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Pain by *JACKAL*

Artist *JACKAL* [gallery]
Time spent 31 minutes
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Pain

Postby *JACKAL* » Tue Aug 30, 2011 2:39 pm

Comment if you want. I'll start. It's ok.
But it's how I feel.
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Re: Pain

Postby *JACKAL* » Tue Aug 30, 2011 3:10 pm

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Re: Pain

Postby Alexandra*** » Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:25 am

This is really good, and unique. But I don't think it's quite intermediate yet. ^3^

For critique:
I think the eye is too close to the side of her face, and the red on her eye is too bright and dark, and is in the wrong spot. The eyelashes are a little light, and they shouldn't stick straight up, but curve toward the person looking at her. ^^

Other than that, it's really good. I love the colors of her eyes. x3 I also love her hair. Very detailed.
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Re: Pain

Postby *JACKAL* » Wed Aug 31, 2011 8:20 am

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Re: Pain

Postby Get Me A Turtle » Wed Aug 31, 2011 9:14 am

I disagree with so-so on somethings.

Firstly, I believe if you think this is intermediate, then it should stay here.
Also, the color and size of the flesh in the eye is right, but it comes to it's own corner, like a little dip. The placement of the eye itself is just fine :) The color of the lashes is also fine, since they almost always are the same color of a person's eyebrows unless of course the person is wearing mascara. But the pattern of the eyelashes does curve. Personally, I find them very difficult to do, it's taken me a lot of practice to get even remotely close haha. One last thing I would add is that people usually have a dark ring around the iris, it adds good definition in my opinion.

Other than that, I really like the way you did the hair! It looks like you put a lot of time into it and deliberately did each strand.
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Re: Pain

Postby .:moonlight:. » Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:07 pm

i really like the hair on this!
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