SF Artist entry #1 - UFO by Nerrvoh

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SF Artist entry #1 - UFO

Postby Nerrvoh » Wed Feb 07, 2018 10:40 am

Those are such fun to color! The timer is way-off, had the tab left open. Critique is appreciated!
Uncommon Flit

EDITS:
____Common____
Whiskers

____Uncommon____
Claws
Small horns (7)
Small Ear shape edit
Sparkle/Glow

*Hope the shoulder glow isn't 'eye blinding' ^^
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Re: SF Artist entry #1 - UFO

Postby SkyGold » Wed Feb 07, 2018 11:32 am

I’ll help with some critique!

So firstly the colors. The dark blue, purple and reds and the blue and green look great together although with both the green and red in the design it doesn’t fit. You could change the pallete to either include the red or the green but not both(unless switching the blue for a different color that fits both that shade of red and green)

The glow on the shoulder seems a little out of place. It would match the other colors if they were by themselves but not when together. Perhaps with the color suggestions above, create a more extensive design that isn’t just focused on the shoulder for the glow.

Next, the edits. You did a great job on those, they seem mostly clean(with a bit of messiness where the horns connect to the body) and neatly done.
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Re: SF Artist entry #1 - UFO

Postby Nerrvoh » Wed Feb 07, 2018 11:55 am

Thank you!

Great critique, you have a very sharp eye to spot all the weak and strong spots.

You couldn't be more right about colors and the glow, it did seemed to be a bit off-ish for me, but I couldn't really see what is the problem. Would some of these would be considerable alternatives? (You'll need to scroll down a bit)

As for the edits, thank you (The struggle to make a decent whisker :lol: ) I'll try to clean those horns

*One question, can I edit it directly or do I need to make a second version?
Last edited by Nerrvoh on Wed Feb 07, 2018 12:34 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: SF Artist entry #1 - UFO

Postby SkyGold » Wed Feb 07, 2018 12:05 pm

I’m glad I could help! You can edit it directly but the best option is to make a separate version from the first so it can be compared.
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Re: SF Artist entry #1 - UFO

Postby Nerrvoh » Wed Feb 07, 2018 12:11 pm

Thank you very much for the response!
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