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Proud of Your Son by tinydoodles

Artist tinydoodles [gallery]
Time spent 3 hours, 16 minutes
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Proud of Your Son

Postby tinydoodles » Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:02 am

Featured!?! Thank you all so much, I would never have dreamed that this would get so much attention!

Lifting his chin, Crookedjaw squeezed past Oakheart and approached his mother. She didn't move as he neared, only narrowed her eyes.
"I'm sorry I can't make you proud of me," Crookedjaw meowed. "But I haven't finished yet. I'll do everything I can to make you glad I'm your son."
Rainflower stared silently at him. Crookedjaw fought back the hurt tightening his throat. He lifted his chin, refusing to hide his twisted jaw. "You'll never make me ashamed of who I am or what I look like"


Text and characters © Erin Hunter.
Last edited by tinydoodles on Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:40 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Proud of Your Son

Postby Wep'keer » Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:08 am

Very nice drawing! I love the paragraph you put with it, too. I so want to read Crookstar's Promise.
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Re: Proud of Your Son

Postby diamonds;; » Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:11 am

    i love this.

    this is awesomesauce
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Re: Proud of Your Son

Postby OceanBlu » Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:15 am

nice drawing! I love that book!
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Re: Proud of Your Son

Postby lolpeaceoutlol » Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:17 am

this looks totally amazing i love it. :D :shock:
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Re: Proud of Your Son

Postby princess pudding » Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:30 am

I just read Crookedstar's Promise...His mother is terrible. Great book, and I love your drawing.
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Re: Proud of Your Son

Postby Pinstriped Pirates » Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:53 am

i hate rainflower... >:(

but I LOOOOVE this pic! :D
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Re: Proud of Your Son

Postby Zwei » Tue Sep 20, 2011 1:23 pm

Eep! This is gorgeous <3

I just past that part in the book ;-; <3 I feel so bad for Crookedjaw. All he wants is fr him mum to be proud <3

Beautiful drawing, by the way. it captures the moment and sells the mood. I feel a hint of sadness just looking at it ;-; </3 It's wonderful, I want to see more art of yours soon. c:

EDIT: Congrats on the feature! 8D <3

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Re: Proud of Your Son

Postby Klea » Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:11 am

Very nice drawing!


Likes

love the line art and coloring of the wild cat!
smoothness


suggestions

maybe change the shadow?


You did great!
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Re: Proud of Your Son

Postby Ki-Mono » Wed Sep 21, 2011 1:59 am

i love it! and i love warrior cats!
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