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~cheesie~ [gallery] |
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by ~cheesie~ » Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:03 am
You're a shooting star....I really wish I could think up a shnazzy poem or something to go along with this, but really I'm not a good writer.
Anyways... this is my newest charrie Apollo.
He was feeling rather neglected so I had to draw some art of him. :3
He's supposed to be like a comet/ shooting star.

I'm very happy with how this came out especially the background since I suck at drawing them. X3
Comments are crit. are both much appreciated.

EDIT: Thanks for the feature! C:
EDIT:EDIT:
WHOA! 265 likes.... I'm going to die.... :O
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~cheesie~ on Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:38 pm, edited 2 times in total.
derp wrote: 
Happy Easter! :3
BTW wrote:My birthday was the 16th.^^
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by Toppyrocks » Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:09 am
Wow, simply gorgeous!! For crit- I saw two things that could be fixed, but they don't have to.
Maybe the moon could be a bit bigger? It looks a bit small to me.
Also, on his front legs, kinda right below the knees, I think the canon bone area looks a bit thing, but that might also just be the position it's at.
I love the glow of the star-tail stuff.
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by Chica <3 » Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:26 am
-jawdrop-
Can I steal some talentz please? :3
Amazing job.
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Reaching for something in the distance,
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Release your inhibitions....
Feel the rain on your skin.
No one else can feel it for you.
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by Toppyrocks » Mon Oct 10, 2011 10:27 am
~cheesie~ wrote:Toppy- Thanks.

The moon is supposed to be pretty far off so that's why it's small.
I edited the canon bone; it was a tad thin.
Segie- thank you. C:
Ahh ok I see. Looks good! I really like it.
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