[Mys]

Finished. Critiques please.

[Mys]

Added and shaded some colors. Still not finished but it looks great!

[Mys]

Bump. Fan didn't come out how I wanted it DX Meh guess it's ok so far. Hopefully I'll get almost all this finished tomorrow. Internet went out for quite a few hours so, that kinda shortened my time to work on this today.

[luvdogz8]

IT looks really good (: Just, a few quick comments if that's ok?

1- The sleeve is kinda awkwards and doesn't seem to fall on his hand the right way, ya know?

2-I think the face needs a bit more shape, it looks a teensy bit boxy but I don't know what it's suppose to look like (:

[Mys]

Well on number 1 I do agree. But yet again I'm not good at sleeves or clothing ;U But I guess I'm getting better.

[luvdogz8]

Definitly (:

[Mys]

Lol thanks XD

[kannagi]

I do have to agree the face is a little too boxy and straight ;A;

Like here: (Ignore the comments about the male lips/nose I just used this pic to show you the jawline)
http://www.dragoart.com/tuts/pics/9/209 ... step-3.jpg

See how the jaw is a bit angled? Make the jaw a bit more angled and perhaps make the lips jut out a bit more.

Also, I think the hair is really good and the clothing is pretty good, too. But the hand is a little too chubby if you were going for anime

[Mys]

Thanks! I might do some tweaking later.

[Mys]

Almost done! I know it's a bit of a fail, but it's still good. XD Now if I can just figure out what the background should be...