Goldclan series discussion.

[crescent knight]

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Bloodmuzzle comes in the next episode though, right?

[~Kokichi~]

Nope in the first.. well if she is here between 1-10 p. she is in ep. 1


or she is in ep. 2 if she is in 11-20 p.

[Rotzalot]

From what I know, she does. You'll be voicing her, correct?

Also, how's this sound?

10 FPS, 2 minute episodes (for now, as I'm the only animator so I can't make things too long).

That would total around 1200 frames each episode. Also, I'm pretty nervous about voicing Pinestorm. My voice is girly.. His is deep, and intimidating. How am I to pull that off?

[crescent knight]

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You COULD use a voice editor.
And yes, I will be voicing Bloodmuzzle unless I get sick.
Then Nugget will be voicing her I think.
Also Bloodmuzzle first appears on page 8

[CupidCola]

I can voice act any female cats if needed.

[~Kokichi~]

thenshe is in ep.1 Ok maybe 2 min. of animation cuz i want to add more .3.

I'm just going too eBay to but more LPS cats for some stuff

[crescent knight]

I could TRY to animate, y'know, just as a test.
Monzo what program would you normally use to animate??

[Rotzalot]

Most commonly used on web series is Flash.

Try pencil though, if you're a beginner.

And Nugget, how fast would you want episodes uploaded? I think the least amount of time I could finish is a week, may take longer though.

[~Kokichi~]

at most a month apart at least a week ok .3. when I get the whole script ill tell you what i kinda want animated..

[Captain. A. Stark.]

Script for Pages 4-10

Page 4

Mintleaf: "Really? That's great. Now that we can catch a lot of prey here we won't have to hear Pinestorm's whining about his 'scrawny mice'!"

Goldstar: "Good Morning, Moondust."

Pinestorm: (Says Bitterly) "Up later than usual I see.." (Turns to Goldstar) "You can have the rest of my hare. Wavepelt wanted you to have it anyway."

Moondust: (Glances confused at Pinestorm and turns to Goldstar) "Good Morning Goldstar. How has your Morning been so far?"

Goldstar: "It's been good." (Glances at Pinestorm) "Don't worry about him. He's probably just mad that you're deputy."

Moondust: (Shrugs) "Seems like a logical reason. Better me than him." (Shoots a heated glance at Pinestorm)

Pinestorm: (Rolls his eyes) "I just think you could do better, Moondust." (Ignores Moondust, looks at Goldstar) "I just want what's better for the clan like a deputy who reflects your phenomenal leadership skills."

Goldstar: (Raises Voice) "I think you should learn to respect my choices. Even if I wanted to pick you, you haven't met the criteria yet! Like taking over the responsibility of training an apprentice! Moondust was the best choice!"

Pinestorm: "Because you've been neglecting me! It's been a while since you've sent me on a patrol and leave alone that! At this rate I'll probably be an elder before I get any apprentice!"

Page 5

Moondust: (Twitches tail and lays nose on Goldstar's shoulder in comfort)

Goldstar: (Forces fur flat) "Fine. Brownpaw has yet to be mentored and as for the patrols you must've missed them."

Moondust: (Smirks)

Pinestorm: "Missed patrols?" (Hisses) "How could I miss patrols when I wake up before Moondust everyday?!" (Scowls and glares hatefully at Moondust)

Goldstar: "You do know we assign patrols near the pond, right? Didn't your mentor tell you?"

Moondust: "And you do know that we gather them at noon, right?"

Pinestorm: (Frowns and lashes tail) "Even then. You never assign me to them and I'm stuck in camp until I go out to hunt independently."

Page 6

Moondust: (Politely) "Maybe you should ask about when we go next time."

Pinestorm: (Lashes tail and huffs) "Fine. When is the next patrol?"

Goldstar: (Turns to Moondust) "Moondust?"

Moondust: "A little after noon."

Pinestorm: (Flicks ear) "Fine. Brownpaw and I will be there."

Moondust: "Sounds like a plan." (Turns away)

Pinestorm: (Narrows eyes and watches Moondust) "Moondust, that's the smallest vole I've ever seen. Wavepelt caught this hate for me and I've barely touched it. You can have it."

Page 7

Moondust: "If Wavepelt caught it, then shouldn't you be sharing it with him? Hmm?" (Finishes vole and narrows eyes suspiciously at Pinestorm)

Pinestorm: "I would share it with him if he was actually present here, he's hunting. It's not like I can drag him back here to share." (Huffs) "Besides, I was just trying to be generous. No need to get hostile."

Moondust: (Sighs) "Alright. What do exactly do you want? If you're being nice to me all of a sudden that means you want something. Speak up."

Pinestorm: "I want nothing more than praise and admiration for my clan mates." (Waves tail) "Ever think that I am just trying to start fresh?"

Moondust: "Well, I suppose you are now. My apologies, I'm just not used to this 'new you'." (Says uneasily)

Pinestorm: "All is forgiven. This perfectly good prey shouldn't be wasted. I think my clan mates deserve to eat it instead of me."

Moondust: "I guess I'll eat it then." (Starts eating, glances up at Pinestorm every once in a while)

Pinestorm: "I know I'm a good looking cat and all but that doesn't mean keep looking at me as you eat. It's kind of creepy, you know?" (Says jokingly)

Moondust: (Rolls eyes and finishes eating; gets up and licks paws) "Would you like me to go hunting as an apology?"

(Camera switches to Snaketail and Wavepelt)

Snaketail: "Oh yeah. I forgot all about that cat and his obnoxious whines about food." (Chuckles)

Wavepelt: (Gets up and motions for them to follow)

Snaketail: (Follows Wavepelt) "You coming, Mintleaf?" (Purrs and runs to catch up with Wavepelt)

Page 8

Mintleaf: "Of course, I wouldn't miss it." (Follows Wavepelt and Snaketail)

(Camera switches to Pinestorm and Moondust)

Pinestorm: (Stretches) "Sure. Where do you have in mind?"

(Camera switches to Bloodmuzzle)

Bloodmuzzle: (Yawns and rolls in nest; hisses as she rolls on a thorn) "Youch! Thorns in my nest?! What's next, splinters down my throat?!" (Hissed angrily and curls up)

(Camera switches to Blackclaw and Moonpaw)

Blackclaw: "Hi Moonpaw."

(Camera switches to Bloodmuzzle)

Bloodmuzzle: (Drags herself out of nest into clearing)

(Camera switches to Blackclaw and Moonpaw)

Moonpaw: "Hi Blackclaw." (Rises) "How are you?"

Blackclaw: "I'm good."

Moonpaw: "That's good." (Flicks tail)

Page 9

Blackclaw: "Do you want to go hunting or do some battle training?"

Moonpaw: "Hunting sounds nice." (Stretches; bones crack unusually loud)

(Camera changes to Snaketail, Wavepelt, and Mintleaf)

Snaketail: (Walks side by side with Mintleaf; Clears throat) "How much of my brother's sign language do you know about? I could help you with some of the signs if you want."

Wavepelt: (Sighs softly to keep himself alert)

Mintleaf: "Well, I know basics. Like simple questions, yes or no, and greetings. But I can't say I'm as great as you when it comes to keeping conversation." (Glances at Wavepelt)

(Camera switches to Blackclaw)

Blackclaw: "Alright then." (Points to an area) "Go try over there."

(Camera switches to Bloodmuzzle)

Bloodmuzzle: (Pads over to Moonpelt) "Hey Moonpelt. Want to come hunting? We should bring another cat in case... what about Pumpkinfur? You should go ask her."

Page 10

Moonpelt: "Sure." (Flexes claws in the dust)

Bloodmuzzle: (Pads towards Pumpkinfur) "Hey Pumpkinfur! Would you like to come hunting with Moonpelt and I?"

Pumpkinfur: (Happily) "I would love to!" (Purrs) "I know a good place or two to catch plenty of prey!"

Bloodmuzzle: "Great! Let's go then! Pumpkinfur, do you mind leading?"

Moonpelt: (Waits near entrance of the camp)

(Camera switches momentarily to Snowfeather)

Snowfeather: (Lays down in nursery and lets out a screech as something pricks her belly)

(Camera switches back to Bloodmuzzle)

Bloodmuzzle: (Pricks ears) "Maybe we should go... like now!" (Bolts out of camp)

Pumpkinfur: (Runs after Bloodmuzzle) "Who was that?! Why are we running away?!" (Alarmed expression)

(Camera switches to Snowfeather)

Mouseheart: (Enters nursery) "Snowfeather! Oh dear... are you alright?" (Questions her worriedly)

Snowfeather: (Looks at Mouseheart) "No! I am not alright! I need a stick, now!" (Yells painfully)

Mouseheart: (Nods and dashes out of the nursery, panicked; returns moment later with a stick in her jaws; gives to Snowfeather) "I-I'll go find S-Snaketail and Mintleaf! They'll know what to do! I can't possibly to this by myself!"