Dear Expos. Teacher,
Okay... I'm sorry but what do you want from me?! I understand that my first essay I gave you was rocky and had a lot of issue but I really tried on this next one, and you STILL gave me a D ranged grade. It was higher than my last essay but... how much must I dumb down my writing for you to understand it? I really tried on this one. I seriously have no other ideas how to please you. Throughout my English classes, my writing has been acceptable. I love writing and being very precise with everything and turning anything in to you is probably the worst thing I could be doing. I'll look over the mistakes but I swear... if this one says I didn't follow the prompt, which my parents agreed I was on the money, I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO. I'm trying to make a comeback. I'm trying to show you that I can overcome your English obstacles. I've shown you that I know my vocabulary words. Why can't I show you I know how to write? I'm just frustrated. I hate writing prompted essays as is. But PLEASE I beg of you. Tell me exactly what a good essay looks like to you do I can write mine "correctly". This is killing my grade. I've never failed a class mind you. I've never had to write on this thread about a teacher before. But I don't know what you want me to do. I could pull the all time excuse and say you don't like me, but I've never done anything worth not liking. I even edited that paper to make it more simple so I could get my points across!
I... I just need you to tell me exactly what you want. You don't give us any rubrics. You explain things to the absolute minimum. You lecture but it literally means nothing. For the sake of graduating your class, I need. To know. What. You. Want. I do not want to go through your class again. I don't want to. So thanks. Thanks for the extra stress and tears. I knew I'd like your class.
-The quiet student who just wants to make their teachers happy.