[Kite]

This is a definite work in progress of Six's fursona. Having trouble with the face shading (obvioulsy) but I'm not done, so please no harsh comments.

[Bellamy]

aww <3 thank you so much!! This looks amazing so far! here's a better view of her markings, because they're very hard to see with the type of shading I do X3

http://www.chickensmoothie.com/oekaki/i ... =png&rev=2

[Kite]

Awesome, thank you. Could you possibly help me out on the shading a bit? I need some critique are there places which could use less or more shading (on the face, of course)?

[C.H.M.]

This is very good for even a wip and the shading is wonderful the only problem I see is that the jowl looks puffy try pulling your shading strokes inward like the parentheses on your number 9 key (. near the bridge of the nose then bring your shading back out like the number 0 key ) near the middle of the lip so that you make a s shape with your strokes.Everything else looks good so really good job. I am not sure if this was a harsh comment for you or that if I made any sense because I am terrible at explaining things so I tried to give an ex. the best I know how.

[Kite]

It is not a harsh comment and I very much appreciate it! But this drawing, I have decided must be deleted, or drawn over. I was trying to do the Neara, TWG style shading and my mushrooms, did it go horribly wrong

[C.H.M.]

It is not a harsh comment and I very much appreciate it! But this drawing, I have decided must be deleted, or drawn over. I was trying to do the Neara, TWG style shading and my mushrooms, did it go horribly wrong

Aww it is a very good drawing I think personally and it would be a pity if you deleted such a good piece of art!^_^