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Redline by Mimi-911

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Redline

Postby Mimi-911 » Sun Dec 25, 2011 12:41 am

Sorry for my sketchiness, mouse kept stuffing up. Anyway I wasn't sure what type you drew in, so I redlined for a realistic cartoony type, my most commonly used drawing style. If you can't read my bad writing here are the things I edited:

1: The legs need to be thicker. The legs you drew were very thin, uncommon for wolves. So I just made them thicker :3

2: The neck must be thinner, unless it's a really furry wolf. You do have to remember there is fur there, but not so much it's neck is a poof ball :lol:

3: The head really needed to be a bit longer and altogether bigger. It seemed a bit small in comparison to the rest of the wolf.

4: The ears need to be a bit more set back. It made it seem that, from where you drew it, the bottom of the ears was right next to the eye, when it should have been a bit farther back on the head :3

Hope this helps!
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Re: Redline

Postby ShadeyPaws » Sun Dec 25, 2011 9:08 am

thank you so much! its very helpful :3
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