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Kohaku WIP- NEEEEEEED CRITS by ~:WolfObsessed:~

Artist ~:WolfObsessed:~ [gallery]
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Kohaku WIP- NEEEEEEED CRITS

Postby ~:WolfObsessed:~ » Mon Oct 24, 2011 8:58 am

A drawing I've started to celebrate finding my tablet pen XD
A work in progress of semi-realistic human Kohaku- REALLY NEED CRITISISMS AND WAYS TO IMPROVE~ which is why this is a wip for now
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Re: Kohaku WIP

Postby Oxycaine » Mon Oct 24, 2011 9:05 am

Pretty :o
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Re: Kohaku WIP- NEEEEEEED CRITS

Postby ~:WolfObsessed:~ » Mon Oct 24, 2011 9:56 am

Thanks, but how can I improve? :3
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Re: Kohaku WIP- NEEEEEEED CRITS

Postby BayloneRose » Mon Oct 24, 2011 11:42 am

this is realy cool. the eyes r kinda big; mabey u look at some photos of people to study?
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Re: Kohaku WIP- NEEEEEEED CRITS

Postby rickith » Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:01 pm

The eyes are, yeah, definitely on the bigger side. If you were trying to go for realism, you should probably consider reducing them to about half that size. Also, a human's eyes are actually lined up right in the middle of their head, between the top of their head and their chin. Yours are closer to two-thirds of the way up (or something like that), so you'd need to move them down on her face or add more to her forehead. =3 Hope this helps! ^^
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Re: Kohaku WIP- NEEEEEEED CRITS

Postby ~:WolfObsessed:~ » Mon Oct 24, 2011 8:54 pm

rickith wrote:The eyes are, yeah, definitely on the bigger side. If you were trying to go for realism, you should probably consider reducing them to about half that size. Also, a human's eyes are actually lined up right in the middle of their head, between the top of their head and their chin. Yours are closer to two-thirds of the way up (or something like that), so you'd need to move them down on her face or add more to her forehead. =3 Hope this helps! ^^


Thankyou~ That helps a lot :3
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