[HWL]

please redline? :3 im looking to improve. Ugh, the tail *shudders*

10ish mins off


HWL

[Sillywolf]

Actually the tail is quite good, so is the head. The neck and torso are a tad skinny though. Look at pictures of real wolves, they're quite thick.
I'd redline it...but I don't have my tablet with me.

[. Delirium .]

I actually love it!

[HWL]

ok thanks :3

[*Ironhide*]

sweet! That cool!

[Violet Stormbringer]

Your anatomy of the wolf is very good! The only thing is the tail isn't supposed to be that 'arabian horse-like'. It's too lifted. The bushyness is perfect, the size is real great, it's mainly the position. ^^

Lastly, the back right leg. Just above the... elbow? knee? ... is too straight. Pretend that leg was the left one, the one you fully see. Looks very awkward. Don't bend it that much, bend it similarly to the left leg, but SLIGHTLY more, since it's farther back. Also, the foot needs to be somewhat (not too much) on the toes, not the whole paw, since the leg is somewhat in a 'walking' position. Front right leg is too high. Lower that a bit to give a stable stance.

Hope that helped! =3

Also, a quick question: Are we allowed to color? I love these lines.

[HWL]

sure! and thanks!

[. Delirium .]

I am SO coloring after I finish cleaning my room and come back from the game!

[Doetch]

I don't care what anyone says I love your drawing style

[Dusty Forgotten]

Alright cool, I'mma colour.