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You Look How I Feel... by lucy&bibble

Artist lucy&bibble [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 2 minutes
Drawing sessions 4
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You Look How I Feel...

Postby lucy&bibble » Thu Nov 17, 2011 5:58 am

Honastly,I feel alone just like this colt.
He couldn't fight back when they took away his mother,
All that he could do was watch,
As they confined her in a tiny,hot cage
With no food nor water.
Just other horses and blood on the floor.
He was the lucky one,
A kind-hearted man took him in.
But then he cought swine flu.
And died that stormy night.
He ran away from his fears and found a herd,
That only abused him and left him out.
But one day a little girl no older than five,
found this colt and brought him back to life.
Now he stands older than twenty-five,
With his elderly owner in there faveourite feild.
For the last time...


Please stop horse slaughter.No colts or fillys or any horse deseve this treatment they want to be with you...
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Re: You Look How I Feel...

Postby yamideteru » Thu Nov 17, 2011 6:02 am

It's great :) love the poem! But, If you maked the BG lighter it wouldbe easier to se the horse ;)
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Re: You Look How I Feel...

Postby lucy&bibble » Thu Nov 17, 2011 6:35 am

thanks I'll do that I need to edit the horse but I can't be bothered today... lol :)
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