View topic - Lost Souls Page Teaser DESPERATELY NEED CRITIQUE TO CONTINUE

My gallery · by **Unicornia13** » Sun Oct 23, 2011 6:57 am

Please tell me your honest opinion so I can start the comic!

My gallery · by **Unicornia13** » Sun Oct 23, 2011 6:59 am

If you comment, I will tell you something about this page!

My gallery · by **-Luna-** » Sun Oct 23, 2011 7:01 am

It's ok, but I think you should work more on the backgrounds and shade it in more.

My gallery · by **Unicornia13** » Sun Oct 23, 2011 7:54 am

It's supposed to be in a cave, but okay

Thank you for the critique! It really helps!

My gallery · by **Unicornia13** » Sun Oct 23, 2011 7:55 am

Fun fact!: The mute black and white wolf is actually my Fursona, Ebony.

My gallery · by **-Luna-** » Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:26 am

Are you accepted charaecters?

My gallery · by **Unicornia13** » Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:48 pm

I'm not sure, but beacause you're the first person to comment and critique, I will accept yours. Please PM me with the ref sheet

Artist	Unicornia13 [gallery]
Time spent	3 minutes
Drawing sessions	1
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