[Guest]

This part hs partial violence.That means you dont see tons and tons of blood on the picture but there are scenes in the story with blood.

"Scar!"Smoke scrreched with anger.
"Why did you kill my sister?"
"For what you did to me.I lived a happy life a long time ago.Then you came and gave me this scar ruined me life!"
"You know exactly why i gave you that scar."
"Oh really?"
"Yes,you were threating to slice me open.I use common sense and I defended myself"
"For that i killed your sister,end of story"

"Quick Wave use your powers I whispered"
"I can't,i just learned I have powers.Do you really think I know how to use them?!"
"Nevermind I can handle this."

Smoke leaped on Scar and clawed his back in a fury of rage.Scar then flipped him over and clawed his belly turning it bright red.Scar then flung him into an old building wall sending bricks toppling on him.Looking for a new match Scar walked up to wave with blood smeared on his teeth,probably from killing Willow and sneered in delight at her.Right as he was about to claw her a loud screech came running and hit Scar aside.It was a cat,and he had a gold ring on.He was an element cat!

[Mooncloud4]

Cool, I can't wait for part 6!!! ;3

[Mechanical-Paranoia]

This has a really cool story line! Will follow. Btw, I am a friend of Syla the person who told you to keep going.