[BlueKestrel]

my first drawing of a wolf can someone whos really good at wolves please redline this???
comments and crits welcome
if you want to redline please post and say so ill put ur name up there
help on paws, legs and the face would be awesome too

thanks

ohh heres my ref: http://static5.depositphotos.com/100550 ... -Rocks.jpg

[Khirisma1121]

not much to change but at some more fluff around the neck and fix the paws ( no offense) also try making the tail long or fluffier, witch ever one is fine

[BlueKestrel]

not much to change but at some more fluff around the neck and fix the paws ( no offense) also try making the tail long or fluffier, witch ever one is fine

haha yess... ik i failed xD its my first time i need someone to redline it soo i can see how to fix it

[Roonie-Roe]

This is actually rather good for being your first.

I do see a few minor things that could be improved though. Mostly the line of the back (should be straighter and less concave), the face (should be slightly smaller and the muzzle a bit more defined), and the chest (should be less shallow and the front legs a bit thicker). Though the paws could be a bit bigger too (not too much mind), and the nails should actually be rounded at the tips rather than pointed. In the wild they wear down their nails naturally from all the walking and running they do. Right now they look more cat-like.

I'm not always the best at explaining things with words, being a visual learner myself, so if it'd be more helpful to you for me to redline it, I would be more than happy to do so. ^^

[Khirisma1121]

okay, well i'l redline it

[BlueKestrel]

i added both of you

[az.]

*redlining*
I'll have it done for you in a minute if you still want it c:

[BlueKestrel]

*redlining*
I'll have it done for you in a minute if you still want it c:

sure i added you

[az.]

http://s537.photobucket.com/albums/ff33 ... R3QE32.jpg
Hopefully you can see that D:

But you did really good, the only thing off, if you were relying solely on the ref, was make the face a bit more poiny and give it more of a butt. Just keep trying, you'll get really good C:

[BlueKestrel]

http://s537.photobucket.com/albums/ff339/Kaoru_and_Neko/?action=view&current=imageCAR3QE32.jpg
Hopefully you can see that D:

But you did really good, the only thing off, if you were relying solely on the ref, was make the face a bit more poiny and give it more of a butt. Just keep trying, you'll get really good C:

thank you! btw is there anyway you can make the picture bigger i cant see it all that well...