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Redline...? by MalleusGrey

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Redline...?

Postby MalleusGrey » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:10 am

Got a tablet today and I need a little help with wolf anatomy... especially the legs and paws Dx Red line...? Thanks :3
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Re: Redline...?

Postby SmallMediumLarge » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:13 am

The legs are good, but I'd make the paws a bit more curved... that's just me
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Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?

In what distant deeps or skies
Burn the fire of thine eyes?
On what wings dare he aspire?
What the hand dare seize the fire?


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Re: Redline...?

Postby oTterBox. :o) » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:15 am

I See a few flaws I could help with, Maybe, But I'm Not too amazing. ouo

So, add me and I'll see what I can do.
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Re: Redline...?

Postby SmallMediumLarge » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:17 am

I'm not good at oekaki, so I'll just suggest things...
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In the forests of the night
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?

In what distant deeps or skies
Burn the fire of thine eyes?
On what wings dare he aspire?
What the hand dare seize the fire?


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Re: Redline...?

Postby MalleusGrey » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:21 am

sure :3
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Re: Redline...?

Postby Nuregami » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:29 am

I've 2 cents to put in this... may I have a try.? :3
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Re: Redline...?

Postby Jynxed » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:29 am

Would you like me to redline? I`m quite good at pointing things out that others have missed.

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Re: Redline...?

Postby .:Night Fury:. » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:32 am

It's actually really really close to correct anatomy. c: I'll red line the few flaws, if you'd like!
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Re: Redline...?

Postby MalleusGrey » Fri Sep 02, 2011 10:19 am

Sure, sure and sure!
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Re: Redline...?

Postby albinoBroccoli » Fri Sep 02, 2011 10:36 am

Could I try this? My Oekaki is kind of screwy but if I only have to do some fixes it's not as hard. ^^
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