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Dusk by Cinn

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Dusk

Postby Cinn » Sat Oct 01, 2011 12:53 pm

This is a picture of my dingo, Nova, hunting. The time of the day is wrong, but I could only do a night backround for this piece. I don't like how the backleg turned out, but I may come back and fix it.

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Program used: Chibipaint
Drawing tool used: Mouse
Layers used: Four (4)

Comments and constructive criticism would be lovely c:
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Re: Dusk

Postby originals » Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:01 pm

It's really cute, but it's not quite intermediate. Try straightening the edges, and unsmudging them a little. Add a little texture too, and work on the anatomy just a tad. It really is cute though!
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Re: Dusk

Postby Cinn » Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:04 pm

Thank you for the criticism, this really didn't turn out the way I wanted either. Do you have time to redline this for me? I'd like to learn from my mistakes.
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Re: Dusk

Postby folle » Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:19 pm

Hate to say it, but this is definitely not ready for intermediate. Try putting in lines and details, like fur or eyes. And if you want, you could put shading =) And pupils in the eyes xD But it's still six times better than I can draw on the computer, I suck with a mouse. But I like to pretend I'm good in RL so I give out advice on here. Nice attempt =)
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Re: Dusk

Postby Cinn » Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:22 pm

There are eyes, I just draw my eyes differently from most, people, I draw them like orbs. I also usually don't add lines in my artwork, but I agree with you that this isn't ready for intermediate, the mods can move it any time they like c:

To be honest, I'm not good at drawing canines, I'm better at drawing birds, their anatomy is easier to master for me, even though I still have a long way to go.
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Re: Dusk

Postby folle » Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:28 pm

:Malicious: wrote:There are eyes, I just draw my eyes differently from most, people, I draw them like orbs. I also usually don't add lines in my artwork, but I agree with you that this isn't ready for intermediate, the mods can move it any time they like c:

To be honest, I'm not good at drawing canines, I'm better at drawing birds, their anatomy is easier to master for me, even though I still have a long way to go.


Like I said, way better than my work. And if that's the way you do eyes, cool =) It makes it a bit more intriguing, king of eerier.
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Re: Dusk

Postby Cinn » Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:35 pm

Thank you for the compliment, pupils have never really agreeded with me, so I only use them in my crested finches occasionally. I think I'll stick with MS Paint and birds though.
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