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Redline by laces

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Redline

Postby laces » Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:05 am

This is the best wolf I've done in a while cB

The green is the skeleton and the blue is the base.
I put down the opacity on your drawing because it looked really wierd, sorry.
I didn't want to write out the tips on there so I put numbers.

1 The muzzle is more rounded, not pointy. You can also (I didn't) make the mouth more defined.

2 The ears are more erect. I suggest you look up pictures on Google from a wolf's side view and study the ears.

3 The neck actually is short and really fluffy and the head should look like it bends into it. You did a good job on this but it was a little too long.

4 The back is sloped and many people get it wrong when they draw wolves.

5 You did a good job on the tail, but it was a little on the fluffy side. Slim it down a little.

6 I accidentally made them too low, but the hindquarters should slope down. They should definately just be a little lower than the "elbow" on their front leg.
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Re: Redline

Postby Alaska. » Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:25 am

Thanks Yelloweh!

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My flow's not great, okay, I conversate with people
Who know if I flow on a song I'll get no radio play

While you're doing fine, there's some people and I

Who have a really tough time getting through this life

So excuse us while we S I N G to the S K Y.

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Re: Redline

Postby laces » Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:27 am

^^ No prob. It was fun too!
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