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Welcome to the madness that is Create a Clan! We're all friendly here; but don't trust Beechclan, they're a bunch of shady kiddos! I'm Dinolil1, owner of Moorclan!
vampiress_fox wrote:oh, dear, so sorry, i just reread your post and realized that you were talking about a person. "I'm Joy" has not been around for a while now (unless their name changed) and i thought you were saying it as a sentance not a name; so i assumed Streamclan was your first clan. so sorry, my mistake.
amethyst14 wrote:I liked it, though to be honest I found myself skimming over all who attended the funeral at first. Maybe if you cut that out or shrink it down? Unless you want to keep it. But I would say if you wanted to cut it somewhere and it still sounded okay would be after you named the kits.
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