt to go hunt for us?"
Mintleaf-"Sounds dreadful." He said, though sounded amused. She then flicked her tail to some of her herbs. "You can put them next to the marigold. And hunt for us? I think Wavepelt would rather prefer if we all went with him to hunt. Besides, you've been getting all the herbs lately, I need to get out of here for a while."
Snaketail- "Heh, alright. Stretching my legs, even more, shouldn't hurt like the wind did. WavePelt knows all the good places where the Rabbits are the plumpest and the Squirrels and birds are either too fat or lazy to get away."
Pg 4-10
Page 4
Mintleaf: "Really? That's great. Now that we can catch a lot of prey here we won't have to hear Pinestorm's whining about his 'scrawny mice'!"
Goldstar: "Good Morning, Moondust."
Pinestorm: (Says Bitterly) "Up later than usual I see.." (Turns to Goldstar) "You can have the rest of my hare. Wavepelt wanted you to have it anyway."
Moondust: (Glances confused at Pinestorm and turns to Goldstar) "Good Morning Goldstar. How has your Morning been so far?"
Goldstar: "It's been good." (Glances at Pinestorm) "Don't worry about him. He's probably just mad that you're deputy."
Moondust: (Shrugs) "Seems like a logical reason. Better me than him." (Shoots a heated glance at Pinestorm)
Pinestorm: (Rolls his eyes) "I just think you could do better, Moondust." (Ignores Moondust, looks at Goldstar) "I just want what's better for the clan like a deputy who reflects your phenomenal leadership skills."
Goldstar: (Raises Voice) "I think you should learn to respect my choices. Even if I wanted to pick you, you haven't met the criteria yet! Like taking over the responsibility of training an apprentice! Moondust was the best choice!"
Pinestorm: "Because you've been neglecting me! It's been a while since you've sent me on a patrol and leave alone that! At this rate I'll probably be an elder before I get any apprentice!"
Page 5
Moondust: (Twitches tail and lays nose on Goldstar's shoulder in comfort)
Goldstar: (Forces fur flat) "Fine. Brownpaw has yet to be mentored and as for the patrols you must've missed them."
Moondust: (Smirks)
Pinestorm: "Missed patrols?" (Hisses) "How could I miss patrols when I wake up before Moondust everyday?!" (Scowls and glares hatefully at Moondust)
Goldstar: "You do know we assign patrols near the pond, right? Didn't your mentor tell you?"
Moondust: "And you do know that we gather them at noon, right?"
Pinestorm: (Frowns and lashes tail) "Even then. You never assign me to them and I'm stuck in camp until I go out to hunt independently."
Page 6
Moondust: (Politely) "Maybe you should ask about when we go next time."
Pinestorm: (Lashes tail and huffs) "Fine. When is the next patrol?"
Goldstar: (Turns to Moondust) "Moondust?"
Moondust: "A little afternoon."
Pinestorm: (Flick's ear) "Fine. Brownpaw and I will be there."
Moondust: "Sounds like a plan." (Turns away)
Pinestorm: (Narrows eyes and watches Moondust) "Moondust, that's the smallest vole I've ever seen. Wavepelt caught this hate for me and I've barely touched it. You can have it."
Page 7
Moondust: "If Wavepelt caught it, then shouldn't you be sharing it with him? Hmm?" (Finishes vole and narrows eyes suspiciously at Pinestorm)
Pinestorm: "I would share it with him if he was actually present here, he's hunting. It's not like I can drag him back here to share." (Huffs) "Besides, I was just trying to be generous. No need to get hostile."
Moondust: (Sighs) "Alright. What do exactly do you want? If you're being nice to me all of a sudden that means you want something. Speak up."
Pinestorm: "I want nothing more than praise and admiration for my clan mates." (Waves tail) "Ever think that I am just trying to start fresh?"
Moondust: "Well, I suppose you are now. My apologies, I'm just not used to this 'new you'." (Says uneasily)
Pinestorm: "All is forgiven. This perfectly good prey shouldn't be wasted. I think my clan mates deserve to eat it instead of me."
Moondust: "I guess I'll eat it then." (Starts eating, glances up at Pinestorm every once in a while)
Pinestorm: "I know I'm a good looking cat and all but that doesn't mean keep looking at me as you eat. It's kind of creepy, you know?" (Says jokingly)
Moondust: (Rolls eyes and finishes eating; gets up and licks paws) "Would you like me to go hunting as an apology?"
(Camera switches to Snaketail and Wavepelt)
Snaketail: "Oh yeah. I forgot all about that cat and his obnoxious whines about food." (Chuckles)
Wavepelt: (Gets up and motions for them to follow)
Snaketail: (Follows Wavepelt) "You coming, Mintleaf?" (Purrs and runs to catch up with Wavepelt)
Page 8
Mintleaf: "Of course, I wouldn't miss it." (Follows Wavepelt and Snaketail)
(Camera switches to Pinestorm and Moondust)
Pinestorm: (Stretches) "Sure. Where do you have in mind?"
(Camera switches to Bloodmuzzle)
Bloodmuzzle: (Yawns and rolls in nest; hisses as she rolls on a thorn) "Youch! Thorns in my nest?! What's next, splinters down my throat?!" (Hissed angrily and curls up)
(Camera switches to Blackclaw and Moonpaw)
Blackclaw: "Hi Moonpaw."
(Camera switches to Bloodmuzzle)
Bloodmuzzle: (Drags herself out of nest into clearing)
(Camera switches to Blackclaw and Moonpaw)
Moonpaw: "Hi Blackclaw." (Rises) "How are you?"
Blackclaw: "I'm good."
Moonpaw: "That's good." (Flicks tail)
Page 9
Blackclaw: "Do you want to go hunting or do some battle training?"
Moonpaw: "Hunting sounds nice." (Stretches; bones crack unusually loud)
(Camera changes to Snaketail, Wavepelt, and Mintleaf)
Snaketail: (Walks side by side with Mintleaf; Clears throat) "How much of my brother's sign language do you know about? I could help you with some of the signs if you want."
Wavepelt: (Sighs softly to keep himself alert)
Mintleaf: "Well, I know basics. Like simple questions, yes or no, and greetings. But I can't say I'm as great as you when it comes to keeping conversation." (Glances at Wavepelt)
(Camera switches to Blackclaw)
Blackclaw: "Alright then." (Points to an area) "Go try over there."
(Camera switches to Bloodmuzzle)
Bloodmuzzle: (Pads over to Moonpelt) "Hey Moonpelt. Want to come hunting? We should bring another cat in case... what about Pumpkinfur? You should go ask her."
Page 10
Moonpelt: "Sure." (Flexes claws in the dust)
Bloodmuzzle: (Pads towards Pumpkinfur) "Hey Pumpkinfur! Would you like to come hunting with Moonpelt and I?"
Pumpkinfur: (Happily) "I would love to!" (Purrs) "I know a good place or two to catch plenty of prey!"
Bloodmuzzle: "Great! Let's go then! Pumpkinfur, do you mind leading?"
Moonpelt: (Waits near entrance of the camp)
(Camera switches momentarily to Snowfeather)
Snowfeather: (Lays down in nursery and lets out a screech as something pricks her belly)
(Camera switches back to Bloodmuzzle)
Bloodmuzzle: (Pricks ears) "Maybe we should go... like now!" (Bolts out of camp)
Pumpkinfur: (Runs after Bloodmuzzle) "Who was that?! Why are we running away?!" (Alarmed expression)
(Camera switches to Snowfeather)
Mouseheart: (Enters nursery) "Snowfeather! Oh dear... are you alright?" (Questions her worriedly)
Snowfeather: (Looks at Mouseheart) "No! I am not alright! I need a stick, now!" (Yells painfully)
Mouseheart: (Nods and dashes out of the nursery, panicked; returns moment later with a stick in her jaws; gives to Snowfeather) "I-I'll go find S-Snaketail and Mintleaf! They'll know what to do! I can't possibly to this by myself!"
Last edited by
CupidCola on Sat Jun 24, 2017 11:52 am, edited 3 times in total.
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