Re: LOC Revamp - #1 - OPEN

Postby starry--knight » Mon Sep 19, 2016 4:32 pm

Thank you all for the patient wait! After some deliberation the winner is Vraska with Par!
Congrats dear <3 Your form was shorter than normal but held true to both species lore and the story,especially the ending was fitting. Congrats again!

Vraska the Unseen wrote:
Username: Vraska the Unseen

Name: Scumparennu -
Disappearing in Corsican,
Par for short.

Gender: Male

Element: Poison




I take things like honor and loyalty seriously.

It's more important to me than any materialistic thing or any fame I could have.

~Llyod Banks












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Personality


Loyal, Protective wrote:Par is a lion that can and will stick next to someone until the end of his time, or until they do something seriously messed up and break the bond he shares with them. As seen with Genesis, until her attempt at killing him he stayed by her side. Par will also protect those he cares about with his life, it does not matter who you are, if he cares for you and loves you, he'll protect you.

Honest, Outspoken wrote:Par is an almost too honest lion, stating his opinion even if it hurts. If someone needs to hear it, he says it. This ties into his being outspoken, if you anger him he says how he feels and tells you what's wrong.


Kind, Gentle wrote:Par is a gentle, kind soul, not wanting to hurt anyone unless it's a last resort.


Determined, Willing wrote:Par always pushes forward, no matter the cost. He does not like to dwell on things or let his past set him back. He is willing to try new things, adventure, learn, as long as it's with others.






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Where he was


The night was warm, the breeze just cool enough for the cubs to sleep curled against one another. Par woke with a start, the warmth at his side no longer there. "Loke?" He whispered, head cocked. When no response came from the dark still air, the young lion called again, louder this time. "Loke!" His call was the only one to break the stillness of the night, his now frantic heartbeat seeming to keep said silence broken. Rearing onto his hind paws, the golden cub allowed his red gaze to dart about the area amongst the warm rocks where he woke up. But, this wasn't where he had fallen asleep, no, he had fallen asleep amongst the pride with Loke and the other lions. Had he been sleep walking again and curled around one of these cursed warm rocks? The cub didn't remember, but the panic shocking through him hurt his bones. He needed to get back home, but where was home? Gaze turned towards the ever lightening sky, Par was lost and searching. Still on his hind legs, he caught sight of something... glowing, a dull purple glowing thing watching him. The cub, then easily distracted, plopped down onto all fours and stumbled his way towards the orbs. A low, angry snarl came in response to his inching closer, small horns appearing over the orbs, then ears and a head! Why this was another lion cub, and an odd one at that! It's pelt covered on crackling lines, like that of ice splintering when too much weight is placed upon it. "Your pelt is fascinating." The cub breathed, causing the other cub to stop it's growling and sit up fully, head cocked and a curious look to its eyes. It was at this point that the cub was revealed to be female, and named Genesis. "Who are you, where do you come from?" The female cub asked, ever gentle, and curious. "From the pride! And my name is Scumparennu, but you can call me Par." He chirped a response, panic over loosing his brother and way to the pride forgotten.

As his years passed, Par grew and wandered away from Genesis, but remained close to the lioness that froze the ground beneath her paws and killed the grass. He wandered, but kept close to the pride lands, thinking that when he wandered off as a cub he had been forgotten and wouldn't be welcome back if he whished to come back. These were Par's beginning years as a nomad, spent with only Genesis until the day she attempted to kill him. They had been sitting in the shade, calmly talking over a Taxon, when she began to twitch, tears pooling in her eyes. "Gene, what's wrong? Are you okay?" Par nudged her with his nose. She was... cold? Da
Dark Mist rolling from her muscled frame. "N-no, go away Par." Genesis gasped, placing her head between her paws. "Are you crazy! I'm not going anywhere until I know you're ok-" she lunged, her normally kind eyes full of rage and anger as her teeth sank into the flesh of his shoulder. Caught off guard, the much larger and stronger Par flung the lioness off with a strong shake of his shoulder, sending her skidding into the rocks. This only angered the lioness more, as she scooped herself from the heap she had fallen into. Par was scared, for the first time around Genesis he was scared. While these thoughts raced through his head, she lunged for the soft flesh of his throat. Par, snapping from his daze just before she hit, managed to angel himself so her jaws collided with his lower one. There was a small pop, pain making his ears ring and his vision go blurry as he turned and ran. If there was one thing he learned when he was a cub, it was to run. Just run, when you knew you couldn't win. Run before your life seeped into a bright red pool on the ground.

Par ran, he ran and hid from his only friend. He hid until his jaw, having been dislocated and bleeding, healed as best as he could manage. He is stuck with a slightly crooked jaw now, but it's not noticeable and doesn't hinder him in any way. Par, after hearing Genesis was captured and on the prison planet, slowly came out of hiding. He circled the pride, was even there when the lake cubs were pulled from the water. It was after this, after such a long time away, that he slunk into the heart of the pride. He was greeted with awe, chatter, and over all noise that made his heart swell. He was home, they had missed him. But, where was his brother? He ignored the questions, the chatter, it was all a dull buzz as he spotted the ends of a pair of golden horns shoving their way towards him. As his eyes met with Loke's, he couldn't speak, all he could do was look at the lion his brother had become. As he touched his nose to Par's head, warmth spread through him from every hair on his body. The lion pushed his head upwards a bit, simply breathing in his brother's scent. When Loke spoke, it brought a smile to Par's face. "Yes, brother, and I'm here to stay."





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Extras


A poem wrote:
Walk walk walk.
Just keep pushing forward.
No matter the struggle, no matter how fast or hard your heart thrums.
Just push forward.
Run, hide, stay strong
Someone is out there looking for you.

Walk, run
The sun is behind you, the moon infront
Something always rises
Something always ends
Day, night, it's a for something.
Just push forward.
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Re: LOC Revamp - #1 - OPEN

Postby Vraska the Unseen » Tue Sep 20, 2016 3:07 am

Merp! Ty Starry!
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