[BayloneRose]

this is my fursona, Thorn
looks like iv yet agian slaghtered another drawing
those paws shall mock me forever... maby i should just stick to paper and pencils

[bubbil]

Please dont, this is very good. The detail on the fur is exceptional!
With a little more practise, you can be doing very advanced oekakis
This is intermediate worthy.


Please check out my gallery if you get the chance :3

[bubbil]

Oh, i dont want to sound nasty, but the back legs are a bit too far apart from eachother, as in the back leg behing the other is not in the right position.

But im sure you will be able to fix that up!
Good job, keep it up :3

[mrose]

Here's some critique, the neck is too fluffy, the tail is too wide, the back left is too far away from the other leg, the ear is off, the eye is too smudgey, and as you said, "the paws shall mock you." but none the less, it's better than I can do.

[BayloneRose]

She is SOPOSED to be overley fluffy!

[Raella]

Don't stop trying Baylone!
Practice makes perfect, and the neck is good, as well as the eye and ear. The leg is a little foreword, but it's not real noticeable. Have I taught you how to move things around?

[mrose]

She is SOPOSED to be overley fluffy!

You never mentioned that, how was I supposed to know?