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You're a shooting star...... by ~cheesie~

Artist ~cheesie~ [gallery]
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You're a shooting star......

Postby ~cheesie~ » Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:03 am

You're a shooting star....



I really wish I could think up a shnazzy poem or something to go along with this, but really I'm not a good writer.
Anyways... this is my newest charrie Apollo.
He was feeling rather neglected so I had to draw some art of him. :3
He's supposed to be like a comet/ shooting star. :)
I'm very happy with how this came out especially the background since I suck at drawing them. X3

Comments are crit. are both much appreciated. :)

EDIT: Thanks for the feature! C:

EDIT:EDIT: WHOA! 265 likes.... I'm going to die.... :O
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Re: You're a shooting star......

Postby Toppyrocks » Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:09 am

Wow, simply gorgeous!! For crit- I saw two things that could be fixed, but they don't have to.

Maybe the moon could be a bit bigger? It looks a bit small to me.

Also, on his front legs, kinda right below the knees, I think the canon bone area looks a bit thing, but that might also just be the position it's at.

I love the glow of the star-tail stuff.
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Re: You're a shooting star......

Postby Segie » Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:11 am

Awesome!
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Re: You're a shooting star......

Postby ~cheesie~ » Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:21 am

Toppy- Thanks. :)
The moon is supposed to be pretty far off so that's why it's small.
I edited the canon bone; it was a tad thin.

Segie- thank you. C:
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Re: You're a shooting star......

Postby Chica <3 » Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:26 am

-jawdrop-
Can I steal some talentz please? :3
Amazing job.

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Re: You're a shooting star......

Postby Toppyrocks » Mon Oct 10, 2011 10:27 am

~cheesie~ wrote:
Toppy- Thanks. :)
The moon is supposed to be pretty far off so that's why it's small.
I edited the canon bone; it was a tad thin.

Segie- thank you. C:


Ahh ok I see. Looks good! I really like it.
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Re: You're a shooting star......

Postby Menthol » Mon Oct 10, 2011 10:11 pm

This is good! Good job on the feature.
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Re: You're a shooting star......

Postby horsy1050 » Tue Oct 11, 2011 12:55 am

Hi ~Cheesie~, long time no speak.

I love the blue trail. Very awesomesaurse.
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Re: You're a shooting star......

Postby 1020plinky » Tue Oct 11, 2011 1:02 am

AWESOME :D
I hope you don't mind but I love writing random poems so I wrote one if you want it. :oops: :roll:
I though it up quickly so it isn't that good.

You're a Shooting Star

You're a shooting star,
blazing through the night.
With dark and light,
And a glowing blue light.
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Re: You're a shooting star......

Postby Kheasha » Tue Oct 11, 2011 1:10 am

Congrats on Featured!!! =D
Looks amazing!
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