[ArithMedic]

username: ArithMedic
clan: Aether
myo/items using: 1 UC Myo, 1 UC edit, 2 R edits
coat description: Cream golden charcoal rosette tabby with low white
edits: [nr] expression, weight
[c] ear placement, whiskers, eye shape, pupil shape
[uc] long tail, muzzle
[r] max fur, tall ears
obtained how?: bought

[I Like Bees]

Hello! Couple edits before this cat can be approved:

There is an approximate maximum ear height in Stars! Swishy has established this cat as approximately as tall as you can naturally make cat ears, and your cat's ears are notable taller than that. Please adjust the ears to be a bit shorter than they are currently!

It looks like you've raised the back a significant amount for this weight edit. Cats don't really seem to build up weight along their backs like this (I poked one of my cats a lot to confirm this 😭) and it kinda gives the illusion of some sort of height change. If you could lower the back lines back down to their original height that would be great ^^

And finally, along the back (over the charcoal shading) it looks like the inner rosette color is lighter than the base (since the base is getting darker). Inner tabby color on wildtype tabbies should always be darker than the base coat underneath it, so try darkening the inner rosettes along the areas with charcoal shading! Here is an example of this

Please lmk when that's been updated!

[ArithMedic]

O-o okay I'll get these taken care of in when I get a chance to draw again

[ArithMedic]

Fixed! (hopefully)

[I Like Bees]

Approved and archived!