Desription Contest (CLOSED)

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Can someone please write me a decent description for a new adoptable i'm making? They are called slugoos.
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winner receives 10 C$

what if i dont win?

'don't worry, you will get a pet.
a slugoo is about the size of a snail. they appear to be a cat with a snail like body. sometimes something goes wrong when they breed witch causes the ofsfpring to have defects. /such as a shell, atanne, etc/

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[boiledspaget]

Slugoos are a rare mix that look like a feline on the the top half of its body and a snail on the loser half. Slugoos are quite tiny, some have a variations of special mutations that led them to have different characteristics such as: shells, antennas, extra fur, and many other specific yet unique creations. Each slugoo comes with different personalities and preferences.

[Oravar]

Slugoo's, are a small little creature with the head and front paws of a shrunk ordinary feline however the bottom of their body is generally a different color than the feline part and have no legs nor tail in fact they have the end of a slug! As they slide around using their lower body to push them they make small 'mewing' noises, that sound like a newborn kitten. Their an amazing pet! They have the adorableness of a cat, but are also more harmless and seem to be even cuter from their slug genes. They're more harmless than a normal cat since they have no teeth! So if you happen to get bit by one, nothing will go wrong. Slugoos are a lovable pet, be sure to get your own today!
I hope this is good I hope to become a better writer, if anyone has advice/ constructive criticism then please share it

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Slugoo's, are a small little creature with the head and front paws of a shrunk ordinary feline however the bottom of their body is generally a different color than the feline part and have no legs nor tail in fact they have the end of a slug! As they slide around using their lower body to push them they make small 'mewing' noises, that sound like a newborn kitten. Their an amazing pet! They have the adorableness of a cat, but are also more harmless and seem to be even cuter from their slug genes. They're more harmless than a normal cat since they have no teeth! So if you happen to get bit by one, nothing will go wrong. Slugoos are a lovable pet, be sure to get your own today!
I hope this is good I hope to become a better writer, if anyone has advice/ constructive criticism then please share it

Slugoos are a rare mix that look like a feline on the the top half of its body and a snail on the loser half. Slugoos are quite tiny, some have a variations of special mutations that led them to have different characteristics such as: shells, antennas, extra fur, and many other specific yet unique creations. Each slugoo comes with different personalities and preferences.

Both VERY good!!