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Redline for Swiftkill_ by tinydoodles

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Redline for Swiftkill_

Postby tinydoodles » Mon Sep 26, 2011 4:33 am

Okay, you did really well on this, there were just a few things that I noticed.

Tips:

1. Larger, rounded ears - Fox ears are pointed, but they aren't sharp triangles like lots of people draw them ^^

2. Flatter face - The definition between the snout and the cranium is very subtle. The snout should be longer, as well.

3. Larger head - Real foxes don't have enormous, cartoony heads, but they are still a bit larger than the head in your sketch ^^

4. Rounder paws with claws - That goes for all four feet.

5. Longer stomach - The hind legs aren't very close to the forelegs.

6. Legs tucked under belly - The hind legs are beneath the haunches, not in back of them.

7. The tail it widest near the tip, rather than the base - Here's a small diagram to show what I mean:
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The second tail is the most realistic.

I hope this helped :>

~Snickers
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