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Re: Look at all the Lights

Postby .Space.Unicorns. » Thu Mar 22, 2018 6:44 pm

Congrats on the feature bb
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Re: Look at all the Lights

Postby ArtGirl » Fri Mar 23, 2018 10:40 am

Congrats ~Teya~! Lovely art! Good luck on the comp!
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Re: Look at all the Lights

Postby sheridang » Sat Mar 24, 2018 1:44 pm

Little constructive criticism. I think the character designs look a bit too busy. Too much going on. I try to focus on the background but my eyes keep getting pulled back to the characters. Details can be really great, even a lot, but there's a point where adding more makes it start going from better to worse. Maybe try simplifying the designs a tiny bit.
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Re: Look at all the Lights

Postby anxious ghost » Sat Mar 24, 2018 2:18 pm

great job man!
might i suggest: graffiti
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Re: Look at all the Lights

Postby ~Teya~ » Sat Mar 24, 2018 2:30 pm

.Space.Unicorns. wrote:Congrats on the feature bb

Ty bb c;
ArtGirl wrote:Congrats ~Teya~! Lovely art! Good luck on the comp!

aCK, thank you, ArtGirl!! Your art is just, SO good<33
sheridang wrote:Little constructive criticism. I think the character designs look a bit too busy. Too much going on. I try to focus on the background but my eyes keep getting pulled back to the characters. Details can be really great, even a lot, but there's a point where adding more makes it start going from better to worse. Maybe try simplifying the designs a tiny bit.

Thanks for the criticism ! I'm actually trying to win the main character in this drawing, as well as this is a scene from the story I wrote myself, so they are supposed to be the focus ^.^ His design kills me sometimes but I can't simplify it because it isn't mine. I'm also not particularly fond of the background, so it's good your eyes kept falling to the main part of the drawing to be honest! Haha
anxious ghost wrote:great job man!
might i suggest: graffiti

Ohh :O I never thought about that? I might add it.
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Re: Look at all the Lights

Postby j e x » Sat Mar 24, 2018 2:37 pm

You deserve it!!
One thing for constructive criticism is try using the watercolor tool for shading OR coloring. ;)
(but it always depends on the style too)
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Re: Look at all the Lights

Postby u w u » Sun Mar 25, 2018 2:41 pm

I love the lighting on this! Its really good, and you do deserve the feature. <3
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Re: Look at all the Lights

Postby halloween3110 » Sun Mar 25, 2018 3:12 pm

wow....grest job! :clap:
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Re: Look at all the Lights

Postby ~Teya~ » Sun Mar 25, 2018 4:00 pm

jexily wrote:You deserve it!!
One thing for constructive criticism is try using the watercolor tool for shading OR coloring. ;)
(but it always depends on the style too)

I love using watercolor for nature backgrounds, but it didn't seem to fit this city background tbh cx
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Thank you so much! <3
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Thanks ^^
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Re: Look at all the Lights

Postby SilverSamurai » Mon Mar 26, 2018 1:26 am

oh gosh teya, you did it again! I'm completely blown away, this is seriously amazing!! I love all the details and the feel of the scene, everything is really great!

Gosh how you've improved in such a short time, keep it up and I'm rooting for you! ❤
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