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Redline please? Thanks. .w. by actuallyrose

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Postby actuallyrose » Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:31 am

Only those who know anatomy well please.

I don't really know what to say besides wanting to better know anatomy. Yes, this is a cat. Just ask and I'll add your name. (:

I'm mainly looking for help on...

• Legs

• The head

• Proportions
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Postby toxicfang1234 » Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:36 am

can i color it in? its soooo cute you did an amazing job!!
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Postby actuallyrose » Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:00 am

This isn't a lineart. I'm looking for anatomy help.
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Postby toxicfang1234 » Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:36 am

aww man well it is amazing it would be nice if you oneday made an ediable like this :D
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Postby actuallyrose » Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:38 am

If you look in my gallery I have a chibi editable. I will make a better looking pic someday and make it an editable. And thank you. <3
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Postby .Coyote » Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:39 am

Well I am not all that good at drawing cats...
But I can tell you that the base of the tail starts too low. The tail comes directly off of the spine, as the bones are actually part of the spine.
And the head is a little big, if you are going for realistic. For more stylized, the head size is fine.

edit: OH! And the back of hte head seems... flat. Cat's head continue on past the ears, if that makes any sense XD
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Postby actuallyrose » Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:45 am

Thanks for the tips! I know the head is big, but everytime I try to draw it smaller it looks bad.
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Postby apache~ » Thu Sep 08, 2011 12:32 pm

I can redline for you in a few days if you want to wait that long, but it is pretty good atm!
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Postby laces » Thu Sep 08, 2011 12:40 pm

I can redline for you. ^^
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Postby Midnight[x]Traitor » Thu Sep 08, 2011 1:00 pm

PuddingWaffle just helped me. You could ask her. She's very good and extremely helpful ^^
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