~Goennec~ Round: Closed

My gallery · by **Desmond** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:43 am

Shall I post the list? See how everyone's doing, here?

My gallery · by **Princess Luna** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:44 am

Mmm, just for record's sake, I'm going for the male fairy ^^
I'm just bulking my form up some before posting it.

My gallery · by **Soccerlvr** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:03 am

May I see the list? x3

My gallery · by **Toadfoal** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:43 am

I think if the first fairy doesn't get much attention I might go for her, I really like the fairies this round! (which is odd, I usually dislike fairies)

My gallery · by **Kit-Kat** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:54 am

Pen 1

Fae (name can be changed)
Female
2'
Naturally colored
Mythical qualities

Goennec Pen #: 1
Name: Fae
How would you use him/her: in the story =3
Define your Goennec: Fae is a loving goe who thinks about only good things but beware when you get her mad her markings glow red instead of her golden yellow. Shes a nature loving doe who dosent eat meat but does not despize others for doing so. Her favorite things to do are : cuddling, strolling out in full moons, rainbows, and april showers
Really girly girly right think again she can get durty if you harm thoes shes close to. ^-^
( this will be the intro to the story !)

Fae looked up at the star scattered sky the moon glowed a pail yellow with no cloud in sight . The scent of freash moon flowers filled the air and sparkles from the pollen danced in the soft breeze as the moon flowers pollenated. Her markings glew along with her wings in a bright golden display , the night was wonderfull and bright in the vally seeming as a fairytail come to life.
Fae sighed then smiled bright she was smaller then normal but tonight she was on on her own the more she though about starting her own herd and family the more vibrant she glew.With a leap the galloped then her wings fluttered and she was in the air shooting off out of the vally looking like a large firebug.
My adventure starts now---

(not posting page one dont want to hog space XD)
Half full Chapter 1 page 2 (re-take)
Trotting into the tall grass a cheeky goennec made a tunnel in the tall alphalpha she sniffed around and started to nip at the grass that brushed his face. A stalk ran across his nose and he rincled his maw then sneezed shaking his head he went back to finding something to eat.
"Aha there we go there we go some dew covered clower brakefast is served" he sproddled out his front legs and nibbled but stoped when something hit his nose. Pulling up his nose he jumped tripping over her hooves he landed on his rump surprized by the doe.
"Oh I'm sorry i didnt mean to starttle you I... I though no one lived here I'm so sorry!" Fae looked extreamly upset she jumped over and pokked him with her muzzle hopeing she didnt hurt him.
Milo skuttled back the best her could being not used to talking to females he wasnt that good at it.
"Oh no noooo I'm ok I just triped not even a bruse on my body" He smiled and stuck out is tongue cockily not even paying attention to her differince from other does.
She looke down thinking he thought she was a freak when she turned and looked at her light feathery fairy wings. Faes ears flatten I sould have known I would not fit anywhere but mystic vally she thought to herself and she started to turn away.
"W..W..Wait! Dont go I swear I'm not hurt did I offend you anyway?" He studdered slightly but looked allmost begging her not to go. Milo really wanted her to stay inside he felt a strage attaction to her but he didnt know why.
She now looked surprized by him "Isnt this yout territory i dont think your herd would like a stranger..."
He laughed when she said that and with a goofy grin he went back to talking " What herd I'm the herd I havnt even been out her long enough for a her and I was about to move."
"Really?..." She looked down and scraped her paw on the dusty covered grount not having much to say anymore.
Milo looked at him thinking he was silly they have just met but he has to ask feeling like something inside is telling him to do so-- " May... Heh this is stupid but maybe me and you.. could you know move out of this dust bowl and start a herd..."He winced up and xlosed his eyes waiting to be rejected he could just feel it coming.
Fae looked at him then smiled witha slight flush apon her cheeks. " I would love to..i..it could be our little adventure.." She looke down felling a bit stupid.
Milo jumped up exited feeling a slight rush " Really! I.. I mean ahem... We can go into the woods im sure there is a good place past there thats not taken" He trotted ina full 180 then pointed with his tail.
She giggled at him after that they headed off to where he pointed as the walked the chated to get to know each other more. As they stalked Fae thought to herself And so my adventure starts now and yet the glass is only half full--

Im not wrighting page 3 you pretty much know what happens ill just change it up a bit

My gallery · by **Kit-Kat** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:55 am

well darn >.< toad will pwn me if ya try XD

My gallery · by **Desmond** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:58 am

My gallery · by **Toadfoal** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:59 am

DarkStarDust wrote:well darn >.< toad will pwn me if ya try XD

(you should sign up for the rp!)

Nu, don't worry! I was only going to go for her if it looked like no one else was. 8)

My gallery · by **MirrorMask** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 11:03 am

Goennec Pen #:
4
Name:
Glidedorein
How would you use him/her:
I would treat him like a a family,get him art,put it on the rp ,in my siggie and care for him with all my heart.
Define your Goennec:
Likes:
Even if he if I trying out for him.I want to keep everything a secret so you have to read.
Dislikes:
Even if he if I trying out for him.I want to keep everything a secret so you have to read.
Personailty:
Even if he if I trying out for him.I want to keep everything a secret so you have to read.
ThemeSong:
Clickie

History:
A "No!Help me!" ringed in my head.I raced towards a cliff side I yelled "No!" my words slip out like music ,blues.I looked over the side and grabbed my friend.I held tight to him and said "I won't let this happen to you." and added "Alone." I slipped,holding he tight next to our face's twisted with mix sadden feelings.In love she fell in too.We held paws and plunged together,....forever to our deaths.Or as we thought
His paws left mine,I felt he slipping away like if I was dieing. I looked as air cut eyes now burning with blur,I was in a whirlwind of brown long feathers.One of a great owl claws shot out of them I yelped in terror then it me I thought Help someone!.But I had no time to think a great talon reached out and yanked me away flinging me towards the edge.I shook my head in a daze and hissed "What!"
It was a male a feather bird with paws and huge wings.
I looked at myself and wailed "Why?" because I looked just like him beak,well not really beak.I pawed my face and my fake beak slided down my neck.
The male said "Ssh dear,everything will be answered soon come." he began to trot into the forest.
I followed nervous and scared .I thought May the gods be with you my friendI looked back and put my head down.
I chased after the male.Following him into a clearing I said "What are we doing here?"
He answered "To train you,I cannot bring you to the nest if you are like a hatch-ling."
I snarled, and hissed "Then let's start."
The male looked surprised and said "You don't want to know about me?"
I said "Ok then tell me."
"I'm Allo, a warrior of Skyflock.We are Griffins and you are one that was formed by the gods."
I said "Ok then why didn't they give me a beak?"
"Allow the gods know." Allo said and then added "What about you?"
"Glidedorein,a young-ling."
Allo nodded and said "Now that we know each other we can train."
I nodded and said "What first?"
"Hunting." he said and then faced a pond,"Fish first will go to ground and then air."
I nodded and carefully stalk my way to the pond.I looked over at the shining water.The clean blue water was home to a single large salmon in a fit.
I reach over my mouth watering.I put my paw in a little by little.Until it could touch my paw.I slapped it pinning it in the small area and they snapped my face into the water.The cold chilling waters and bite into the fish and teared it out.Flinging it at Allo.
Allo nodded and smiled "Good,Good.Now eat will rest here since night is coming."
I nodded and looked at the sky and moaned "A day in the wild with out you."
The next month {I skipped time so it wouldn't be so long} ,I was tried and bored as Allo awoke me.He said "An early start is a good one." I sighed.Timed flied and I was in it.He then said "The nest is awaiting."
I looked at him surprised and nodded.i got up and walked proudly to the nest ready for a new life.I put on my fake beak and took flight.In no time we were here.I landing eyes burning at my feathers.A male with all black feathers and blood-shot eyes came forth and said "Allo who is this doll?"
"Glidedorein." Allo answered quickly.
"Well,well." said the male and then added "Welcome to the nest I'm King.The leader of the Skyflock."
I bowed and said "Good to meet you sir."
"Formal,Allo has trained you well.I will welcome you into the nest go on a portal and when you get back a feast will be ready." King said as he turned around and yelled 'Did you hear me?"
Everyone yelled and began to run about getting ready.
King turned to me and nodded.
I nodded back and turned running and then taking flight.I smiled and thought I have a home.
Allo and some others flew with me.Allo flew next to me and said "Um I wanted to ask you something now that your in the nest."
I said "Yes what is it?"
"Do you want to be my mate?" Allo asked eyes unreadable.Before I could answer.A dragon busted out.All red like if he was painted with blood.It charged,a bloody roared that hurt my ears and stunned my I began to fall twirling like I did with "Him".
Allo yelled "No!" and dived bombed for me.
I looked up at him and smiled.
He grabbed me by the scuff and threw me onto a ledge.
I said "No!" as the dragon bite into his body and snapped him down the spine.Then dropped his limp body.I hissed and and jumped the dragon and twirled down it's neck and ripped into it.The thick red blood drained onto me and the dragon fell quickly like how it died.
I snarled and looked at Allo's dead body.I didn't want to see it.
I heard a yell some what off.I raced to it. I did not want another to die.I saw a large green snake and brown and braze colored Goennce.I snapped at the Snake and flew off and yelled "Get the other!"
A male that flew with me did.In a short time we were back at the nest.I saw King and said "Master we brought,......friends."
King boomed "Food?Or more Griffins."
I said "Neither."
King walked to him.Then snapped "Yeah neither,it's a curse form the gods.Kill it."
Yells busted around me.
The thing yelled "No let me prove myself!"
One of the Griffin him ,it in the back and growled sharply.
King said sounding impressed "So "It" talks? Fine, Glidedorein bring it to the battle area.Release the Craken."
The yells stopped or formed into gasped.
I was surprised as everyone else.But I had to do what I had to do.I marched forward and nodded.Grabbing it by the scuff and flying to the battle area.
I placed him on the Cracken as it the beast from the underworld it's self.I flew off to a ledge away and watched.In horror.But as it ended I remembered My friend and that was him.
Once it was done.I swept in and grabbed him.I placed him on the ledge I was on.
He said "Hey old feathery friend."
"Shut up." I snapped back.
"O you love me." He kissed the air and winked.
"I do,really much." I rolled my eyes.But it was the truth.
He rolled my eyes and began to call for that snake,walking away.
"Will you be my mate?"

Goennec Pen #:
Affected Pen 2
Name:
Snake Fist
How would you use him/her:
I would treat him like a a family,get him art,put it on the rp ,in my siggie and care for him with all my heart.
Define your Goennec:
Likes:
Even if he if I trying out for him.I want to keep everything a secret so you have to read.
Dislikes:
Even if he if I trying out for him.I want to keep everything a secret so you have to read.
Personailty:
Even if he if I trying out for him.I want to keep everything a secret so you have to read.
ThemeSong:
Clickies.

History:
"No!Help me!" My words slipped out like if I was caught in slow motion,I was near death.My little body the one that got bullied and was always so neat.Hanging of the side of a cliff .My skinny small braze body hanged for it's life on the side of the cliff,the cliff I dared to look over.The one which was costing my life.
I couldn't catch my breath because I was panting so much out of panic.My eyes were staining because I became dizzy,I panicked more....
My paws slipped.
"No!" yelled a voice,a voice of a angle, a guardian angel. Gidledorein.....her face filled with pain,the feathery fur on her face was wet tears slipped off like me.I felt a not of pity in my heart and I said "Sorry." our tears crashed and sicked together Falling into many things.Her paws reached out the long shaggy fur touched mine,her natural cold paws touch mine a dusty colored normal one.He paws skin was harsh and hurt to touch but i felt no pain only a bell rang in my head.
She looked at me with her gleaming ,depressed eyes and whispered "I won't let this happen to you." and added "Alone she slipped in holding me tight next to her,her face twisted with mix sadden feelings.In love she fell in too.We held paws and plunged together,....forever to our deaths.Or as we thought
Her paws left mine,I felt them slipping away like if she was dieing.I panicked. I looked as air cut eyes now burning with blur,she was flying covered in a whirlwind of brown long feathers.One of a great owl claws shot out of them I yelped in terror then it me I thought Myths!It has to be that is a calling!The gods save us!.But I had no time to think about it no more.I finally hit something,something that felt like rocks.My stomach turned ,puncture wounds price all of me it could leaving blood spilling out of everything.I tasted the red oozing liquid,a sigh that it met no good, out of my mouth dripping down my chin and chest and into, the scales below.I was up to my neck in mud,in was like quick sand,It felt like being squeezed and drowning at the same moment.My perfect fur was now wild with mud ,stained with the mud.worst was the snakes swirling around me waiting for me to die,but they weren't...well not really.
Some bite into my eyes their burning venom making me blind,my eyes enlarged they stung and drive me wild.They prided open my mouth and forced down my throat,I choked a little and threw them back off growling at they.They hissed and moved away.
Another bite and went into my ears making me deaf the pain wasn't as bad as my eyes but still the thought hurt me.
I pasted out and when I awoke again the world wasn't so well pretty.Everything was a blur.But I had something to help me out, my snake tongue like all other snakes their eye sight is poor,but their tongue senses moment and heat giving a mental picture of their surrounds.Only problem the colors aren't that great.
I looked around sticking out my now and new fork tongue,I got an image of were I was.Still in the pit but free of the mud and snakes.I stand up and tried to walk but I stumbled and fell my legs feeling like jelly.I crawled towards the wall I tilted my head up and flicked my tongue out and saw the climb and threats ,then thoughtGreatI moaned softly so someone could help me.
A rush of wind blew by my body.Making me shiver.It had a whisper in my head with it ..."Snakes,call the snakes"Then it was dead silent and I hissed ,louder and louder until I can feel scales crawling up my back.I flickered out my tongue and saw a outline of a large male maybe green snake.I hissed to it "Find a way up the wall."
The snakes nodded and slithered off me and away,I flickered my tongue out again I saw the snake half way up, it hissed my head as if it knew I was deaf ,back"Cave,walk forward and jump up."
I hissed angry and snapped back "How?I can not see everything perfect!"
The snake said "Smell." he bite into him self and climbed down leaving a scent and blood trail.
I put my tongue out again I saw a bright pink trail of blood marking a stone and cave,I crawled forward.Stand a front of me was a ledge that would probably talk me for ever to climb.I sighed.I tried to stand up but failed falling on my jelly legs.I hissed "Oh why me!"
The snake said "Ssh,come on try." as he softly dropped onto me and wriggled off next to me.
I nodded and tried for the last point before my blood boiled.I wriggled off my side and onto my knee,I took a large breath and yanked my feet from under me,I stand on them ,and slowly heaved up.I was finally on my feet.
I walked forward and smiled.I shoot out my tongue,but to late.I smashed into the ledge and and fell back, into soft and un-hard mud.But It swallowed me dragging me down.
The snake yelped and hissed "Open your mouth!"
I did, the snake crawled in and I fell threw.
I slide down a tunnel ,it was like a slide.We whipped around a sharp turn.
The snake yelled in my head "Spikes!"
I stuck out my tongue and yelped.Huge spikes the size of me laid in front of me.They were as sharp as fangs and wide as a tree trunk.I yelled "Were to go!"
The snake looked around and yelled "Hard left!"
I did almost ripping of my tail.Then we shoot out of the tunnel floated into the sky,until we began to plunged.The snake floated away form me.I twirled my tongue and said "Bird!?" a huge bird with paws shot by the snake grabbing him.All brown with shaggy fur and feathers a break that was fling to half it's face and familiar eyes.Huge wings as wide as a it's self hanged over it hover above me for a split second.Then it bolted off,something grabbed me form behind but my tongue could not help me see it.
I hoped nothing that would eat me.But only time would tell.
My feet landed ,sending a jolt threw my body.My white blind eyes shot open.I forced out my nub tongue and saw a huge nest looking area.A lot of birds,...not not birds a hybrid.Griffins!the thought shot in my head.But before I could asked a female voice said "Master we brought,......friends."
The stop scared me a bit.
A loud evil male voice boomed "Food?Or more Griffins."
The female said again"Neither."
I heard footsteps coming at me I didn't dare to put my tongue out.
The male voice snapped "Yeah neither,it's a curse form the gods.Kill it."
Yells busted around me.
I had to do something ,I yelled "No let me prove myself!"
A growl hit me in the back.
The male voice said happy that I talked "So "It" talks?Fine, Glidedorein bring it to the battle area.Release the Craken."
The yells stopped or formed into gasped.
I thought Glidedorein? Cracken? but something grabbed my scuff and ended my thoughts.
I quickly landed again on something wet and bouncy.I thought Oh no. a roared wreck my ears .I put out my tongue and gasped , a huge ugly monster with rows after rows of spike teeth. I said "Why me."
A big squid limb whipped next to me.
I dodged it in time and bite into it,yanking out a big seafood tasting chunk.
The Cracken wailed and fling another ugly limb.
But I was to slow,I was pinned I yelled in pain for the weigh of the thing.
It chuckled but it sound more like it licking it's chops.
I yelled "But my heart and soul.The venom pulsing threw my body I will kill you!"
The cracken growled.
I smiled and bite again into it's flesh ripping into it I bite hard and then notice I was draining out venom.
The Cracken yowled in pain.But didn't attack it just took back it's burning and black limb and licked it. Big mistake.
The venom poured into his mouth.It made a gurgling noise,and then a big BOOM! the Cracken has died...for now.It's body was dropping back into the waters it was hanging over.
I was going with it.
Until,she came.Glidedorein flew over me she squawked and grabbed me by my scuff and pulled me away and landed on a ledge.
I flickered my tongue out and said "Hey old feathery friend."
"Shut up." she snapped back.
"O you love me."
"I do,really much."
I rolled my eyes and began to call for the snake,walking away.
"Will you be my mate?"

EDITING

My gallery · by **! october** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 11:04 am

I'm going for Pegasus and Cycle, add me to the list. :3

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