WIP of sushi xx by .:Ash~cloud:.

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WIP of sushi xx

Postby .:Ash~cloud:. » Sat Jan 14, 2012 7:39 am

this is a work in progress, please give comments so far and how to improve, reference is on the front page x
Im in a field because things did not go my way
poem by me!
Why did I get involved? does he still love me? I hope so…
I lay down in the daisies, trying to think of something to do,
gifts wrapped

I see a lady walk past with her dog “ these daisies look nice” she bent down beside me and wiped my tears “cheer up” she whisperd “things will work out” she left clasping some daisies, her dog at her side. I rolled on my belly looking at the daisies, being blown gently into my face, surrounding me like a blanket by the wind I plucked one out from the ground, about to strip it of its identity, without these its just bare I was just about to when a voice said inside my head : “why ruin a perfect, beautiful flower when I know he loves me not?” I tossed it and watched it fly away
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Re: WIP of sushi xx

Postby Dizzy socks » Sat Jan 14, 2012 8:09 am

Its good!I would remove the grey from the paws though, and neaten up the colouring a bit.If you tell me how to put in lock-alpha, i will add it to make colouring easier.But I like it!
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Re: WIP of sushi xx

Postby Dizzy socks » Sat Jan 14, 2012 8:10 am

Make sure to colour on the colour layer!
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Re: WIP of sushi xx

Postby .:Ash~cloud:. » Sat Jan 14, 2012 8:28 am

i have and yes, its a work in progress. dont worry i know how to do lock alpha. i will try and add layers in order to do it x
Im in a field because things did not go my way
poem by me!
Why did I get involved? does he still love me? I hope so…
I lay down in the daisies, trying to think of something to do,
gifts wrapped

I see a lady walk past with her dog “ these daisies look nice” she bent down beside me and wiped my tears “cheer up” she whisperd “things will work out” she left clasping some daisies, her dog at her side. I rolled on my belly looking at the daisies, being blown gently into my face, surrounding me like a blanket by the wind I plucked one out from the ground, about to strip it of its identity, without these its just bare I was just about to when a voice said inside my head : “why ruin a perfect, beautiful flower when I know he loves me not?” I tossed it and watched it fly away
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Re: WIP of sushi xx

Postby Dizzy socks » Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:17 am

yeah, i think the markings are almost PERFECT:D
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Re: WIP of sushi xx

Postby .:Ash~cloud:. » Thu Feb 23, 2012 5:38 am

thanks :) i am not on cs much so i might be needing help? :)
Im in a field because things did not go my way
poem by me!
Why did I get involved? does he still love me? I hope so…
I lay down in the daisies, trying to think of something to do,
gifts wrapped

I see a lady walk past with her dog “ these daisies look nice” she bent down beside me and wiped my tears “cheer up” she whisperd “things will work out” she left clasping some daisies, her dog at her side. I rolled on my belly looking at the daisies, being blown gently into my face, surrounding me like a blanket by the wind I plucked one out from the ground, about to strip it of its identity, without these its just bare I was just about to when a voice said inside my head : “why ruin a perfect, beautiful flower when I know he loves me not?” I tossed it and watched it fly away
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