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Huzzah!
Thankyou very much
Bet the death note 'fanfiction?' is lovely xD
Oh, oh, also:
Where I mentioned about the dog catchers names, obviously the cub wouldn't know them off by hand in first person, so could you have the dog catchers speaking to each other somewhere along the lines, and that's how he finds out the names?

-excited-

Might have to go get someone to draw him up now o_o

XD I'll add you to the slots list 83.

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Fohille: Mah mommeh is tellin' me to get to bed, so I won't be able to start today. I'll start, Oh, 4:00 EST tomorrow?

[Daniel]

Fohille: Mah mommeh is tellin' me to get to bed, so I won't be able to start today. I'll start, Oh, 4:00 EST tomorrow?

No idea what time that is in GMT, but that's perfectly fine xD
Sleep well!

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Fohille: Mah mommeh is tellin' me to get to bed, so I won't be able to start today. I'll start, Oh, 4:00 EST tomorrow?

No idea what time that is in GMT, but that's perfectly fine xD
Sleep well!

'Night!

[hlsmith]

Next Order still free?

I Want to Order!
Username: Hlsmith
Type o' Order: Chaptered Backstory
Who's Narrating: Desmond
Tense: Past tense
Setting: Setting changes as story goes on. Starts as Desmond being fifteen, and leaving rural home with pet. Then her purchasing riding dragon in arabian bazaar. Then, building of lab, and the mutiple minds she invades have their own settings.
Characters:
Name: Desmond Elizabeth Analee Walker
Height: 5'6
Weight: 130 lbs
Hair: Straight, Black, Comes to shoulder blades. White streak in front left side.
Style: She normally wears black. Black leather boots, Dark Skinnies, and a black leather trench over a black tee. On occation she'll put on a white tank for difficult machine work.
Occupation: Thought Stealer
Description: Desmond uses her own, hand built technology to break in and steal your most precious thoughts, memories, or ideas. She does this completely independantly, and for her own gain. She'll decide on her target, research them, and get close to them. Then she'll slip a drug into their drink or food that connects their mind to her machine. When she returns to her lab, she'll go into their subcontious, and appear in their thoughts the way the subcontiously see her.(examples include: little sister, student, and stripper) From their she'll take what she needs and exit the mind, having her prize become physical using another machine that taps her brain and transfers the item, or knowledge, into the real world.

Name: Kiniex
Height: From head to toe, 4 feet
Weight: 200 lbs
Species: Atrox
Description: Desmond's loving, bonded animal. He oftentimes defends her.
Link to picture: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=252842

Name: Imjussa Pushin (IM-juss-a PUSH-in)
Height: Roughly around the size of a standard horse
Species: Arabian Riding Dragon
Description: Desmond's highly intelligent mount. He can not speak, but his eyes tell all. He is a light olive colour, to blend in with the sand. Desmond trusts him deeply. He only goes into minds if Desmond severely needs him.
Plot: Desmond lives on a small farm on the prairie. She has 3 siblings; Amanda(6), Devon(4), and Charlie(4). Devon and Charlie are her twin brothers. She loves her family deeply, but wants to seek out something that will allow her intelligence to show. She decides to sneak out in the middle of the night with Kiniex, whom she's had for two years now. The pair travels to Arabia on a plane ticket given to them by a wealthy friend of the family who has known Desmond's plans to leave for a while, and also gave them money, tools, and machine parts. There Desmond buys new clothes, and a riding dragon from an interesting Bazaar. She uses the dragon to travel to an abandoned building in which she builds her lab under the radar.

Desmond was given the idea of thought stealing from the wealthy friend (Marcos), and also gained her first job from him; the assignment of breaking into a dirty US Lawyer's thoughts and discover the dirt he has on Marcos. When Desmond meets the lawyer, he imeadiately becomes sexually interested in her and begins to come on to her. She gently shoots him down, but allows his interest to be her way into his mind. When she returns to her lab she enters his subcontious.

Desmond appears in the lawyers thoughts as a stripper, and is forced onto the stage to privately dance for him. Kiniex, however is nowhere to be seen. Desmond climbs onto the fat man's lap to try and gain entry into his deepest thoughts. She straddles him, attempting to allow him his sick thoughts of her, so that he won't reject her in his head. To her surprise, he grabbs her butt and lifts her. He carries her into another room with a bed. Desmond begins to panic, but doesn't let it show. The lawyer drops her on the bed, and tells her he'll be right back. As soon as he's out of the room, Desmond picks the lock and escapes. Kiniex joins her from the next room. The quickly find the lawyer's office and Desmond begins to search the files. Soon guards are on them and Kiniex is fighting them off with some difficulty. Desmond finds Marcos' file as one guard gets by Kiniex. Desmond quickly hook kicks him in the face and the two escape.

Back at the lab, Marcos meets them and asks for his file. Desmond refuses to give him the file, unless he pays her $2,000 for her troubles, and an extra $1,000 for the file itself. Marcos pays her, and angrilly storms out of her lab.

Desmond continues to break into other minds, and has a good bit of fun doing it as well (you decide at least two other missions she goes on. One has to do with a desert setting and Imjussa being allowed into the mind. The details of all other missions are completely up to you.)

Finally, a young female psychologist arrives at Desmond's door. Desmond rejects the woman's pleas, until she hears what her job is. She must go into a young boy's mind and help remove memories of being left in a basket as his mother hid. Soldiers found and killed his mother, but not before she grabbed his basket. She was shot and she collapsed into his basket, crushing him. His aunt pleaded mercy and showed the soldiers the contents of the basket. They shot her, but spared the child. The five year old was suffering from severe PTSD, and it was Desmond's job to remove these memories to help relieve the child. Desmond agrees

In the child's mind, she arrives in a lovely meadow. A sunset-like hue fills the sky, and misty air surrounds her. She sheds her jacket and procedes over a tall hill. Down below, she sees a war zone. The area where the child's family was murders She charges into the child's home, finding the basket. She pulls the child out, and carries him up the hill and into the calm meadow. The sounds of gunshots and bombs can not be heard any more. The crying child stops, and looks up at Desmond. She held him until he fell asleep. Once he was asleep, she climbs the hill, only to see more meadow on the other side. In the child's mind, he was saved, nothing more, nothing less.

Desmond exits the mind and rethinks her motives for thought stealing. Moving out of her lab, she returns to the US and decides her next move with Kiniex and Imjussa at her side.(Fin)
Character Personalities: Desmond is kind, but sarcastic and kickass. She tries to hide her fear and weakness behind her intelligence, but inside she's still only 15.
Kiniex is loyal and playful. He loves spending quality time with Desmond. He's a typical dog, minus the fact he can switch to visciously protective in a second, and his extreme intellegence.
Imjussa is quiet, but also highly intelligent. He is kind and loyal, and will protect Desmond, but not quite like Kiniex.
Length: However many chapters it takes you to write this.
Pointers or any Other Things you Want to Specify: Ummm, nothing really. I'm brain dead, but if you have problems, please don' be afraid to ask.

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Next Order still free?

I Want to Order!
Username: Hlsmith
Type o' Order: Chaptered Backstory
Who's Narrating: Desmond
Tense: Past tense
Setting: Setting changes as story goes on. Starts as Desmond being fifteen, and leaving rural home with pet. Then her purchasing riding dragon in arabian bazaar. Then, building of lab, and the mutiple minds she invades have their own settings.
Characters:
Name: Desmond Elizabeth Analee Walker
Height: 5'6
Weight: 130 lbs
Hair: Straight, Black, Comes to shoulder blades. White streak in front left side.
Style: She normally wears black. Black leather boots, Dark Skinnies, and a black leather trench over a black tee. On occation she'll put on a white tank for difficult machine work.
Occupation: Thought Stealer
Description: Desmond uses her own, hand built technology to break in and steal your most precious thoughts, memories, or ideas. She does this completely independantly, and for her own gain. She'll decide on her target, research them, and get close to them. Then she'll slip a drug into their drink or food that connects their mind to her machine. When she returns to her lab, she'll go into their subcontious, and appear in their thoughts the way the subcontiously see her.(examples include: little sister, student, and stripper) From their she'll take what she needs and exit the mind, having her prize become physical using another machine that taps her brain and transfers the item, or knowledge, into the real world.

Name: Kiniex
Height: From head to toe, 4 feet
Weight: 200 lbs
Species: Atrox
Description: Desmond's loving, bonded animal. He oftentimes defends her.
Link to picture: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=252842

Name: Imjussa Pushin (IM-juss-a PUSH-in)
Height: Roughly around the size of a standard horse
Species: Arabian Riding Dragon
Description: Desmond's highly intelligent mount. He can not speak, but his eyes tell all. He is a light olive colour, to blend in with the sand. Desmond trusts him deeply. He only goes into minds if Desmond severely needs him.
Plot: Desmond lives on a small farm on the prairie. She has 3 siblings; Amanda(6), Devon(4), and Charlie(4). Devon and Charlie are her twin brothers. She loves her family deeply, but wants to seek out something that will allow her intelligence to show. She decides to sneak out in the middle of the night with Kiniex, whom she's had for two years now. The pair travels to Arabia on a plane ticket given to them by a wealthy friend of the family who has known Desmond's plans to leave for a while, and also gave them money, tools, and machine parts. There Desmond buys new clothes, and a riding dragon from an interesting Bazaar. She uses the dragon to travel to an abandoned building in which she builds her lab under the radar.

Desmond was given the idea of thought stealing from the wealthy friend (Marcos), and also gained her first job from him; the assignment of breaking into a dirty US Lawyer's thoughts and discover the dirt he has on Marcos. When Desmond meets the lawyer, he imeadiately becomes sexually interested in her and begins to come on to her. She gently shoots him down, but allows his interest to be her way into his mind. When she returns to her lab she enters his subcontious.

Desmond appears in the lawyers thoughts as a stripper, and is forced onto the stage to privately dance for him. Kiniex, however is nowhere to be seen. Desmond climbs onto the fat man's lap to try and gain entry into his deepest thoughts. She straddles him, attempting to allow him his sick thoughts of her, so that he won't reject her in his head. To her surprise, he grabbs her butt and lifts her. He carries her into another room with a bed. Desmond begins to panic, but doesn't let it show. The lawyer drops her on the bed, and tells her he'll be right back. As soon as he's out of the room, Desmond picks the lock and escapes. Kiniex joins her from the next room. The quickly find the lawyer's office and Desmond begins to search the files. Soon guards are on them and Kiniex is fighting them off with some difficulty. Desmond finds Marcos' file as one guard gets by Kiniex. Desmond quickly hook kicks him in the face and the two escape.

Back at the lab, Marcos meets them and asks for his file. Desmond refuses to give him the file, unless he pays her $2,000 for her troubles, and an extra $1,000 for the file itself. Marcos pays her, and angrilly storms out of her lab.

Desmond continues to break into other minds, and has a good bit of fun doing it as well (you decide at least two other missions she goes on. One has to do with a desert setting and Imjussa being allowed into the mind. The details of all other missions are completely up to you.)

Finally, a young female psychologist arrives at Desmond's door. Desmond rejects the woman's pleas, until she hears what her job is. She must go into a young boy's mind and help remove memories of being left in a basket as his mother hid. Soldiers found and killed his mother, but not before she grabbed his basket. She was shot and she collapsed into his basket, crushing him. His aunt pleaded mercy and showed the soldiers the contents of the basket. They shot her, but spared the child. The five year old was suffering from severe PTSD, and it was Desmond's job to remove these memories to help relieve the child. Desmond agrees

In the child's mind, she arrives in a lovely meadow. A sunset-like hue fills the sky, and misty air surrounds her. She sheds her jacket and procedes over a tall hill. Down below, she sees a war zone. The area where the child's family was murders She charges into the child's home, finding the basket. She pulls the child out, and carries him up the hill and into the calm meadow. The sounds of gunshots and bombs can not be heard any more. The crying child stops, and looks up at Desmond. She held him until he fell asleep. Once he was asleep, she climbs the hill, only to see more meadow on the other side. In the child's mind, he was saved, nothing more, nothing less.

Desmond exits the mind and rethinks her motives for thought stealing. Moving out of her lab, she returns to the US and decides her next move with Kiniex and Imjussa at her side.(Fin)
Character Personalities: Desmond is kind, but sarcastic and kickass. She tries to hide her fear and weakness behind her intelligence, but inside she's still only 15.
Kiniex is loyal and playful. He loves spending quality time with Desmond. He's a typical dog, minus the fact he can switch to visciously protective in a second, and his extreme intellegence.
Imjussa is quiet, but also highly intelligent. He is kind and loyal, and will protect Desmond, but not quite like Kiniex.
Length: However many chapters it takes you to write this.
Pointers or any Other Things you Want to Specify: Ummm, nothing really. I'm brain dead, but if you have problems, please don' be afraid to ask.

Yes, that order is free 83. However, yours may take me a while .

Hmmm . . . Interesting topic ^_^! It sounds like something I'd want to read 83.

[Daniel]

Hai!
I notice you've started on 'my' story xD

I was wondering if I could possibly have a look at just the first paragraph so I can post it on his page as a preview?

Sorry if I seem like I'm trying to rush you, I'm really not xD

[Daniel]

Got the Pms

And nuuuu for the no more ordering ;=;

I just withdrew my other fursonas story request from someone else to request it from you xD
Her name's Clash and she's a hyena o_O
-saves the form for future-

Did I mention I had two fursonas? xD
Male coyote (by the by, I've decided on his name; he'll be referred to as "Barking Dog" in future stories when he's older ^^)
and
a female hyena
I have no idea why ._.

[Daniel]

ARG.
Just realised I put only your user name underneath the preview paragraph.
Sorry if you saw that -winces-
-runs off to add a link-

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ARG.
Just realised I put only your user name underneath the preview paragraph.
Sorry if you saw that -winces-
-runs off to add a link-

XD! Not a problem ^_^. We all forget things very once and awhile 83.

Thank you for fixing it, though.